IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 468

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think it's important for children to choose what they want to study at school, other THINK that it is wrong explain both and give your opinion.

There are different opinions about how schools should design and implement the curriculum. Some people think that schools should continue teaching all subjects in a traditional way, while others believe that students should only learn subjects they are interested in. In my view, children should learn all subjects until a certain age and then have the freedom to choose their area of study.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is believed by a few people that the government should spend money on railways as compared to roads, because there are lots of reasons why railways are better than roads. This essay will express complete disagreement with this view and justify this point of view.

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Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Young people are admired famous media and sport celebrities now. some of them might be misguided by the bad example. In my opinion, I suppose it is not a good development.

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These days, many students or teenagers rely on AI-powered tools for study or work, which loses their creativity and autonomy. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the above question. Give reasons and include any relevant examples to support your answer.

in today's modern society, many argue that students and employees now are too dependent on AI-powered tools, they fear that this may impede people's ability to improve their creativity and autonomy. Personally, I partly disagree with this statement

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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Nowadays, people mention that the childhood experience, before the childrens start to go to school have influence on their future life. However, others say that the tennager experience, especially at secondary or high school are more influential. In my opinion, both of the views have it own point of advantages and disadvantages, however my opinion lean more on the teenage experience, as they are at the growth-up stage and start to have their opinion. Hence, the experience of the teenager age will affect their life in the future more.

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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People should learn finance as soon as possible. In fact, I agree that students should be given financial literacy by compulsory course and, in this essay, I will explain my reasons.

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Students nowadays can get large quantities of information from mobile phone. Despite this, many people think that they should not be allowed to use them in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

This is a true fact to considers that in the present days mobile phone has become a vital part of our life and majority of the people in the world are using it. There are these who say that banning the use of mobile phones for teens in school, however other believe that it should. In this essay I will examine both side of the argument. and provide my overall opinion.

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Some people say that celebrities should accept the way the media publicize their private life as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, media publicize has significant role in the celebrities' career. If celebrities want to be famous, they would create something interesting; therefore media will interest and use it on their works. Celebrities lives can not be separated with media. These days, there are numerous people said that celebrities need privacy in their lives that sometimes get ignored by media workers. I disagree with this opinion, because being exposed to the media is part of their work. Celebrities must accept it and try to think on the positive sides. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant opinions based on factual premises.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Opinions are divided on whether the top rank to improve a country is economic progess or there are plenty types of progress that have to concern for developed country. Personally, I am in agreement with the latter view, even though the other one also shows some obvious advantageous points.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two opinions about the skill that children have, where on one hand people say that they already had it since birth and on the other hand, they state that children should develop their skill through training. In my opinion, children naturally have skills which will make them a great musician or an athlete.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries.

The increasing migration of professionals from poorer regions to developed countries, particularly in fields like medicine and education, poses significant challenges. One major consequence is the depletion of skilled workers in underprivileged areas, leaving numerous job vacancies and hindering essential services such as education. To tackle this issue, governments must enhance incentives for professionals to work in impoverished regions, including salary increments and supportive facilities.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children to be good members of society However, others believe School is the best place to learn this. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Few individuals believe that parents should teach their children to become better members of the society. But, others think the best place to learn about this is at academy. Although later notion can be beneficial, but in my opinion parents should teach their children to become good citizens

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nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. some people think that face-to-face interactions is essential. discuss both views and your opinion.

In this year and age, under technological advancement , making new friends online is becoming increasingly popular. Some people think that face-to-face interaction is more significant. This essay will discuss the opinion of both sides and provide evidence why making new friends online is more superior.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children to be good members of society However, others believe School is the best place to learn this. Discuss both the view and give your opinion

Few individuals believe that parents should teach their children to become a better members at the society. But, others think best place to lean about this is at the school. Although latter notion can be beneficial, but in my opinion parents should teach their children to become a good citizens

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is a noticeable number of individuals, today, wanting to discover the history of their accommodations in many countries. This can give the owners some benefits which explains why they find out the history, and how they can know about the past of the house.

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present, organizations conduct their meetings, discussions and training programmes through online, and this has been proved by a research study. The benefits of online business gatherings offset the drawbacks of it. Reducing the cost of organizing and convenience of the relevant parties can be considered as the advantages, and they outweigh the disadvantage of issues in the internet connections.

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Stress is the major problem in many countries around the world .What are some factors in modern society that cause stress and how we can reduce it.

Being nervous for several situation is now an issue of increasing concern around the world , becoming one of the leading causes of a poor health .While there are a clear reasons for this global issue .I believe that government and individuals can take a proper measures to address, or at least mitigate it.

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The internet when used as a source of information has more drawbacks than advantage. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet when utilized as a source of information has more disadvantages than benefits. Personally, I totally disagree with this view and I will explain why in this essay.

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with the rise of e books comes the decline in paper books.Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not what are the benefits and drawbacks of this trend?

Nowadays , many people around the world are using e-books instead of paper books and this trend declines use of traditional books.This essay will suggest that using e-books is more comfortable and it has a bad influence on people's eyes who are using it.

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Is using physical force to discipline children acceptable?

Children discipling is a critical issue which a number of people including parents and teachers are responsible for. The point is that the approach which would be used in this way. There are two methods for shaping children correct behavior, the first is that employing physical force and the second is to using psychological approaches rather than force. In following sections, these two approaches will explain in details.

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