IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 464

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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With the improvements in today's health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some elderly people cannot take care of their own health. It is undeniable that aging become an essential part of our life. Now people are being to realize that old people they have difficulty looking after themselves and need help. Personally, I tend to think that adult people some time needs a little help from other people.

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Solar energy is becoming popular in many countries of the world because of its availability without any limit. Do the advantages of solar energy outweigh its disadvantages?

In this period of modernity, many nations around the globe are relying on solar energy for their unlimited supply of power. In addition, its unlimited availability makes it really the favourit option. Moreover, in this essay I will give my opinion and discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages with a suitable conclusion.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that Governments impose extra taxes on flights to restrict tourism industry. It is undeniable that tourism has become an essential part of our life.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that Governments impose extra taxes on flights to restrict tourism industry. It is undeniable that tourism has become an essential part of our life. However, these days tourism creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, transport and polluted water.

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It is often said that we should work to live, not live to work. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Some individuals often said that we should work to live , while others said we should not live to work, In my opinion , we should work to live life and discover many things . In this essay we will discuss two points of view .

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g.: goods, services, news) Why is this? It is positive or negative development?

In today's rapidly evolving world, there is a growing desire among individuals to accomplish tasks with swiftness, enabling them to allocate their time towards other problems. In my opinion, this phenomenon has two faces which are positive and negative ones.

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In some societies, obesity is regarded as a major problem. Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned. However, others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity and should not be banned. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

There is no doubt that the obesity has been increased dramatically and become as a major problem. It is considered by some thoughts, junk-food advertisements contribute to grow the obesity phenomenon, while others argue that fast food advertising should not be banned. This essay will delve both views and subsequently will explore my own viewpoint.

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Today more and more people wants thing instantly. Why is this?Is it positive or negative?

Because of the high cost of living, the demand of people is higher and higher. That is why most people wants all things immediately. From my observation, it will have a negative impact on human and society.

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The process below shows the procedure through which smoked fish are prepared.

The flow chart illustrates the procedure through which smoked fish are prepared.

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Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in a building as all facilities and books will be available online for all to access. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public libraries only existing online.

Nowaday, public libraries are not popular as they are used to be in the past. Of course there are some left but their number changes in a negative way every year.

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More and more business meeting are taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the trend ?

In this contemporary era internet becomes much more popular than ever. Some people argue that in todays business world employees prefer online meetings instead of face to face and there are several benefits of that as other believe that there is numerous drawbacks of non physical web meetings.

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Some people think that old buildings should be protected, while others believe that they should be replaced by newer buildings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people belive that old buildings must be saved, while others think that they should be changed by modern buildings .

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In some societies, obesity is regarded as a major problem. Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned. However, others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity and should not be banned. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Whilst many think that advertisements of various types of junk foods must not be banned as these adverts does not make people obese, while I believe that as obeseity is one of the most common health issues which people around the world are sufferring from, so there is a need to stop the advertisements related to snack food because these adverts play a major role in promoting this type of food.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In recent years,in many cities,more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.Really,even in my hometown-small city named Zharkent happen it.This situation has two big questions what are the reasons for this?and,How can people research this?In this essay, l am going to give you my opinion about it.

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some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others feel it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

These days learning Languages is becoming available and easy to discover, therefore some people consider that learning should be started from the beginning of education at school, while others argue that education must be started later. This essay will explain will explain why I believe that children have to start education in secondary school and put forward several reasons of this.

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The process describes the process of smoked fish producing

The process demonstrates the steps which is about smoked fish production.

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Writing topic: Climate change and global warming is a serious threat the world is facing, which is reducing the average life expectancy. What are some causes of this? How can governments and healthcare sectors solve this problem?

One of the most threatening issues that our planet is facing these days is global warming and climate change. This problem has led to a reduction in average life expectancy. The following passage is going to reveal reasons to this problem and suggest logical solutions to solve it.

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In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this?

Higher education is needed by many people nowadays which are force them to go to the university. In fact, I strongly disagree with those who feel that tution fees in the university should be free for students for two main reasons.

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nowadays many people have access to compters and a large number of children enjoy playing video games .what are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

ln this modern world, human life have supported by sophisticated technology and comunication. Several teenager relatively 'easy' to use the tools such as computer game in their daily life.

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Some people believe that watching television is bad for children. Other people believe that watching television is educational for children. Which opinion do you agree with and why?

Some people think watching TV is good for kids, while others believe it's bad for their upbringing. Watching TV can hurt their social skills, but it's also a way to learn about societal norms.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can't afford. What are the reasons of this behavior? What actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Income has an integral part in life expectancy. It is, therefore, not surprising to see how it has caused a controversy among people about the main reason of buying new staff they don’t need and can’t afford. Some people think about that popular culture is the fundamental reason of this problem and it can be solved by balancing between wants and needs.

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