IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 31

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of people consider history as one of the main subjects that should be studied at schools, due to learning valuable lessons from the past. However, some suggest, in the modern-day world, because of the technology's important role in making our lives easier and more comfortable, its learning should be prioritized over the former subject.

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Some people say modern children's games do not develop a wide range of skills, while traditional games can be much better for developing such skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There was a debate on whether or not modern games provide as wide range of skills as traditional games. This essay strongly agrees with this notion because traditional games develop physical skills as well as improve communication skills, while modern games are said to have the same effectiveness.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

Nowadays, obesity among children has risen sharply over the last decade in Western society. Increasing number of overweight youngsters create really important issue for parents. I am of the opinion that the main cause of this is limited physical activity or some dietary habits. This issue could lead to various health problems.

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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

Specializing in a limited area of application from 15 years old was required in some systems, while other schools need their learners to application a wide range of syllabus till they graduate. Both ways have their own benefits , but the writer of this essay believes that learning a variety of studies until leaving school is better than the former one. This essay will evaluate and demonstrate which one is better.

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Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Crime is become one of the major concerns around the globe. A group of individuals believe that, it can not be eradicated. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the statement. This essay will illustrate the illegal activities and preventive measures of it with suitable illustrations.

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem?

In a lot of countries, childhood obesity is a huge growing problem, in this essay i will discuss the reasons for this, and what we can do about it.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of noise continues to generate debate, with opinion sharply divided. Some people argue that noise should be under controlled by some rules. While other content that there should not be any limitations. I align myself with the former view as I believe that peace and silence plays crucial role. The essay will examine both sides of the argument before representing my own view .

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent are you agree or disagree with tis statement?

In recent years, some peple think that the governments should prioritize in railways more than roads. The writer of this essay totally disagrees with this suggestion due to the inconvenience of train and a large amount of money spent on the station.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to control violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this action?

Nowadays, we can see so many films and web-series with violence in it. Huge amount of films are producing, and we find most of them with high amount of crime rate, this affects nagatively on society. I am completely agree with the statement that, government should control this kind of thing in entertainment.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects, in addition to their main subjects. All this believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both these wheels and give your own opinion .

Whether students should focus on learning other subjects or seeking for a qualification. The writer of this essay argues that students should enjoy other subjects as it can increase the chance to be employed.

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More and more people buy a wide range of electrical household goods like television, microwave ovens and rice cookers. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people are loving to buy things like television, Air-fryers and Dishwashers, and the use of electronics hosehold is increasing significantly. Humans are getting more busy in their lives, so such appliances can help them reducing their physical work and can also provide them luxury. In my view, in busy life, this is a positive development.

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Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is immense ‎pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing ‎pollution. Discuss both views, and give your opinion

The debate about the primary causes of air pollution remains ongoing. While some claim that the majority of gases

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Fossil fuels, such ad coal, oil and natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, has been encouraged. Is this trend a positive or a negative development?

In this morden era, many nations are using natural resources like fossil fuel such as charcoal, oil and natural gases. On the other hand, in few countries the usage of different source of energy including wind and solar power is being encouraged. If I asked, I would say that is tangible develpment. My inclination reagarding this laid view will ne discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

From the day that we existed we started looking around us and trying to learn every thing about anything. And because of this feature in brains we made life easier due to our curiosity. Therefore, we leared how to survive and provide our needs. Nowadays, people argue whether science should aim to improve our lives. This essay strongly agrees with this statement for virious reasons.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects at university in many countries. Why is this? What effects does this have on society?

In contemporary society, students do not opt for science majors at university in abundant number of nations. This essay will explore the main reasons for this phenomenon and provide its effects on the community. This is happening due to the changes in the new societal values and mindsets. Therefore, there are various aspects of this trend and it can lead to positive and negative ramifications.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging

In today's world, the amount of waste that is caused by packaging of goods is undeniable, but who's fault is it? the customers that demand for it or the manufacturers that provide these overpackagings? since these two are each one side of a coin we have to discuss both point of views.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A group of people believe in order to bring different individuals from various cultures and ages together, we can use music. I vehemently agree due to the music's simplesity and its common effects on human's mood.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Finding historical information about places where people live can be helpful for understanding the area where it was built and architecture of the house. This desire leads to different factors for example the curiosity of the person, appearance of the building or finding the connection with the past. There are different ways people can research this for instance internet researching or finding archives.

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Students should be taught to read and write using a computer, as handwriting will not be used in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently, the topic of how student read and write is something which bears consideration. While some people think that handwritting should be taught at schools because of its advantage in improving dedication, I firmly believe that education systems should apply computers because of its convenience as well as the familarity with technological gadgets

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With computers and internet , people can study and work without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

The debate over study and work without going to school and company continues to divide opinion , as it carries both notable advantages and undeniable disadvantages , while its downsides cannot be ignored, I am convinced that its potential drawbacks far surpass the benefits.

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