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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing? Give some reasons and solutions for it.

The two maps illustrate the industrial area now and planned future modernization of this place in the town of Norbiton.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage ,even if it does not appeal to you at all.I completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more important than salary.

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“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although It is a great idea to educate people about their healthcare and well being ,however spending a big part of medical fund for this purpose can be challenging for both health care professionals and public. I disagree with the opinion of spending a big part of money reserved for medical emergencies, on health education.

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A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages?

This is undoubtedly true that technology occupied a big share of our day-to-day routine. I completely agree with this notion which will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

The opening statement explains that the impact of people's behavior on the world’s ecosystem is causing the candidate species and loss of bio-diversity.I will write this essay about these problems and possible solutions.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The opening statement explains that the administration spending money in art, music, and stage games is not useful spending money. Administration should pay this money for public services.

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One problem face by almost every larger city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

In today's fast-paced era, People have become independent nowadays. As a result, Almost all nations are facing the essential concern of traffic congestion, which requires immediate attention to reduce its effect on routine life. In the following paragraphs, I shall delve into its causes and solutions.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As population inceased rapidly in the last few decades, new bussiness idears are also created. Between all the businesses they will compete for more customers which introduce advertising, one of all business's methode to gain customers, but is advertisin acturally a positive development or negative?

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Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that rising tax on different industries leads to lower exhaust fumes and emissions, while there are others who think that the problem can be tackled by other ways. Increasing the mandatory amount of money which factories pay May result in them being less productive and other approaches to pollution problems might not be largely efficient, but I firmly believe that alternative ways would be a better choice.

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In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on families, individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

The given table compares the percentage of cellphone users using different phone features in 2006, 2008 and 2010.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time .This can benefit teenageers and the community as well .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people nowadays believe that the younger generation should volunteer for free in their spare time, which would benefit society. from my point of view, I agree whit this idea for many reasons, as described in the following paragraphs.

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In many country average weight of the people increasing and fitness levels are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of problems and what measures could be taken solve them?

In recent times, a majority of countries are witnessing not only a high in the average weight of the individuals but also a low in their level of fiteness.This essay will discuss certain reasons and highlight the solutions for this emerging trend.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed.

Yearly many people go to jail because of involving in criminal activities, and some of them will get a hefty punishment such as death but some people think slaughtering prisoners like this is not the best idea while other factors can work on them. I think for some crimes like rape, the death sentence is needed and I will talk more about it in this essay. On the one hand, the death penalty was always used for abysmal crimes which are not acceptable for that community and they do not want to see those people another time walking on the Earth. Thus, judges and police before accepting the death sentence for that person should investigate perfectly to make sure about what he or she did. In my opinion, for some crimes such as gunshots, rape and terror, harsh punishments are essential to make sure these actions will not happen again. For example, if someone kills another person, who can guarantee this guy is a good person right now and he is not going to do that again. On the ot...

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Having a balance on our diet and eating healthy food is always good to keep our body safe and strong while some people believe exercising is the most important. In my opinion, our body needs more exercise and physical activities to stay healthy than a balanced diet which you will read about it in this essay.

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In many countries, the numbers of juvenile crimes are increasing. What are the causes? How can parents and teachers help prevent youth crime?

It can be assumed that youth are involved in adults crimes. While life is developing in some cities, some individuals they are committing violance. I am of the belief the culture and the surrounding people have an impact on children attitude. The causes will be discuessed in the next lines.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve any thing if they try hard enough

In the present era, in some cultures children are told that they can achieve any thing through hard work. This message has some pros and some cons. Here below in the following paragraph i will dicuss some reasons of this message advantages and disadvantages.

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Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness. Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views. and give your opinion.

Money is very important for the survival of human beings. Without money, one cannot buy food, shelter and clothing which are the basic needs of people. Many people believe money is a very important factor to reach happiness. Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. This has always been a big debate and I will give my opinion throughout the essay.

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Most people agree that money cannot be happiness. Why hapiness is difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?

A certain segment of individuals argues that money can not buy happiness. In my opinion, it is possible for people to be happy even without having money and only aspects of life can create a vital role in creating happiness.

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Some people think that to be successful, you need to get a university education, whereas others say it is not true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few individuals believe that education plays a vital role to become successful in life while other argue that a degree is not necessary to achieve life goals. In the forthcoming ,paragraphs we will discuss both views of the essay.

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Some people think that government spending on the restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, in this modern era population has been increasing day by day.Public face numerous kinds of issues with their housing and transportation conjunction. I completely agree with this phenomenon and discuss it in upcoming paragraphs.

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