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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

Luck, the thing, that can't be bought, even with all money in the world. You can't sell or achieve it, but sometimes you can have it.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT SPENDING A LOT OF MONEY ON BIRTHDAYS AND MARRIAGES CELEBRATIONS IS A WASTE OF MONEY BUT OTHERS THINK THAT IT IS IMPORTANT TO THE YOUNG PEOPLE AND THE SOCIETY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Some people prefer to spend much money for such events like birthday party or wedding. At the same time there're some persons who think it's a waste of money. I agree with the seconds. In my opinion you can find better use for money. Besides you don't need spend all this energy for preparation.

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Nowadays, the quality of education is very low. Some people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers; others believe that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that the quality of the education has went low and therfore, some people try to encourage their own kids to insult their own professors. In contrast, other think that it is bad idea and will end up by losing respect and discipline in the class. This essay will discuss both perspectives and also present some valid reasons.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Disscuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in foreign country. Give reason from for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in this era where mobility inter-country is something that can done easily whether to pursue education or find more opportunities of career. While deciding to live aboard sometimes very exciting for explore different cultures and embrace self development, there are also drawbacks such as long distance relationship with family or the closest ones and abdicating responsibility to build their home country.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are a disagreements whether trained professionals such as doctors and engineers should or shoud not be required to search for employment in the country they did their training. This essay argues that trained professionals should be working in the country they did their training. Moreover, in this essay, I will explore both sides of the debate to emphasize my main argument above.

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In some countries married couples plan to have a baby at a later age due to the demands of their professional career. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion

It has become major issue to tackle these days that having baby aftersome time is good as partner get chance to understand each other, however, opponent's think that due to generation gap, it is not better for both parents and children .The following essay will explain the both side deeply along with my opinion .

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In some countries today, there is an attitude that ‘anyone can do it’ in the arts- music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result, people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, majority of people easily get famous in today's world without any talent with the help of interent and technology, whereas, those people actually having talent can not get name and fame in this world. I also agree with this statement as teenage and young people get handsome payout.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some would say that family should teach their offspring how to be good crew of society, while others are of the opinion that institution is the best in this regard. This essay agrees with the latter point and will show that, despite the practical knowledge that guardians give their offspring, academy seminars can give deep insights into what it takes to be good citizens.

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some people believe that, health care should recieve more money to the state. However, others feel that there are another more imprtant spheres which need more money from state budget. discuss both opinion and give your view.

Some groups of individual are of the opinion that, the budget should allocate to health care services although others believe that there are more essential field than health care that they need more money. This essay will be provided both aspects from my own view.

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Nowaways, more teenagers want to become famous actors or singers. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

Domestic and international Investment will not grow as the pandemic will affect the countries with a pandemic. Economic growth is accompanied by changes in the structure of the economy. When there is a disease outbreak, new firms will not have opportunities to establish themselves, as banks will not be able to loan them money. Moreover, banks may face a crisis, for example, the US banks had given large numbers of mortgages to low-income households on deals that fixed low repayments for a few years. During the pandemic, many would not be able to afford the repayments and banks may be bundling mortgages together and selling packages of mortgages to other banks or investors.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era, people have busy lives. Then maintaining good healthy is challenge. Soke claims that exercise is the best way to stay healthy. While others point out that a balanced diet is more essential. I strongly agree with both of arguments. Nonetheless, in this essay, I will discuss both views in upcoming paragraphs.

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Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The environment has had been effected by humanity for millenia. The destruction of natural habitats and the extinction of species are several consequences of mans' devestating actions. Some people think there are ways to improve the situation, while others believe that nothing can be done to restore the wildlife and stop the inevitable collapse of the planet. In this essay, I will take a closer view on both of these points and in the end present my opinion.

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Too many young people and too many old people do not exercise enough. What is causing this ? What can be done to change this ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The issue and perspective of disease outbreaks seem little knowledge before I learned from the group discussion. Furthermore, I was tasked to search and discuss the economic impact and perspective of the outbreak of the virus. I was not used to such a learning experience and I was forced to learn how to search for relevant answers through advanced technology example the Internet. Apart from that, I had apprenticed from my peers where to search for information and relate it to my discussion. Using google search and reading the economics books and journals helps to build my understandings and discussion throughout the learning experiences.

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Some children spend hour every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this modern world, smartphones play a significant role in our life. Numerous of children use their mobile phones way to much. In this essay, i will explain several factors that contribute to this phenomenon and examine the reasons behind this negative development.

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Today, in modern society, fast food is growing and playing an important role in daily life. Many people think it has many benefits, but other don’t agree. Let’s consider what are the advantages and disadvantages of convenience food.

It was a fascinating learning experience during the IIAP learning journey. The cognitive experience was a lifetime learning journey that I will not forget. It involves detailed reading, brainstorming, discussion and respecting each other's views. Before the discussion, I was not aware that infectious disease can be so impactful to individuals, countries or even the world. As I had been through in China where all citizens need to follow the government policy during a pandemic. As the course went on, I had learnt how to do research on the issue through peer discussion and projecting my opinion.

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The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The current lifestyle is easier than ever in the history of humankind, fast access to vital resources, technological facilities and safety in most of the countries around the world, have made people more sedentary and less independent. Hence, I strongly consider these luxuries and amenities prevent people from developing into truly and independent individuals. In this essay, I will emphasize my agreement to the aforementioned notion based on how survival skills are being affected in front of a crisis.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It's said that people prefer to investigate the history and background story about the properties they stay nowaday. There are a few potential reasons for this behaviour.

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We have become a disposable society, preferring to buy new products rather than repair existing items. Why do you think this is? How can this trend be reversed?

At this time, we are leaving the modern era, and for that reason, we are using one-time items, not sustainable products. People are focusing on new products, not on repairing items. In this essay, I will discuss whole things, which is the question here.

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some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports for younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that high school students should contribute to the society as one of the school programmes. On this essay I will discuss the benefits for both society and the high schoolers as I agree with the topic given.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Science is the main field which is increasingly boosting and making innovations in terms of technology. But not all of these innovations are considered good for human being. This essay will discuss the point that science’s main goal must be to improve the human being’s life as scientific hubs are funded by government money. Additionally, other resources of investments are from private business whose main income source is manufacturing of machines to ease human being’s life conditions.

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