IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 463

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Technology is destroying social interactions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely affirmed that technology advancements have been tearing apart social bonds for the last decade. While digital communication has permitted to entail relationships across the boarder, it definetly compelled people to relay entirely on their digital devices (cellphones and computers). This essay agrees partially with this statement. Furthermore, I will dwell upon the reasons of why I think its necessary to strike a balance between face-to-face interactions and digital ones.

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We are becoming more and more dependent on machines to function in the modern world. Some people think it is a very negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

undoubtedly, in today's era the function of machine is increasing rapidly due to that masses are becoming dependent on that for the daily things. Number of people recognise as negative development. i agree with this statement but having some other opnion too which will be discussing in future paragraphs.

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The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What problems does this cause and what are some solutions to these problems?

Cars are one of the essential inventions that play a great role in our lives today. We can not imagine living without them a single day as they are used for trasportation and travelling, especially in major cities, so the amount of cars in megapolises are increasing day by day but how does this affect on our lives?

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Television sports program shows such Olympic are a good source of motivation for youths who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree include examples in your answer and provide your owns opinion.

Youths is motivated to do workout due to sports program on television such Olympic. I highly agree with this notion as more people do workout in daily basis including youths. This essay will elaborates more with some examples.

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Some people think it is important for children to take lessons outside classroom, for example by visiting places such as local companies or public buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals believe in providing outside learning by visiting to commercial establishments and public buildings. I totally agree with this because it exposed students to a great deal of knowledge. This essay will discuss how practical knowledge outweighs mere class learning.

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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way, while others prefer one-on-one instructions. Discuss both views. What is your opinion?

The majority of individuals think that studying in a group is the best way to learn something effectively, however, the minority of people believe that learning alone is much better. In my opinion, these two arguments have their own pros and cons and all will be explained in detail in this essay.

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In some countries, crime rates are increasing. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done about it?

Nowadays, crime rate is increasing day by day. In most of the countries, people are not having an afraid of doing something wrong. In this essay, we will discuss some reasons of growing crime rate or what will be the solution for it.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

It is undeniable that nowadays youths spend most of their leisure time on mobile phone for a various reason. This essay will examine and analyze both the positive and negative development on cellphone with assisting examples.

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COins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and back cards. DO you agree or disagree that eventually we will have a cashless society which will be safer and more convenient for everyone?

A multitude of people that credit cards and bank cards will change the way individuals do transfers directly. I sincerely agree that transactions which most people do transaction using cash will be changed by e-money because we don't need to go to an automated teller machine to take cash and the trend of buying in an online shop just by handphone is easier than proceeding in a traditional market. The main agenda of the impending treasure is to elaborate my certitudes with befitting examples and end with rational conclusions.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Public health is a major concern in the community. Although many people consider increasing the sports amenities can improve public health, others believe that there are also numerous factors that affect public health. In my opinion, health care along with physical activities can excel public health.

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Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the past decade, there has been tremendous advancement in technology in various sectors of the economy with the effects being both positive and negative. Some people argue that these developments have widened the gap between the wealthy and those with low incomes in society.In this essay, I will highlight some of the ways that technology has created inequality between the wealthy and the poor. Additionally, I will discuss the ways by which technology has narrowed the gap which strongly i agree with.To beginwith, most of the industries are using modern instruments and software to perform their daily routine operations. this is because tools are more efficient and more reliable compared to human labor.As a result, this has led to the replacement of human laborers with machines. A good example is the replacement of unskilled workers who used to pluck tea manually in most of the tea factories in Kenya with modern automobiles. As such, many people become unemployed, and the lack of ...

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People prefer high paid jobs as compared to job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a trend surrounding people priortizing the lucrative job rather than satisfied one . The writer of this essay claims due to ensuring a sustainable life along with the value of living our dream latter , i agree that it is much better to land a high paid jobs.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people are in the favour of students mandatory social work while studying at school. I strongly disagree with this pehnomenon because parents admit their offspring primarily for studies not for unpaid labourer work. Moreover, if community services are imposed on students, they will ultimately rebel.

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3. Some people say that the best way to reduce traffic and pollution is the government to increase tax of petrol (gasoline). Do you think there are more benefits or more drawbacks?

Pollution has become one of the main problems in the whole world. There are many things that affect pollution, such as traffic. Traffic and pollution are connected to each other, the more traffic the more pollution. Many people believe that increasing the tax on petrol or gasoline is the best way to decrease the amount of traffic and pollution rate. The increasing tax of patrol or gasoline brings positif and negatif effects at the same time.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's life. Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Yes of course, all people have variety opinion on this topic. Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times during people' life Other people think that adult times bring more happiness than teenage years. I express my opinion when I look at this views.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's modern world, education is the most essential factor of our human life. Some University students want to learn about different subjects besides their main subject. While others argue that it is more important to give all their time to Studying a higher education. In this essay, I am going to discuss both these views and my personal opinion about them.

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Some believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some individuals believe that the old generation's advice is useful for young people. Because they have many experience. Therefore, I think that it is more valuable to advice from both types.

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Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities. Others say that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are argumentative perspectives heating a debate over how to become high-achievers. While some claim that absorbing insights in colleges is the sole approach to obtain high accomplishments , the opposite makes a statement that alternatives have an immense contribution to it. While each has its own perks I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. You will be glad to know that I have discovered the perfect sport for you which is tennis.

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Some say that music, art, and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, music has a significant meaning in our lives like arts and science. Eveyone has their own view of music. Some people listen to music to kill time or find insparation and some of them even dedicate their dreams solely to the melody of songs.

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