IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 40

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

Today’s universities include many subjects and students can demand subjects to learn, even if these subjects are not related to their main department. Some people advocate that students should learn whatever they want in addition to their main subjects during the university, whereas others argue that students give their attention to learn subjects which about their department.

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Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that planning for the future is pointless and that living in the moment is of greater value. This essay strongly disagrees with this suggestion because planning for the future keeps life in order and preparing for the future life can prevent potential distress.

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Some people say that the main enviromental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important enviromental problems.

In the last few decades, environmental problems have been a matter of debate by most scientists and ordinary people alike. Some argue that the loss of particular species of animals and plants is the most essential issue while others claim that there are more important environmental problems. As far as I am concerned, environmental issues such as water pollution and famine are two important problems.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, customers in many nations can go to the supermarket to buy foods produced around the world. I strongly believe that this is a good development because people will have more choices to choose what they prefer.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon.Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Do you agree?

In recent years, online education is more attractive than traditional classroom learning. This essay agrees with this statement as online learning provides flexible schedule, personalized lessons for each student, and requirement amount of digital devices.

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It is wrong to become wealthy through unethical business practices, even if it helps society. Do you agree?

Whether or not becoming rich with unethical approach is acceptable even if it is contributing to the society is still a debatable topic. The writer of this essay agrees that getting money through that approach is wrong because of fairness and negative impact on other competitors despite being temporary.

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Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society

The question of whether teachers should take on the responsibility of teaching ethics and moral views, in addition to academic subjects, is a topic of ongoing debate. While some people that the primary role of teachers is to focus strictly on academis instruction, others believe that moral education should also be an integral part of their role.

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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Support your answer with examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many people believe that it is essential to have an uniform one language around the world, while others believe that countries may lose their identifications. However, there are advantages of communication and learning , as well as the disadvantages of personality and language extinction to consider.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Buying a home is a primary need and also a priority for some people. In a certain condition, people are not able to afford home and choose to rent a house. In my opinion, I believe that renting is the most appropriate way in order to make our financial more controlled rather than forcing to get a home without enough income.

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many nations, childhood obesity is an increasing problem.

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some people believe gentic engineering is a postive devolpment that can improve human life. others think it poses serious risks to society.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

a growing number of people believe that gentic modification brings serval benefits to improve people's lives while others argue that it can negatively imapct social life. This essay will discuss both prespective before presenting my opinon.

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Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that serveral problems at work come from hiring senior employees who over 60 years, therefore, retirement would be great for them once they are 60. In my opinion, some experiences or knowledges from senior employee is essential for some business while some business should let them retire at 60.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

It is suggested by few that having a lot of money will make individual's life joyful. It is very evident that money can buy all the materialistic things in the world. However, there are other aspects in life which can also bring inner peace. A happy life requires a balance between money and sprituality.

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The values that we learn from our parents and family have a greater influence on our future success than any knowledge and skills we learn at school. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, having influence of parents and family is very essential for everyone for their betterment. Therefore, many believe that the values that we learn and observe from parents and family have more benefits rather than skills we learn at educational facilities. I partialy agree with this viewpoint and will explain some reasons with related examples in the following essay.

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ducating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that state government should allocate their budget to educate the young generation while others argue that oldsters should become a priority target who receives the learning process. I completely agree with this notion since youngsters take a crucial part in the development process of the nations and have many chances to explore many new-fashioned fields.

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THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD SPEND MORE BUDGET FOR FREE INTERNET ACCESS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

There has always been a controversy regarding whether or not a government should spend more budget for easier internet access across the country. Many people argue that the government should increase its spending on Wi-Fi, while many others hold opposing views. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree to the statement.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

In this technology era, using phones, tablets and laptops had become need of every individual. However, senior citizens find diffuculties while using this technology devices. In this following essay, I will discuss the causes of this issue along with some measurements.

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Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product?

While some argue that high prices increase a product’s desirability, price is just one of many factors shaping consumer behavior. In reality, i opine that purchasing decisions depend on a mix of perceived value, social influence and practical needs (brand loyalty, quality and durability and emotional appeal ).

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Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There has been a common view that it is necessary for governments to monitor transference of people for safety while others think that it should be private for this information. The author of this essay firmly believes that although access to people's mobiles can have some benefits, keeping the privacy of individuals is more significant.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that teaching children how to be good members of the community is the responsibility of parents, while others argue no better place to teach this than school. In my opinion, I believe that schools are better for children to learn these values, as educational institutions are more equipped with tools and trained teachers. Moreover, children should have the same opportunity to learn these values despite household conditions.

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