IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 481

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

These days, it is a hot issue in many countries that high schools should teach students a comprehensive education to know a broad range of skills, or should educate them to concentrate on particular subjects, which can be directly applied in their future careers. In this essay, my opinion to support the latter views will be presented in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays many people choose to self employed rather than to work for a company or organization why might this be the case ? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays, the number of employees who tend to run their own businesses has increased significantly which raises the question that what is the reason and drawback?

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There are many people think that social network can improve teenager relationships. However, some people think that is bad for them. In my opinion, I completely think that social media is good for children to improve their relationships with other.

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Рeople today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on communities. what are the possible causes and solutions to this problem?

During this era, it is quite unnatural for people who spend less time interacting with their neighbours. Spending time with other people specifically neighbours costs valuable in our personal life. Concerning this ,topic there are vivid causes and solutions there, and that will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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Do you think online classes are effective? provide both sides arguments to support your opinion?

Nowadays,Some communities believe that virtual classes are better than live practical classes while others argue about this matter. In this essay, I will discuss both scenarios and then I will give my opinion on the given statement.

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Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalization?

Globalization is one of the processes to increase business productivity. In the last few decades, globalization has strengthened and many countries like India came to foreign states. In this ,process global accent also plays a vital role in the development of businesses. This essay will illustrate the importance of English as a global accent in the globalization process.

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Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with?

Some folks opine that adults who are younger get influenced by the family. Whereas few people believe that friends play a prominent role to influence young adults. This essay explains my view of this subject in some instances.

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Most people these days prefer getting news online rather than reading newspaper or watching TV. DO you think it is a positive development or negative

In the olden days, newspapers and television were the only sources of information for people. With the immense development in technology, these mediums of information are swept away by the internet. Though most people have shifted from the traditional way to online for getting daily updates, I personally think that this is not a positive development and shall explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsorily incorporated in secondary education programs.In my opinion, this is an unwise proposal, which carries a lot of serious consequences on the society and citizens. Therefore, I do not agree with this view.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. how could robots be used in future? Will this development be a positive or negative develpoment?

With the thought that robots are going to be significantly important in our lives. They can be used as a helping hand for humans in various manufacturing industries and other workplaces in the future. This trend will lead to a positive development in our day-to-dayday activities.

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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

According to some, tourism has a great influence on uplifting the economy, while some argue that because of accessive tourism, local people and the environment has negatively affected. This essay will discuss some of the benefits and even drawbacks of foreign people visiting different places and also suggests my opinion.

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Celebrities such as actors, athletes and musicians earn large salaries compared to other professionals. Some people consider this unfair, while others think that celebrities deserve to be paid a lot for the work they do. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion on the subject.

Handsome salaries are earned by renowned people like sports players, role players and musicians compared to other working individuals. There is contention among people that whether it is fair to pay them more or not. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and would argue that it is totally fair to pay these celebrities more.

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Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is true that many countries have been challenged by increasing crimes happening per day. Some considered that a police force can address those kinds of issues. However, having more police on the street which cannot help reduce crimes and I completely disagree with this statement because there are other actions that can tackle this increase in crime issues.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A disappointing job or being out of cash is one of a million troubles humans might face during their lifetime. Some people seem to accept living with these difficulties, while others consider that they’ll try working to get through this. With these two ideas, I have several points of view which will be discussed below.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Majority of people believe that a foreign language is solely learnt with the purpose of visiting other countries or business goals, while, there is an opposite opinion that the mentioned goals are not the absolute reason to learn another language. In this regard I am going to discuss both views and elaborate on my reasons to concur with the second opinion.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this time and age, some people have debates that it is not a great choice for an industry to replace old but experienced workers and recruit new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To my belief, there should be changes to the system.

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Some people prefer to have a job that requires a good deal of travelling, while others prefer a sedentary job. Why? What other factors should be considered while selecting a job?

In this contemporary world, everyone wants to do good standard job and ean more so that they can afford a good life. The work can require travelling abroad or within the country to different destinations or the person can persue job from home and office alone. In my opinion ,although work from office or home gives a person ample time for his family and little stress but , travelling extensively exposes them to diverse ideas, concepts and builds a global tourism experience.

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some people think sense of competition in children should be encouraged, other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The children are a relevant part of our society as they will contribute to the country as well as society. When it comes to the upbringing of the youngsters every parent sees their child be successful and achieve extraordinary in life. As a result, they tend to complete wishes and desires which in return are expected of good results.

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Some people believe that all students should be made to have an unpaid job in their free time. Do you agree or disagree?

Getting experience is more important than getting paid. Some communities argue that students should prefer a volunteer profession rather than paid work meanwhile others are not choosing to be a volunteer. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion regarding the given statement.

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some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teacher will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Education is very crucial in everybody's life. Some communities argue that children will be more influenced by their faculty rather than their parents. This essay describes both sides of the given statement.

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