IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 37

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Educating children is most important duty of parents and nowadays, it became a daunting task to decide where to educate your infant. One part of society believes teaching youth at home is a better as guardians can supervise their offsprings everytime whereas others think by sending them school, they can develop their personality. However, in my opinion, school is the best place to educate children and I will discuss reason for this belief in upcoming paragraphs.

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Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family thant eating out in restaurants or canteens. do you agree or disagree?

The several humans believes, preparing and having food at house is healthier than eating in deserts and bistros.I strongly agree the home food is better than outside .

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Some families think the best way to take care of their aging parents is to care for them at home. Others believe that it is better for their parents to live in a special home for the elderly. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that some families believe the best way of taking care of their older parents that they should live with them in the same house, while others opposes this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss both points of views and give my opinion.

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Some people think that teenagers should follow the old generation but others believe that they should challenge the old thoughts. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that some people believe that teenagers should follow the old generation. While it is a commonly held belief that teenagers have to follow the old generation.There is also an argument that teenagers have to challenge the old thinking. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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It is often thought that an increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violencein the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Actually,the prevalence of cruelty in the media causes to growth teenager crime. Today, tv and online resources consist of a lot of news related to offenders and bad accidents. Additionally, juveniles’ minds develop day by day so their characters also change during a maturity period. Therefore, l absolutely agree with this statement based on these aspects.

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Some people believe that students should be given homework every day, while others argue that daily homework is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.?

Some individuals consider pupils ought to get homework on a daily basis, whilst others argue they shouldn’t.Although i understand that children might revise concepts or topics they have acquired during the day , I think there are more efficient ways to do that without overloading them.

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In today's time the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. others prefer classroom education Discuss both view and share your opinion.

In the present era, it has become very accessible to study online from home due to the internet. The internet is making everything more convenient and fast. Some people prefer online courses and believe they are better than classroom education, while others still prefer traditional classroom learning. I partly agree with this view. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives and explain why I partly agree.

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Some people believe that students should be given homework every day, while others argue that daily homework is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some individuals consider pupils ought to get homework on daily basis, whilst others argue they shouldn’t.Although i understand that children might revise concepts or topics they have acquired during the day , I think there are more efficient ways to do that without overloading them.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate going on that talks about how are women paid far less than men in military forces and other related fields , While others think that it's not suitable for women to be in such dangerous fields, However, i will be discussing both opinions and show which one is more correct. For the people who think that women are not suitable, They have that kinds of thoughts based on strong and valid reasons, Overall this argument is supported by the natural ability that the man has over women which will be very much needed in this kind of field where physical ability is strongly required On the other hand , Those who think women are less paid and those kinds of roles they have a very equal argument , And that because women are not suitable for those kinds and yet they still put themselves in that kind of place where it's far more dangerous for a womanwomen to be in, And above that they are still paid less , From that perspective you could see why they're mad about it However...

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the government of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is widely believed that the development of third-world nations could be acheived by improving its health, education, and trades sectors. Therefore, the government of developed nations with stable financial standing should assist these poorer nations by providing adequete funds to improve such sectors. I agree that richer nations should help poorer nation to develop themselves in these essential sectors. This essay will provide reasoning behind my opinion.

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Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future society while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.

The prevalence of robots will lead to a crucial role in predictable society while others think that these technologies cause a negative impacts on the population. Its positive consequences related to facilitation tasks which are prepared by individuals, in contrast robots lead to fear of a job loss among societies. In my opinion, all cutting edges especially ones that replace handmade should implement accurately and fairly on human labor, hence; employers must make a balance between human and technology.

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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this satetement?

The provided graph illustrates data of radio and television audiences in UK, throughout the day in 1992 for the duration between October to December. The X-axis of the graph indicates the time and Y-axis shows the percentage of UK population. Additionally, this data was surveyed amongst the age group of 4 years and above.

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Some companies prefer people to work in the office, while others facilitate their employees to work from home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Even though few facilities offers employees to work from home ,other employers prefer their staff come to companies to perform their work.In this essay I will explore the benefits of working from home as well as, coming to office .

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People should work a fixed number of hours per week and employers should not ask anybody to work extra hours. discuss both of views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is an ongoing debate over whether should people work a fixed number of hours per week or not. Some people claim that by working fixed amount of time one will manage better work-life balance, while others firmly assert that working extra time brings certain benefits and should be considered by employees. This essay will elucidate both sides of this argument and provide a viable examples based on my own knowledge or experience.

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Some people think people working in creative arts should be. Financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people claim that some claim that people who work in creative arts should be Supported by government, others think they should be supported by other resources.

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More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need for printed books magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extent you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that electric devices consider the new path of learning in todays world. While it is a commonly held belief that we do not need spend any money to learn in the old fashion. There is also an argument that opposite this idea. In my opinion, I consider that it is better to think about the future and start to learn in a new way.

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Some people think thatparents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, However, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Several feel that parents have to educate their kids, how to become a good contributor of civilization. However, some consider that this should

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Some people think young people should be free to choose their job, while others believe that they should be realistic and think about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While globalisation brought the advancement of technology, most employers or companies require high skills employees with wide range of knowledge. These requirements lead to a debatable question : did children can follow their passions or response to financial concerns in career paths ? In the following paragraph, I will explain both of those perceptions.

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Some people believe that robots will play an important role in future society while others argue that robots might have negative effects on society. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.

While globalisation comes alongside rapid advancement in technology, robotics and AI have also become a growing trend on wide working areas, especially among young people. These topic leads to a debateable question : did robots potentially come with negatives impacts or positive effects to society? However, some argues that robots have postive aspects higher than negative aspects for humanity. In following paragraphs, I will explain both of negative and positive aspects of robots.

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Some people think that it is important to have a single language as and international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify the countries and cause a loss of culture. Discuss both viewpoint and give your opinion.

Nowadays,many people argue about whether should we all speak one language or not . Some individuals believe that it is essential that all countries have one global language .while others think that it will cause a loss of culture and identity .i strongly agree that countries should not have the language .

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