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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Topic. Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Methods of studying have been arguably the most challenging situation of a student. While some people think that kids are more suitable to learn by themself, others prefer to engage in a group. This essay will discuss both points of view, and why I genuinely agree that placing yourself in a certain community could provide you with a great amount of beneficial points.

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In many nations, it is becoming mandatory to receive vaccinations in order to prevent the spread of disease. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many countries require their citizens to vaccinate. This is useful for preventing the spread of disease. I agree with the obligation to vaccinate, because it is very good for preventing the spread of disease. From the past until now, vaccination has always been an option to prevent the spread of disease, and this has proven to be effective in reducing the rate of spread and the number of patients suffering from the disease.

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Some employers of their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more ef ective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

In numerous companies, there are facilities such as free membership in a particular sport. While the employers will take advantage on reaching their fulfilled working target, they only waste the capital by number of workforces.

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Most adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games. Why do they do this? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

These days, adults tend to spend their leisure time to play computer games than other activities. Actually, it is not certainly that as we claim, this brings advantages or disadvantages for adults. Hence, I will clarify both sides of this issue in this essay.

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Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this modern age, we can not neglect the fact that global warming is one of the main issues that have to be taken seriously by mankind. While most people think that it is up to the government to solve, others believe that we are in dire need for humans to take part in this problem. This essay will discuss both points of views, and why I genuinely agree that us as an intellectual should drive more attention to it.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes (suits, jeans) rather than the traditional clothing. Why? (Reasons and relevant examples) Is this a positive or negative development?

Today, many people throughout the world prefer to wear western clothes compared to their country's traditional clothing. Some people find it more comfortable to wear suits and jeans, and others just merely want to follow the current trend. This essay believes that this is a negative development because countries could lose connection with their own culture and traditions.

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The Impact of Technology on Traditional Forms of Communication Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the increasing use of technology, such as smartphones and social media, on traditional forms of communication. Consider the impact on interpersonal relationships, cultural exchange, and the potential loss of face-to-face interaction. Provide examples and support your arguments with relevant evidence.

Technology is indeed a helping hand for us all. As years pass by, technology keeps on evolving to its finest, making our lives more convenient and easy as we live. People have different perspective when it comes engaging with technology itself, especially when it comes to communication. Now, let us talk more and dig deeper on the disadvantage and advantage of impleminting technology on traditional forms of communication.

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In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general educational across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrowly range of subjects to related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

Nowadays, national education systems offer various teaching programs and subjects. Some countries applying many subjects for student in secondary schools, but others prefer to provide subjects only for a specific job. In my opinion, whether large or small subject it depends on each nation's needs in today's world.

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Some people feel that playing computer games has a negative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it has a positive impact. Discuss both views

Some individuals think that playing games on the computer lead to numerous drawbacks for minors especially on their health and social skills, meanwhile others feel that it has a beneficial impact. In this essay, i will discuss both viewpoints and give my opinion. Firstly, i will explore computer games leading to children’s illness and aggression moving forward, i will consider the other advantage of playing games.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the rapid developments of sciences and technology, we are

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“Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree?”

The children obesity issue is growing all over the world. To punish the parents of pat children is a ever lasting debate. I firmly agree that parents of obese children must be punished for encouraging the fastfood , ice creams to their children and not involving their children in physical activities.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

There is a movement among young generation in some countries in which they are relinquishing of their right to vote in the elections. In a social perspective it can be faced as a problem that brings hard consequences to countries and their democracy.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary era, social media has growing day by day. People’s personality gradually changing with development of social media. İt is argued by some that social media has changed relationships and society as a whole. I firmly believe that, although social media is favourable for people, cons of using social media outweight the pros for our life.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Some people consider learning English at school an important thing, more than learning local languages. However, people should not take for granted the fact that English is the main way of communication, because through native tongue it is possible to understand in depth the culture and history of a population.

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Some people believe that international trade and communication with other countries is a positive trend, while others think it is harmful to nations and they might lose their identities. To what extend do you agree or disargee with this statement?

Our planet has become a huge village where everything is connected with world wide web and international market. If people only wish they can order, message and even book tickets from one side of Earth to another which only takes a couple of weeks or a few seconds to get desired stuff or data. However, these developments in human connections are considered harmful for several parts of our life in general. For example, some people consider these kinds of improvements may deteriorate local market sales or even for small countries that may lose their identities. Nonetheless, other people find more benefits, and also support the idea of worldwide trade and connection.

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More and more business meetings are taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

There are many advantages to arranging online business meetings. First, online meetings are one of the best ways to save money. When companies want a staff meeting, nobody has to travel and the meeting does not involve any travel costs. Also, there is no expensive fee for booking a venue. As well, employees do not have to spend money driving to these meetings. Second, meeting virtually is incredibly fast and thus saves time. In business time is a premium and these zoom meetings are fast and convenient. Meetings do not have to be held up waiting for late arrivals. Another positive attritube is that meetings can be international. Companies with business offices in different countries can schedule online meetings that can be attended by people from different countries. In the past, this would have been impossible and cost prohibitive. People would have had to book flights and hotels.

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“A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?“

A lot of people believe that the amount of violance shown on TV and cinema influences young generation and therefore it makes the violance number rises significanly. Even though I belive that portaying violance in TV gives detrimental effect to society but I totally disagree that it can cause such an increasing number of criminality in society.

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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, kids prefer to have some pleasures by audio visual entertainment rather than growing their literacy culture. It can not be denied some advancement in Technolgy bring some drawbacks in building children curiousity in Reading. However, I believe some measurements to tackle this issue can be taken.

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An increasing number of larger shopping malls, areas and departmental stores are leading to the decline number of smaller corner shops. What are the advantages and disadvantages

The development of shopping centres, areas and departmental shops make small stores losing its existence. In this essay, i will examine and analyze the advantages and disadvantages of this topic, while i strongly believe that the benefits outweight the drawbacks.

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Nowadays, we are surround by advertising in our daily lives. Some people believe this has a positive effect on society. Others, however, say that it is a negative development. Discuss with both views and give your own opinion.

In the present era, Advertising plays a vital role in everyone's life. It is believed by a handful of individuals that advertising has positive trends for society, Whereas others think that advertisements have only demerits. In my opinion, Advertising is the main key to the development of the present world.

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