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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does the plastic do the environment? what can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

Plastic items such as bottles, bags and packaging is considered to be bad for a healthy environment. Due to the major damges caused by plastics, people arugue it is not environement friendly. Further, the process of disposin these products are not convinient as others. However, many counries collect plasctics seperately with the purpose of recycling. This essay highlights the major factors such as drawbacks of plastics and actions that the Government and people can be taken to minimize the usage.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

A number of members of the public have the opinion that the time when you are young the most enjoyable period of life. Another view that older people are happier although they have more work to do. I will examine both opinion and give my own point of view.

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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

In today's world, people tend to be adventurous and want to involve themselves in extreme activities such as hand gliding and mountain climbing. This essay will discuss the reason to why do people risk their life by indulging in such activities and also provide my opinion with profounding evidence.

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Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people belive that governments should do more investment railways than other roads. I think, it is related to using of roads. In 21th century, many people does not use trains for transportation. In my opinion, politicians spend country's money more effectily if they does not invest on railways.

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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than those in the past, which reduces their activities levels accordingly. Why is this case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?

It is argued that kids spend time watching TV shows much more in the past. I believe that addiction on TV programs is the main cause behind this problem. And parents should set rules regarding this issue.

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In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

According to data, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. there are many countries having problems with crimes and violence around teenagers. in my opinion, in the digital era, teenagers can access many resources about violent content. they can see on many platforms social media and games. those could have a negative impact if they were always consumed about that. For example, there was a case in my city. A teenager commits violence against his friends, who have watched on tik tok about bullying practice in other school. He inspired after watched that content.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Do you think that take a gap before starting university is a good thing? Gap year means taking break from school before start studying at the university. In this essay, I will talk about the important of take a gap year before university starts.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages otweigh the disadvantages?

Do you think that social media is important to our life ? Social media is a thing in internet that you can talk to your friend's or to get the latest news and to have some fun. In this essay I will talk about the advantages and the disadvantages of the social media and going to discuss both of the point view.

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Many rare species are being poached. What are the reasons behind this? What can be done about this problem/?

Without out doubt,nowadays, species which are rare being hunted illegally, and those species are numerous.There are several causes of this alarming trend, but mesaures could certainly be taken to solve this problem.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

The range of obese children in the western community has risen nearly 20% in the last decade. In this essay, I will try to bring light to the main three reasons and three effects of such a usual tendency.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shoppings centres or malls to do their shoping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

These days, consumer's behaviour has been changing brastically more than ever before. Not very long ago, shopping malls are dominated to the small-scale sectors due to a lack of customer flow. I think this is a positive improvement because it reduces people's time and effort. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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The charts below the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The bar chart compares males and females in terms of the proportion of their favourite film types, and pie chart highlights the percentages of income from general ticket.

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In many families nowadays, both parents work and pay people to look after their children. Some people believe this is not good for families. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubts, that some families choose to find employees who stay with their children. I believe, that the phenomenon has positive development and in the essay I will explain the reasons of my opinion.

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Some people think person happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Happiness indeed play a crucial role in people's lives. Some believe that economic success

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

On today's world, the internet and social media are commonly used in our daily lives. We use it to communicate with families and friends, and get news events. There are some advantages and disadvantages regarding this situations. I will discuss about both points of view in this essay.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace thier functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the development of modern technology, more and more traditional services are less popular than before and one of them is public libraries. There are many people feel that maintaining those libraries is not a suitable choice anymore and it’s a waste of money. The reason for this statement is computer technology can replace and outweigh tradition libraries functions. In my opinion, i do not agree with this statement because of some reasons.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country., while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and giye your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that no one can live without money and everyone works hard to get it. While it is a commonly held belief that a few people enter extremely high salaries and, it is good for a country . There is also an argument that others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

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Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, there are various options of jobs and careers broadly available which can make the life more easier for everyone and everywhere. It is possible and applicable to have career today and after few years, you can get other job based on your competency and experience. However, some people believe that staying in same career for long term have several benefits. In my opinion, it is extremely important to try working in different workplace, staffs, programs to obtain more soft skills and also practical activities help the people to know well about the job objectives clearly.

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Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not?

Recently ,many habitat areas are being urbanized to people get by . Unfortunately the wild animals need to struggle with urbanization. I never agree with that , why reason I will explain.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Establishing a new factory is essential issue for developing of countries however ıt must be located in the countryside to protect people’s habitat and the environment therefore this essay will examine why and how ıt has a disadvantages .

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