IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 336

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, more and more choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In this modern era, there is a rise in people who prefer imported food to local food, which derives from a current trend. However, this can be tacked by encouraging advertising of the local food.

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is said that many individuals spending large amount of time in using smartphones. Increase in the variety and accessibility of apps and online services has made smartphones incredibly appealing. Lack of public awareness and hectic schedule are the cause of this situation. In my perspective negative effects of this habit overides the positives.

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Completing university education is taught by them to be the best way to get a good job on the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important discuss both of you and give your opinion

It is considered by some that is acadimic learning important . While other people belived that having a real experience and improving soft skills is the best way to get a job . In my opinion i think that a lot of people have the same degree thats why student should focues on what can make them special than others.

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Us film instudry has a huge influence on people and it is the duty of government to invest in local film industry to what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, there is a dominance of American films on people all around the world. Some believe that it has a negative impact on society. However, it is a pragmatic approach that government should allocate funds and subsidise local film industries to preserve and flourish native culture and tradition.

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Some people say that it is necessary to possess talent to become a successful sportsperson. Others, however, believe that hard work and practice are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although, its argued that being a sportsperson takes a lot of time and effort due to the hard work. I agree that its an important talent a person must have because of its huge advanatages on individuals.

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Write advantages and disadvantages of cell phones.

"In today's digital life, cell phones have become crucial for everyone . With the ability to stay connected with others, access vast amount of information and has enhanced the flexibility of working life . Cell phones have revolutionized the way we communicate, work and our social life. However, it has some benefits and drawbacks which are connected to our daily life .

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Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and university, either to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

While most of the students are devoting their time for the higher education, some are expecting a break before attending a university, for their personal needs. Despite of its disadvantages, many advantages are there for learners, as discussed in this essay.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argured that foreign tourists are suppoed to spend more money than domestic ones when visiting the cultural and historical attractions. Although it may yield benefits for the local society, I firmly do not agree with this opinion.

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family, we just watch television. To what extent for you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, it is argued that television provide benefits to society. However, some people think that it is destructive to families and communities rather than being involved more with the family gatherings, activities and social festivities, they watch television. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. This forthcoming essay will discuss both point of views.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Arguments appeers among people that phones are not allowed to used by children during school days but other believes on the opposite. Phones in school day can distract children from study, but in the other hand, phones can be helpfull for them to study with many advance features. I believe the use of phones by children in school days should be ok as long as there is a parents control

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Today, more and more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, In a modern days people are too much busy and they don't have enuough time to get married and take a children on time. Despite some drawbacks of this trend, there are obvious benefits as well. In this eassy, I will outline the perceived drawbacks and benefits of modern communication means and explain why i feel this has more significant advantages.

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These days people are using the Internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people believe, that nowadays the benefits of the Internet within the modern world cover all the essential needs from obtaining basic groceries from the market, up to crucial interconnection with society. All these requirements are conveniently covered by contemporary online tools which leave in person contact far behind. As a result, for many people it is complicated to consider is it a positive change or a horrific side effect of world web usage.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

While it is widely claimed that the best solutions is to accept bad situation such as jobs or shortage of money sometimes, others argue that the struggle to improve such situation is better. Both points of view and reasons why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the globe, many populations are thinking that social media such as facebook and intragram badly effect on the community and independents. while I accept that approach is jusfied and I believe that there are other factors which is humans liked that similar platforms.

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Some people think it would be beneficial for school children to study international news as a school subject, while others argue it would be a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that if children study international news at school , this is beneficial for them , while other group believe that it is not necessary to know that and it can be waste of time. I will survey both views as well as my opinion.

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Public celebrations such as national days etc are held in most countries which is expensive so govt. should not spend money on it and on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that government spend a lot on national days cermonies. I agree with this statement due to the fact that celebrations requiers a high cost of money and government should saves big amount on other important public enhancements.

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

Usually, male and female are having dissimilar of strengths and weaknesses. Some people believe that defined of positions of the work might separate by fellow and women. In this essay I will write my opinion.

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too much emphasis is given for education of the young. more government money should be spent to time activity of young people. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Education is becoming all-pervasive in this modern world than ever before. However, thre remains certain discrepancy as to whether the total impacts of learning have been advantageous or disadvantageous to the sustainable growth of civilized society. Whereas many put forward opposite proposition, I hold to the belief that the imperfectness of studying is far outweighed by its practical benefits.

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Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinion in this?

During the past few decades fast food industry has been becomimg increasingly popular among nations. While some people claim that this phenomenon has advantagous influences in people's lives, others are againt this statement. This essay discusses my point of views and states why I do not agree with the aforementioned claim.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single –sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people in several countries think that parents have an option to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. However, some people do not want to register their children to singe-sex schools to prevent the drawbacks later in life. Personally, I agree that children should to know well the opposite-sex. It is because naturally there is a different character between a girl and a boy, and for that we need to explore each others. In addition, it is to prevent a sexual harassment.

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