IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 481

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Online shopping has become more popular than before.discuss causes and effects of this trend.

Online shopping has become more exciting and widespread in recent times because of new technology. However, there are effects of expansion eshopping. This essay will examine the reasons and effects of online shopping.

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Some people think professionals should be required to work in the country where they trained. Some people think they should be free to go anywhere. Discuss both views and give your stance.

Whether professionals should be required to work in the country where they trained has been a debate recently. I will first discuss both views, followed by supporting that professionals should have the freedom to go anywhere.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children today face a lot of pressure to do well academically. Consequences, due to children focus more academic subject, some people prefer to reduce non-academic subject from school syllabus. However some people argue that studying non-academic subjects is wasting time in schooling period, I believe that that it is vital educating for young people. This essay will first discuss the if kids study without non-academic subject, how it would be affect them, secondly will introduce benefits of non-academic subject.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people say that due to up-to-date technology has made shopping easier nowadays, while others disagree. In my opinion, many benefits of modern technology outweigh the negative impacts. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own viewpoint in the impending paragraph.

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at the present time, the poulation of some countries includes a relatively larg number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the population of young generation is more than old generation in some countries. It is widely believed that youger people are helpful in terms of the economical growth however, an opposite opinion also exist. This essey will introduce disadvantage of a plenty of young people and advantage that ourweigh drawbacks.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. .What are reasons for this? .How people can research this?

In this day and age, in many countries, numerous people are eager to carry out some researches about their place where they live there like building, household and so on. It appears due to some causes like how much they are pessimist or how much they are curious about their place. And also they can find this information via the internet, some folk and neighbors, and elderly.

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Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.

Certainly, there are many different sports all around the world, and the interest of games among people have become increased. However, Some people believe that not all sports are entertaining and safe for physical well-being, but still due to craziness, some individuals take part in dangerous sports. In this essay, I will explain why people prefer challenging sports over others, and suggest the possible solution that might be taken to deal with this complex matter.

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Most companies and organizations requires their employees to wear uniforms to work. what are the jobs that need uniform? what are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work?

Wearing a uniform is required in some companies and organizations for people who work there. Moreover, society who has a job as a civil servant has a rigid rules related to their job's outfit. There are some drawbacks related to this requirement that will be discussed on this essay.

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what are the pros and cons for children of watching television?

Nowadays, watching television is one of the most popular activities to do in free times. Children are attracted to TV programms too. There are some advantages and disadvantages in doing it. In this essay, i will discuss both positive and negative points and try to make a conclusion.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial conception heating a debate whether playing sports at school in a team is the best method in order to educate youngsters what cooperation is. I consider myself as an advocate of this idea.

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Shopping is now one of the most famous forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What is the reason? Is it positive or negative

Thers is no doubt that nowadays many young adults are using shopping as a form of leisure activity in many countries.In the next paragraph ,I will discuss why is the reason and negative effects of this outcome.

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schools should stop using books for teaching to learn as they find them boring, ad use films, TV and computer instead. To what extent do you agree with this?

Conducting old-style learning can make students boredom during their classes. Although, education might need to switch with e-learning or digital technology which scholars need a good education environment. Additionally, an important for student beneficial to cope with the modern education system that will help them to focus on their degree and make their study more attractive and interesting.

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Some organization believe that their employee should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appliance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether having an informal code for clothing in a working atmosphere is more valuable than work quality or not is a subject of public debate. While the outcome of employees in thier field of experties is of utmost importance, I will argue that it is vital for everyone dress professionally.

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Some people think that it is better to other countries for greater work and life opportunities. Others argue that it is best to stay in their home country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In all times people was wearing a uniform to show their proffesion. In this essay i want to describe advantages and disadvantages of this tradition.

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Many people work longer hours, leaving little time for leisure activities.ther hand, Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

It is often considered that many individuals engage in jobs for a longer hours and give a little time for leisure activities. Thus, this essay will elaborate on both positive and negative sides which further leads to a logical conclusion.

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The debate exists on whether young people should have the freedom to select their own profession of if they should adapt pragmatic approach, considering their future more seriously.

Some people believe that young generation should choose their own profession while others argue that they should be practical. Though choosing a career path that gives a stable income will help people survive in our thriving economy, I believe that doing what you love is more fulfilling. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and explain why choosing your own profession is better.

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In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both view and give your own opinion

In most countries, there are well-renowned schools and medical opportunities are accessible only in towns.some individuals believe that fresh teachers and doctors should start their joining in the undeveloped villages and working there for some years.whereas, others opine that the choice of servicing place should be left to them.In this essay, I will discuss both of the points. But, I personally agree with the former view,because it is a great chance for work for person who do have not enough facilities.

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In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities.some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years.but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In most of the countries, there are well renowned schools and medical opportunities are accessible only in towns.some individuals believe that the fresh teachers and doctors should start their joining in the undeveloped villages and working there for some years.whereas, others opine that the choice of servicing place should be left upon them.In this essay, i will discuss both of the points. But, i personally agree with the former view,because it is the great chance for working for the people who have not enough facilities.

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In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A lot of Nations educatinal institutions and hospitals are situated in town. Some individuals believe that, every people should get opportunity to work in their suitable areas, but others consider fresh teachers and doctors should participate in village for some years. In this essay, I agree with former view because of country’s development.

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Some prefer buying online to going to stores. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Shopping has been a part of our habbits for a long time. In the past, families used to go the the mall on holidays, buying gifts and spending quality time together. However, nowadays, most people prefer to shop online. This creates an impact on our daily lifestyles as well as the marketing industry. In this essay, I will go over the pros and cons of online shopping and why I support e-commerce.

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