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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way, while others prefer one-on-one instructions. Discuss both views. What is your opinion?

The majority of individuals think that studying in a group is the best way to learn something effectively, however, the minority of people believe that learning alone is much better. In my opinion, these two arguments have their own pros and cons and all will be explained in detail in this essay.

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In some countries, crime rates are increasing. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done about it?

Nowadays, crime rate is increasing day by day. In most of the countries, people are not having an afraid of doing something wrong. In this essay, we will discuss some reasons of growing crime rate or what will be the solution for it.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

It is undeniable that nowadays youths spend most of their leisure time on mobile phone for a various reason. This essay will examine and analyze both the positive and negative development on cellphone with assisting examples.

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COins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and back cards. DO you agree or disagree that eventually we will have a cashless society which will be safer and more convenient for everyone?

A multitude of people that credit cards and bank cards will change the way individuals do transfers directly. I sincerely agree that transactions which most people do transaction using cash will be changed by e-money because we don't need to go to an automated teller machine to take cash and the trend of buying in an online shop just by handphone is easier than proceeding in a traditional market. The main agenda of the impending treasure is to elaborate my certitudes with befitting examples and end with rational conclusions.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Public health is a major concern in the community. Although many people consider increasing the sports amenities can improve public health, others believe that there are also numerous factors that affect public health. In my opinion, health care along with physical activities can excel public health.

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Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the past decade, there has been tremendous advancement in technology in various sectors of the economy with the effects being both positive and negative. Some people argue that these developments have widened the gap between the wealthy and those with low incomes in society.In this essay, I will highlight some of the ways that technology has created inequality between the wealthy and the poor. Additionally, I will discuss the ways by which technology has narrowed the gap which strongly i agree with.To beginwith, most of the industries are using modern instruments and software to perform their daily routine operations. this is because tools are more efficient and more reliable compared to human labor.As a result, this has led to the replacement of human laborers with machines. A good example is the replacement of unskilled workers who used to pluck tea manually in most of the tea factories in Kenya with modern automobiles. As such, many people become unemployed, and the lack of ...

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People prefer high paid jobs as compared to job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a trend surrounding people priortizing the lucrative job rather than satisfied one . The writer of this essay claims due to ensuring a sustainable life along with the value of living our dream latter , i agree that it is much better to land a high paid jobs.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people are in the favour of students mandatory social work while studying at school. I strongly disagree with this pehnomenon because parents admit their offspring primarily for studies not for unpaid labourer work. Moreover, if community services are imposed on students, they will ultimately rebel.

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3. Some people say that the best way to reduce traffic and pollution is the government to increase tax of petrol (gasoline). Do you think there are more benefits or more drawbacks?

Pollution has become one of the main problems in the whole world. There are many things that affect pollution, such as traffic. Traffic and pollution are connected to each other, the more traffic the more pollution. Many people believe that increasing the tax on petrol or gasoline is the best way to decrease the amount of traffic and pollution rate. The increasing tax of patrol or gasoline brings positif and negatif effects at the same time.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's life. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Yes of course, all people have variety opinion on this topic. Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times during people' life Other people think that adult times bring more happiness than teenage years. I express my opinion when I look at this views.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's modern world, education is the most essential factor of our human life. Some University students want to learn about different subjects besides their main subject. While others argue that it is more important to give all their time to Studying a higher education. In this essay, I am going to discuss both these views and my personal opinion about them.

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Some believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some individuals believe that the old generation's advice is useful for young people. Because they have many experience. Therefore, I think that it is more valuable to advice from both types.

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Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities. Others say that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are argumentative perspectives heating a debate over how to become high-achievers. While some claim that absorbing insights in colleges is the sole approach to obtain high accomplishments , the opposite makes a statement that alternatives have an immense contribution to it. While each has its own perks I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. You will be glad to know that I have discovered the perfect sport for you which is tennis.

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Some say that music, art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, music has a significant meaning in our lives like arts and science. Eveyone has their own view of music. Some people listen to music to kill time or find insparation and some of them even dedicate their dreams solely to the melody of songs.

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Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of society?

In contemporary days, one of the widely discussed topic is the benefit for society from broadcasting positive news. Certain group of people believe that it is, indeed, beneficial for public opinion, whereas, others would deny this point, since there should not be differentiation of news.

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Nowadays, more and more people are purchasing online insted of physically going to stories. Do you think is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the number of people to online shop has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of physically going to stories, it can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay I will try to discuss both positive or negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Humans are social animal, it means that people need people. Networking and socializing is very important for every segment in the society. Spending evenings and weekends with colleagues, some may argue is important. I strongly disagree to a certain point, but will agree formal networking can be done occasionally.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children, so some people think there are lots of negative effects on children, and should ban it. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Children are future leaders of our society. Hence everyone has responsiblity on their shoulders to teach good things and keep them healthy. However, nowadays advertisements are aiming the children for their profit sake. This essay will discuss the negative impacts of advertisement on children and provide the concluding view.

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success is determined by handwork, and luck has no relation to success.providing specific examples and reasons to support your position do you agree or disagree with this idea

In this moden world, being success has different factors between people. Although some individuals believe that success is determined by working hard, it is deemed by others that luck has no relation to success. I completely agree that luck has relation to success.

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