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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?

Nowadays, many countries are suffering from pollution of their environment. I believe exploring the main causes of this issue can assist in finding proper solution to resolve this issue.

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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The classes based on the Inernet has replaced those of colleges year by year. Some people say that classed on Internet is useful as they do not need to go to colleges, whereas others believe that learning in university is essential.

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Concentrated solar power is becoming more and more popular as a source of energy in many countries around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this energy source?

Over the last few decades, there has been a sharp increase in the number of countries which are powered by renewable energy sources such as concentrated solar power. The advantages and disadvantages of concentrated solar power have been discussed in this essay.

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A lot of old people suffering from loneliness these days. They also lack physical fitness. What are the reasons for these? Can you think of possible solutions?

The older sections of society have experienced more than the youngsters. It is considered by a number of experts that if olders devote time and make compassionate bonds with others as well as do physically healthy activities then, they will have a better physical and mental well-being, yet, most of the old masses are victims of longlines and bad health. This essay intends to articulate reasons as well as solutions to this worrying notion before providing a logical conclusion

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Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less control will help children deal with their adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that children must adhere to the instructions from their parents and teachers when some individuals do not think like this. They trust that a child who do not under adult control very much will have the good ability to his adult life in the future. Every perspesctive has reasons that I discuss in this essay. For the strict view, they believe that children need adults that have an early experience for guide their future. For another one, these people trusted that humans have a natural ability to survive in life.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people prefer to have children in their late thirties or early forties. There are certain advantages of having children at an older age. However, I feel there are far more disadvantages rather then advantages of having children at an older age.

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Many person are opting for several career options as compared to a single career option to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The given bar graphs illustrate the major reasons impelling students to study in different age groups and the number of assistants from their employers.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

The provided line chart reflects the variations in the quantity of reports which have received by the complaints department of a one airline over a half year period in 2009. In this chart there are 3 types of methods to send the complaints: in person, by email and fax, by telephone.

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Gone are the days when children dreamed of becoming doctors and nurses – today’s children want to become YouTubers or vloggers. According to a survey of 1,000 children aged six to 17, more than three quarters of them say they’d consider a career in online videos.It is dangerous for kids to aspire to become a YouTube sensation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to advancements in technology and the influence of social media, It is apparently true that children want to develop their careers as Youtubers or vloggers rather than doctors and nurses. However, according to my perspective,such aspiration could be risky and vanish the plan of our wards. I have given my justification below.

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Some people think that the study of history is of little use . Others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

History is but an account of the progress of human civilisation but, however, since the study of it has no tangible benefits like the sciences, many consider it as useless. Contrary to this, others view that man should learn from his past to better the present and mould the future. This essay delves into both these contrasting ideas, ere a conclusion is evolved. First of all, the former opinion is based on the fact that the study of history is unproductive. For instance, history is only an account of man's past wars and conquests. Studying science, on the other hand, is helpful to man in many ways. Moreover, extensive researches and newer innovations are essential for human beings to be able to face the enormous demands of the ever increasing masses. Only science can save the world in future from total destruction. In contrast, the latter view is founded on deeper thinking. It argues that humans should know the paths they have trodden (= travelled) in the past to become aw...

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Many people like to wear fashinable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good or bad thing?

Nowadays, people influenced by fashion world, especially young people follow this and preffer to wear brandy clothes. On other side older people opposed this culture.It is a huge discussive topic, but I believe that this is a normal case. To wearing branded outfits are benificial to make impression on human, but it has some downsides in certain cases.

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Some people are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Now days. It is undeniable that, wole of leader in our self is very critical to enhance human skills. The notion concerning about the better

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Some people think that giving aids to the poor countries has more negative impacts than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To sum up everything that has been stated so. fare, In am strongly against the statement Because of casy to develop, bands, equality and status:America invested in Rusia by rebuild their Infrasturcture & and it became apain develobed in 2010. Serenely, equality can be maintained in then countedies by which they can tabe help in future from other nations in case of amy mishaffening.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era of business and commerce, people's demand has skyrocketed. Consequently, the producer and suppliers have come up with various types of products for the consumers. A large number of people think that when anyone decides to buy a product, he or she are presented with a large number of options to choose from. Arguments championing this statement will be presented in the following.

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In some countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, whereas/ while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.

Nowadays, more and more students are having a part time jobs, some of them are aim to earn more pocket money for themselves, others work to subsidize their families. But is it really necessary for student to find a job rather than study more?

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn that. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is a common debate about who is responsible for preparing children to interact positively in their community, parents or school. In my opinion I am convinced that it is mainly the parents’ responsibility .

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In recent years technology has affected relationships and caused obvious impacts on the interaction between people.

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Title: More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks

The number of people who are eager to get an education abroad either at colleges or universities is increasing day by day. it is obvious that they are cautious with their few disadvantages and I completely agree with this statement for some reasons which I am going to explain in the further stage.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a spurce of problems if it is not well-managed. what are the advantages and disadvantaged of tourism in the modern world?

Usually, it is argued that tourism plays an important role in the income sources of many areas while on the other hand, it may lead to the cause of many problems if management is bad. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of tourism with suitable examples.

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Some of today's schools insist that all students have their own computer in class to assist in their education Do you feel that this would be an advantage to students' education or would it be an unnecessary complication?

Several modern schools oblige students to purchase personal computers to use during the learning process. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.

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