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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

The range of obese children in the western community has risen nearly 20% in the last decade. In this essay, I will try to bring light to the main three reasons and three effects of such a usual tendency.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shoppings centres or malls to do their shoping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

These days, consumer's behaviour has been changing brastically more than ever before. Not very long ago, shopping malls are dominated to the small-scale sectors due to a lack of customer flow. I think this is a positive improvement because it reduces people's time and effort. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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The charts below the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The bar chart compares males and females in terms of the proportion of their favourite film types, and pie chart highlights the percentages of income from general ticket.

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In many families nowadays, both parents work and pay people to look after their children. Some people believe this is not good for families. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubts, that some families choose to find employees who stay with their children. I believe, that the phenomenon has positive development and in the essay I will explain the reasons of my opinion.

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Some people think person happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Happiness indeed play a crucial role in people's lives. Some believe that economic success

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

On today's world, the internet and social media are commonly used in our daily lives. We use it to communicate with families and friends, and get news events. There are some advantages and disadvantages regarding this situations. I will discuss about both points of view in this essay.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace thier functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the development of modern technology, more and more traditional services are less popular than before and one of them is public libraries. There are many people feel that maintaining those libraries is not a suitable choice anymore and it’s a waste of money. The reason for this statement is computer technology can replace and outweigh tradition libraries functions. In my opinion, i do not agree with this statement because of some reasons.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country., while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and giye your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that no one can live without money and everyone works hard to get it. While it is a commonly held belief that a few people enter extremely high salaries and, it is good for a country . There is also an argument that others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

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Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, there are various options of jobs and careers broadly available which can make the life more easier for everyone and everywhere. It is possible and applicable to have career today and after few years, you can get other job based on your competency and experience. However, some people believe that staying in same career for long term have several benefits. In my opinion, it is extremely important to try working in different workplace, staffs, programs to obtain more soft skills and also practical activities help the people to know well about the job objectives clearly.

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Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not?

Recently ,many habitat areas are being urbanized to people get by . Unfortunately the wild animals need to struggle with urbanization. I never agree with that , why reason I will explain.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

Establishing a new factory is essential issue for developing of countries however ıt must be located in the countryside to protect people’s habitat and the environment therefore this essay will examine why and how ıt has a disadvantages .

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Unfortunately , the world struggles with environmental pollution which are whether from people or manufactory and the governments can prevent to environmental damage comes from rubbish . This essay will examine causes of rubbish and it’ s preventing.

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. comics books radio television film theatre

Conducting communication via media is critical issue nowadays. However the best ways for conveying informations are radio, television, and film. This essay is going to examine to the three ways in terms of advantage and disadvantage.

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In some cultures, children are oftern told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Many people in different countries said to their kids they have to work hard to reach their goals. This essay will explain pros and cons of this statement.

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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

In the subject of celebreties' life, there are some debates which attract a lot of attention.

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It’s time to ban social media. It has been shown that it has made life worse for people all over the world, from politics, to self-image, to the spread of disinformation. It is a social experiment that has not worked and it is time to say goodbye.To what extent do you agree with the above statement?

there is a statement said that social media should be prohibited due to its disadvantages which affected mankinds on the global weather politically, self-image or mislead news which was proven by trials. I firmly agree with this argue.

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Social media has many positive uses, but there have been some negative consequences to it as well. Identify a problem caused by social media and describe the solutions you would propose to address this problem.

Using social network has a advantages when it use reasonably. However, A lot of people use the social network wrongly which is cause a negitive issues, One of the example is addicted and health problems.

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Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive the government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In this cutting-edge era,education is an integral part in our lives.A Lot of subjects are included in education system,which helps to decide our future.Nowadays , society required a specialised people in a particular field.Few folks are believe that society wanted some study subjects ,which should be provided by the government as free of cost . People who are selected irrelevant subjects should not receive any benefits from the ministry.I strongly opine that , this notion has disadvantages than advantages.This essay will articulate a predominant advantages and disadvantages in forthcoming paragraphs,along with a relevant conclusion.

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Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings aremore important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

These days, numerous creatures are became extinction. Some people think that nations and humans must resolve this issue while others say that people are more significant. This expay discusses both view plants and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you Agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face-to-face teaching?

Due to AI being used in multiple sectors nowadays, and this is believed it will replace instructors in the class. I disagree with the statement as Machine learning can’t focus on individual preferences, however, online learning can be a substitute to a in person teaching method.

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