IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 479

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

It is true that nowadays, people tend to live longer than before. This essay will delve into the consequent of this phenomenon and the solutions to reduce the influence of the increased average lifespan of individuals.

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, it is true that the overweight problem is increasing in a number of children and for that reason, when they grow older it creates a difficult problem for them both in terms of health and the health care system. In this essay, I will explain why the case is so, and I will give some possible solutions to eliminate this problem very efficiently.

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Advances in technology have meant that machines are increasingly used to jobs that were previously done by humans the benefits outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays we live in the digital age, where technology has become crucial for our day-to-day lives. Technology is helping as well developing a lot of prosthesis that can totally change the quality of life of people who were subjected to amputations or neurological diseases. Moreover, surgery has becoming less invasive thanks to new instruments that allows surgeons to be more sophisticated during their work.

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It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime is attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What do you suggest to deal with this situation?

Young people are indulging into the evil deeds now a days, regardless of their place to where they belong, either could be from developed of developing countries. Frequently it is thought that the high jump in underage crime is mainly derived from the cruelty that is shown in social media or tele media. In the further essay pre-mentioned and other cause of youngster’s crime along with their solutions will be discussed.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the advantages ?

In our lives we have to take risk for everything that we do . it does not matter is it our professional life or personal life . we always have to take risk . in my personal opinion, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantag. i am going to elaborate the that reasons below.

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Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is an important aspect of our life. Poverty is not a hindrance to an individual to finish their studies. The institution must lessen requirements in order for education to be available to everyone. I firmly agree that literacy is for everyone whether rich or poor.

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer country to work in developed countries. What problems does it cause? What can be done to deal with this problem?

Currently, more and more qualifications are deserting their own native lands to have a job in a more developed society. In an essay, it will be analysed what problems this situation gives and how to solve them as well.

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The food travels thousand of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate locally produced food. What extent does the advantage outweigh its disadvantage?

The bar chart illustrates the download rate per week of ActiveX, Java and Net computer packages over a period of five weeks. It can clearly be seen that ActiveX was the most popular computer package to download, whilst Net was the least popular of the three.

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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Climate change has now become a growing concern, and has made some think seriously about adopting efforts to tackle it effectively. However, others feel that people should acclimatize with it. I do favour the first view, but a critical assessment is necessary before framing a rational conclusion.

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Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The given line graph illustrates the average amount of Carbon Dioxide emitted by each person in four countries, namely United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a 40-year period starting from 1967.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely accepted that monthly wage plays a prominent role while seeking a career. Although I do not assume that the idea of the statement is completely wrong, there are other factors which people should take into consideration.

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

In this day and age, cutting-edge inventions make women’s lives easier by doing household chores, this allows them to pursue their own careers, and spend more times with their children. This essay will explore the advantages of this where I believe that the merits outweigh its demerits, and the reasons will be provided in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, with the assistance of some household equipment, women can have a chance to find an occupation for an additional salary, which may improve the economic status of their families. That is to say that it will be better to tackle the growing prices due to the outbreak of COVID-19. Although China News reported that in 2021, the price of ten eggs in Taiwan rose remarkably from $2 to $5, dual income families were able to afford the price increase. Working women also provides more financial security to their families. In other words, the unemployment rate is high all around the world, if one of the parents loses their ...

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

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In many countries, women no longer feel the feel need to get married. Some believe that this is because women abale to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Being Independent is more important in everybody's life. Nowadays, Most women are trying to be independent in a financial way and in some countries, they are also not choosing their life partner and prefer to be independent regarding their relationship status also. In this essay, we will discuss this matter and then I will give my opinion on this matter.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Society experiences a trend that the non-stop growing process of manufacturing items for users has an adverse influence on the eco-system. This essay will discuss about the main cause and a couple of solutions to tackle the issue.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the popularity of second-hand clothing amongst the younger generation. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, it become popular among the youth generations to take used attire. In my opinion, I think this is due to the economic situation that the world is facing. I also believe that it is a positive development, it is cheaper and helps to get rid of attires that are not in use.

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you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems wiht this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

I am writing to request that another room be assigned to me at college.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some children ofren need someone else encourage them to do something waht they want to do. Threfore, in some nations, students are usually told that they can accomplish anything if they try had enough.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, travelling to different places and area is one of the most welcomed approaches for recreation during holidays. Travelling is not restricted by domesticated area, but also is extended to foreign countries. Some people suggests that fewer people will choose to spend holidays at home country instead of travelling aboard. From my perspetive, there are few reasons which convince me to agree with the statement.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In few nation having your own house is a very important than renting accommodation. I believe it is because people prefer stable life than unstable one or having our own place and some value into our life. this is a postive solution for me.

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