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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people are leaving the countryside to live in the cities and the town, leaving only the old people in the countryside. What problem are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, the massive number of people have been migrated to the cities, leaving the elder in the countryside. There are several reason why they want to move to the cities. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant arguments based on factual premises.

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Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. What could be the benefits and drawbacks of this notion?

Certain groups believe that children should care for domestic animals. This essay would discuss the advantages and disadvantages for children of caring animals.

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Compared to our parent’s generation, life has become much more stressful. As a result, stress-related illnesses are on the increase around the world. Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

Nowadays, mental illness is a high trend for younger generations than people in the past. Older generations had so much peace and harmony in societies even with no mobile phone and internet. This essay will discuss the reason why stress is so widespread at present time and also will suggest solutions to these problems including manage time for work-life balance and mindfullness.

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Some people think that detailed crime reports on newspapers and TV can have many disadvantages. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

Nowadays, crime reports are one of the most delectable sources of entertaiment. Gruesome details of many prosecuted cases are shown freely on popular newspapers, and open television channels without any prior warning. Moreover, due to technology moving very ahead of time, even children as small as a 12 year old could has access to these portfolios. However, not all of this leads to a bad ending for an individual, therefore ahead i will be discussing my views on this.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some believes, in oncoming years, everybody will tend to read what they want online instead of buy published newspapers or books and pay. I must say, from my point of view, I totally disagree with this and there is no chance for it happen. Here are my reasons.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some nations, some people believe that there is many advantages to use a huge money on building new railway lines for very fast trains between cities, while others think we should spent money on developing the current public transportation system. While imporving existing public transport can reduce the congestion in the city, I believe that building fast trains between cities can encourage the population of rural areas.

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Although it is generally illegal, physical punishment continues in many countries. Some argue that parents should have the right to punish their children in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

In order to study children well and help them to avoid severe life mistakes some parents use physical punishments. I firmly agree that physical treatments without body damage contribute to more effective parenting and make children better in the future life.

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In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of oil drilling operations in remote locations around the world. this has brought economic benefits to some countries, though it has also raised concerns about the environmental impact of these operations. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answes and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

The oil mining company nowadays has a rapidly escalating number in remote areas in many countries. This has raised financial advantages around the world, thus it has consequently brought massive awareness about drilling effects to the surroundings.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whilst a group of individuals contend the contion that promoting the members of the rising generation to an executive role in government organization would not be a prudent decision to make, others take an adverse approach which supports the delegation of high level positions to the young people. To the best of my knowledge and experience, having young minds pondering on the challanges of today's society can accelerate the advancement of technology, human welfare and education, therefore, I also resonate with the idea of hiring younger people for the senior governmental positions.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

With the technological advancement, scientists and researchers are investigating on various kinds of advance experiment by using live specimens like monkeys and mouse. Some individuals argue that experiment on animals is not acceptable while others believe that important scientific discoveries can be achieved from by engaging animals on experiments. this essay will discuss reason to justify of using the animal on experiments and other alternatives which can be used to mitigate using animals.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things avoiding change.Others,howevre ,think that change is always a good thing. Discussed both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era with the economic downfall most of the individuals believe that everything happens for a reason, hence they tend to live their whole life doing the same thing without any alterations even without having any kind of life goals while others in the community believe that changing the life pattern would always results better life style full of happiness. This essay will discuss both view points while highlighting my own opinion.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

It is often said that the increase of social platform has an impact on individual relationships and society as a whole. Despite having a positive impact on the way people interact, the writer contends that the disadvantages overshadow the advantages due to the lack of face-to-face conversation and an increase in Internet negativity.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that in the new generation or era, people will be more comfortable to read some books ir newspapers through their handphone than buy a real book. I completely disagree about this statement, from this essay I will give the reason I choose to buy printed books than read through internet.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

We live in an era where countries are becoming more homogenous due to the globalization effect and technological benefits. In my point of view, it is good to see that people are mixed with cross-culture and can buy the same products from anywhere.

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Organising a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. What can be the problems associated with organising a large family event and what solutions can you suggest?

A big family is having a ceremony or small brunch nearby, planning a family gathering can be stressful. This essay would provide problems from this topic and also will illustrate practical solutions to tackle them.

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Nowadays, more and more foreign students are going to English-Speaking countries to learn the “international language – English". It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English-speaking country is the best way, but it is not the only way to learn it. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

There is a widespread global perception about learning international english has become popular among students. People believes that the best way practice english in an English-speaking country. This essay aims to delve into provide two dimession of agree and disagree perspective of learning english in specific countries.

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Some people prefer to be in the same kind of job their entire life, but others like to change their jobs frequently. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people like to stick with the one job in their whole life, while some individuals try to do various works. This essay delves into reasons why people choose to do different careers while others prefer to do one job for a long time. In my opinion, trying to do different jobs would be more interesting.

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Some People believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should Ье required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should Ье free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to some masses, professionals like doctors and engineers should only serve that specific areas from where they receive training. However, others believe that they should be provided with the independence of working in any country they like. I personally believe that the contribution of professionals, such as doctors and engineers should not be restricted and they should work according to their wish.

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Today people are travelling more than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

The number of people is increasing nowadays. this essay will examine the factors that contribute towards the increasing trend and benefits that travelling offers.

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Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowledge, while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, the phenomenon of education has become a heated debate,on one hand some people believe that quantety is imoprtant ,while on the other hand we see that guality is the concern of peple toward students.I reckon that kowing less subject ,but in details is a plus for tutors ,also I intend to discus both views throughout this essay .

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