IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 463

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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some people say that computer game are bad for children by all means; others believe that these games are contributing to children's development discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common thought that computer game are not good for children in every situation, but others belief that games can contribute to children's development. While accepting the fist viewpoint is somewhat reasonable, I would contend that there are some computer games can help children facilitate.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Today I am discussing what people should do in their spare time. Most the people spend their freeb time in watching TV.

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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their hometown. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Over the last few years, the number of people who prefer to learn a foreign language instead has increased significantly. Although there are several advantages of studying in their hometown. It can have some disadvantages as well. In this essay I will try to discuss both advantages and disadvantages sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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Some people believe bicycles have lots of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Whether riding a bicycle brings a lot of benefits or not is emerged as a controversial topic of general interest . The writer of this essay belives that even though this will lead to the inconvenience especially when it comes to the demand to move between locations , yet it must provide good points due to how it improve one's health and reduce the pollution inside the city.

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Some parents think children should have mobile phones others disagree. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in every field, especially communication sector. A large number of people say that Smartphones are kept by children while others opine that it is harm to kids. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family>

Some society believe that having a small family brings more benefits than a large family, while others argue a large family has more advantages. To my view, having a small family bring less conflict and economic beneficial, so relate on these day.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, In several countries around the world the ratio of young public is significantly higher in numbers as compared to the public who is more elder in age. I believe there advantages exceed the disadvantages and i will explain further in this essay.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have dissapeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this solution?

The tendency in world to not celebrate specific days is making us live like each other with no differences. In order to solve this problem, the governments may want to protect the social and historical impacts of their subjects and the youth should be informed about certain beliefs and customs in their country.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are groups of people who thinks that it is a good thing to exchange findings and information of scientific research, new business ideas and projects and also new study proposals to the world. Whereas, some assert that there is also some crucial information that can't be good to share with public. I Agree with later viewpoint because some information is to important so its not a good idea to shared openly.

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Many museums charge for admissions while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, museums are well-known for people of all ages because there are many kinds of museums, such as history and art. While some argue that museums are charging for people, I will discuss some of the reasons why museums are free and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many think that travellers ought to comply the behaviour patterns and unwritten rules of the destination they go because it shows the true self of the place, while others say the receiving nation ought to comply nonsimilar acts and beliefs to maintain the tourist attraction. I belive visitors do not need to follow the norms of the place they travel because it encourages us to travel more.

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Some people say its lot to tell about a person’s culture and character from their clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

there are different culture in the world that it describe about people .every culture have specially

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People are having more and more sugar drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

Nowadays, humanity have new addication in the face of a sugar drinks. For that are several reasons, the main one is the fact that people may have to start obsession over sugar, becauses it is get energy and serotonin boost. First of all, goverment should take under control drink production and the amount of sugar that is added. However, it is not enough, and there should be campaigns with social advertisement which is dedicated to motivate people drink less sugar drinks.

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Some people think that dancing is an important subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.What are positive and negative sides of art at school?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience or knowledge. Write about 180-220 words.

In today's fast-paced world, individuals hold diverse opinions on wide range of topics. The issue of dancing as an vital subject that should be included in school curriculum, opinions are divided, with some supporting it and others oppose it. The positive effects of including this subject at school is that it act as an physical exercise for students and it also help certain scholars to have their career from this subject. On the other hand, the negative effects are lack on concentration on major subjects, along with this learners can face more stressful life.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

The legality of rejecting job applicants based on their age varies from country to country. In some places, laws prohibit to make a discrimination in employement practices in order to make a fair and equal enough in the working environemnet.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition totheir main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that some students believe that invest all their time to learn main subjects encourage them for a better qualification, somehow, I strongly hold the view that students should pay attention to all subjects equally.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Global citizens throughout this planet have a tendency to take beneficial features of high-tach facilities in order to maintain contact with friends or relatives, moreover is get latest data through online newspaper. This writer is completely agrees with the mentioned viewpoint and will explain why during the essays.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the dis advantages?

Social media are being used every day to contact with people in around the world and keep track of new events. This writer believes that the advantages include keep in touch with other people and entertaining outweigh it disadvantages is leading to the laziness of it users.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam" How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage p

In modern era , usage of car has skyrocketed. People having car has increased drastically in the span of thirty years and it lead to a problem of big traffic jams in numerous metero cities all over the world. If questioned, I think it is true to a large extent. My position is further elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs with valid examples and explainations as well as some precautions that the authorities can take to dismotivate individuals from driving their own cars.

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Some people think that punishment is the best way of teaching children to behave well. Others believe that it is better to reward children for good be haviour. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common thought that punishment is the best way to teach children for good behavior, but the others belief that give children present when they have good behavior. While there are admitted several benefit when punish childrent for teaching children, but I believe that the best way to teach them is give children their reward for their behave well.

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