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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

It is commonly believed that sharing too much fact in scientific research, business and the academic world is good. Others think that some information Should be hidden from the public and not anyone can know about them . In my opinion, sharing those kinds of research could be helpful in improving the world .

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Some people believe that the biggest problem facing cities is the increasing number of cars. Others say there more serious problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that the large number of automobile production is causing more problems while others think there are other problems which outweigh the current one. In my opinion, I think other issues such as poverty, health issues and employment issues should be addressed.

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More and more people are forgetting the meanings behind occasions, such as national celebrations. What do you think are the causes of it? What solutions do you suggest?

Occasions such as national holidays, are increasingly forgotten among people. The main reason behind this is the hectic lifestyle of the population, and the solution would be giving more days off for the aforementioned holidays.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Some schools make it compulsory that students should wear school uniforms whereas some schools disagree. This essay will state the merits and demerits of having school dress code imposed on students. Advantage is equality and representation of the school. Disadvantage is that it is less comfortable for students and it is an extra expenditure.

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world is better due to globalisation that has reunited people, it had moved business and interests of nations. There are people who disagree and they are trying to sabotage the process. I agree with people who substain that globalisation is essential for a better world today. In this essay, I will explain why.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that ti is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, after starting studies University education, students shall spend time in their job. From my perspective, I disagree with that ideas and will show the reasons why

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In some countries, there has been an increase ni the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

It has become increasingly common to see that parents in some nations opting to homeschooling rather than sending their children to be educated at school . Although this trend brings about certain merits, it is of my firm believe that they are overshadowed by its drawbacks .

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Some people believe that volunteer work should be a requirement for teenagers in high schools (for instance working for a charity). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

several individuals agree that volunteer work would reqire for the teens in high schools. This writer firmly contends that teenagers need to practise more about the life skills and develop good emotions in the charity area.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Numerous nations have a law and obligation that regulates about specific beverages, however, some nations think by not having a strict regulations is a good regulation. In my opinion, a nation does not need to has a strong policy about these kind of beverages, but the rules of selling should be managed.

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Some people say that the main environment on problem for our time is to loss of particulare species of plans an animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

People believed that the major issue related to the environment is the extinction of the rare animals but the others argued that there are many problems more urgent than. The writer of this essay agreed that the disappearance of uncommon animals is not the most instant problem.

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The world has been an enormous increase in flight for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?. Do you think flights should be taxed more?

Whether there is a rapid growth in the number of international flights for lieusure, business and cmmercial purpose, which the advantages outweight the disadvantages. Moreover, his writer strongly believes that flights should not be taxed more.

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Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. While this statement is valid to some extent, I consider myself as an advocate of this idea.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympic is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether being interested in events which can improve other countries relationships or a waste of money, the main purpose of Olympic games is still an argued problem. However, from prior experience, it is more beneficial to admit that the Olympics is an exciting event due to their benefit that it could bring about and the improvement of companionship among countries around the world despite those who believe that this global event is invested in meaninglessly.

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An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their better halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good?

As technology development advanced, people meet new friends and their partner on dating softwares or apps. There lots upsides be seen but must have some danger behind the screen. In this essay, I will discuss why people addicted to those dating apps and what danger is coming.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food.

n some nations, an increasing number of people decide to buy imported food rather than local food because of varieties of food and better costs. However, this can be tackled by developing local products about quality and varity.

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Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or are forgetting many basic skills. To what extent is this true? Are people becoming so reliant on modern technology that they are no longer able to do some things without it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people by imported food?What could be done to encourage people to buy local food.

In some nations, an increasing number of people who decide to buy imported food rather than local food because of varities of food and better costs. However, thí canbe tackled by developing local products about quality and varity.

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The process of producing drinking water by solar powered bump and filter.

The given graphic illustrates the process of producing filtered water by using solar power. Looking from an overall perspective, this method consists of six steps and is divided into two main periods, using sunlight strength throughout the procedure.

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Some people think that students should learn a range of practical skills at school (such as car maintenance or accountancy) alongside traditional subjects like maths and physics. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

School is the best place for students to obtain knowledge.Although there are already quite a lot subjects in it, some people strongly convinced that there are range of skills like time and money managing or car driving that they should also learn.From my perspective, its a good point, but i would also like to tell about downsides of this idea.

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Many museums charge for addmissions while others are free.Do ou think that the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweight the disadvantages?

Mostly museums charge people for entering whereas some museums dont.In this essay lets see hoe collecting fee for entering museums is an advantage which overweight the disadvantage.

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