IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 463

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's modern world, education is the most essential factor of our human life. Some University students want to learn about different subjects besides their main subject. While others argue that it is more important to give all their time to Studying a higher education. In this essay, I am going to discuss both these views and my personal opinion about them.

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Some believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some individuals believe that the old generation's advice is useful for young people. Because they have many experience. Therefore, I think that it is more valuable to advice from both types.

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Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities. Others say that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are argumentative perspectives heating a debate over how to become high-achievers. While some claim that absorbing insights in colleges is the sole approach to obtain high accomplishments , the opposite makes a statement that alternatives have an immense contribution to it. While each has its own perks I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. You will be glad to know that I have discovered the perfect sport for you which is tennis.

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Some say that music, art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, music has a significant meaning in our lives like arts and science. Eveyone has their own view of music. Some people listen to music to kill time or find insparation and some of them even dedicate their dreams solely to the melody of songs.

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Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of society?

In contemporary days, one of the widely discussed topic is the benefit for society from broadcasting positive news. Certain group of people believe that it is, indeed, beneficial for public opinion, whereas, others would deny this point, since there should not be differentiation of news.

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Nowadays, more and more people are purchasing online insted of physically going to stories. Do you think is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the number of people to online shop has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of physically going to stories, it can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay I will try to discuss both positive or negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Humans are social animal, it means that people need people. Networking and socializing is very important for every segment in the society. Spending evenings and weekends with colleagues, some may argue is important. I strongly disagree to a certain point, but will agree formal networking can be done occasionally.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children, so some people think there are lots of negative effects on children, and should ban it. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Children are future leaders of our society. Hence everyone has responsiblity on their shoulders to teach good things and keep them healthy. However, nowadays advertisements are aiming the children for their profit sake. This essay will discuss the negative impacts of advertisement on children and provide the concluding view.

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success is determined by handwork, and luck has no relation to success.providing specific examples and reasons to support your position do you agree or disagree with this idea

In this moden world, being success has different factors between people. Although some individuals believe that success is determined by working hard, it is deemed by others that luck has no relation to success. I completely agree that luck has relation to success.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, there is a common belief that experimentation can be done on an animals. However, some people argued that experiment on the animal is bad and should be prevented. I absolutely agree that animal will be a project experiment before scientific discoveries are published and announced.

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishments. To what extent do you agree

Nowadays, teenagers are committing more crimes than ever before. Some people argue that adults who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment regardless of age. In this essay, I'll go ahead and explore my perspective and present my view on this matter.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.

It is commonly believed that, wildlife parks are awful for wild animals' house and should be demolished. However, while some argue that menageries can be helpful in defending predatory animals. In my opinion, zoos are useful i guarding creatures.

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Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read any entertaiment books because they think it is wast of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Many parents believe that educational books should be put in first piority for their children instead of other books since reading those books are a waste of time. The writer believe that parents should allow for their children to read what they like and this can promote their decision making skill also help them avoid academic stress.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

In the stage of growing up, it is essential for children to determine the significance between right and wrong. A heated debate regarding whether punishment is mandatory to assist children in acquiring this distinction. I concur with this statement to a large extent. This essay argues in favour of the long-lasting influence.

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The culture of different places are now looking similar in modern times. What do you think are the causes of this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

The cultural etiquette of various places looks exactly the same in modern times. The primary causes of this might be city planners of different economic and commerce hubs throughout the world, employing similar architecture styles, and also, currently we live in a globalized village where ideas travel at near light speed, similarly the culture in this globalised village travels from one economic hub to another, and the successful ideas are emmulated by all the other cultures across this world. I believe this has been a positive trend, as people from diverse backgrounds have something in common across this globe.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children's development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that it is more healthier to do outdoor activities than indoor activities. I totally agree with them and I explain why it is so essential to do this for children.

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Many people spend less time in their homes. What do you think are the reasons? what effects does it have on individuals and the society?

From the initial days of creation, home has always played an important role in people's lives. Nowadays, as individuals get further from their families and their residence, several problems can arise which I'm going to explain them.

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Society is becoming obsessed with material goods like fast cars,designer clothes and flashy jewellery. We have stopped caring about the important things and that is why divorce rates are high and family bonds are not as strong anymore;our value system is disintegrating.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people become more materialistic in these days as compared to the past. Consequently, family cares and bonding are reduced rapidly, so divorce case rates is increased along with human value system break up. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Nowadays, we are living in a throw-away society that is driven by excessive consumerism, waste and single use of products. What are the reasons behind this development? What could be done to address the problems associated with a throw-away society?

Today we live in a world where we face multiple Problems and one of the common difficulties can be addressed is thrown away. Although There are many reasons behind this issue and we face number of difficult situations, but if Proper steps can be taken within shortest Possible time, this social phenomenon can be resolved.

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