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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays some individuals may think it is the best approach sometimes to face unfortunate events like an unfavorable job or deficit of money and make no changes. While others may not agree with particular beliefs and try to improve these terrible conditions. This essay will discuss both perspectives and provide my own viewpoint.

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Some people think that men and wormen have different qualities , therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's society, many public still think that certain careers are better suited for either fellow or female based on their inherent qualities . While it is true that fellow and female have biological differences , it is not fair to say that these distinctions determine what kind of work they can do . People should be free to choose any job based on their skills and interests, regardless of their gender .

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities,therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In the current era, many peopel believed that the suitability of jobs depended on the gender of the people who select them due to the different characters . Thus, this writer totally disagree with this point and will give more details in the essay below.

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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others arque that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion. •

Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. On the one hand it is really good point of view, because students will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. But In my opinion the most important for student while they study in university is to concentrate only on the educational process, because you spent a lot of time for your part-time job that's why you can't do your hometask for University.

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Some peoplethink that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that there are certain jobs which are suitable for made and others for female because each gender have their own qualities. This writer agrees with this statement and will explain why in the following essay.

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Some people think that meen and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different opinions about whether women and men could fit the same type of work or not. Some people argue that both genders have the same capabilities, while others oppose this point of view. This essay will discuss both argument.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what exten do you argee or disagree?

The public argue that specific careers are suitable for each gender due to the difference in their physics and mental. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this view because of the growth of education and expansion of the job market for both males and females.

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Some people believe that the goverment sholud take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their retirement. What is your opinion? Is it a postive or negative development?

Poeople who reach a certain age to be pensioner .In some countries administrations assume responsibility for their expenses and also pay them regularly every month. Most of individuals find this to be true however some of them are thinking that they need to collect money for their elderliness in the course of in the years they could run. In this article, I will discuss the good and bad aspects of these two ideas.

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It is believed that individuals who engage in reading books can cultivate greater imagination and linguistic abilities than thoise who prefer television. Yo what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading is a good habit. Some people believe that those people who read books can improve their imagination and language ability compared to watching television. In my opinion, I completely agree that the benefits of reading are greater than TV.

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In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

With the technology development rapidly, some traditional viewpoint is dashed by the more modern sights. There is a proposal which more fathers stay at home to care of baby, and mothers go out to make a living. There are several reason can figure out the situation which t is positive or negative.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. what are the causes of global warming and what measures can government and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Nowadays we are facing one of the most serious issue for humanity – global warming. Few decades ago people started to realize that is global warming became a serious problem. At this moment almost all of ecologiest in the world have been started warning goverments about global warming consequences.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Schooling is very important part of modern life. Although school's primary goal is to teach education, they should help for the development of personality, and character of every student. It is often believed that school's should develop, the young students, skills to become successful parent. In this essay, we discuss the how can schools can play major role in teaching the qualities of being a good parent and important skills needed.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Part of the society belives that it is reasonable for sport stars to earn a higher income than other paramount professionals in a nation while other question its fairness.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

part of the society believes that foreigners should obey and adhere to local ritual and conduct while others believe, that local's should accept other cultural norms.In my opinion, adherence to local traditions creates unnecessary stress on foreign travellers and makes the visit less enjoyable, whereas acceptance of other country' individual practises will lead locals to explore new things and attract goog in other traditions to improve local culture while uplifting the overall level of tourism in the nation. Therefore, in my conviction local citizens should always accept , overseas travellers' behaviour and norms.

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In many professional sports, there is a increase in the number of athletes used banned substances to improve their proformance. what are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

Many famous sports players are indulged in intake of banned drugs such as steroids to increase their stamina. The major causes behind this scenario are earning more money to get financially stronger and increased pressure from the media to win the competition. The possible remedies to cope with this issue are strict regulations on ground for players and making public aware about such cases through seminars.

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Some children spend hours every day on the smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Lately, a plethora of topics are being seriously discussed among various individuals and groups, and one prominent one is that some children spend hours every day on the smartphones. I think that such a statement will form a negative development for the children themselves, mainly because the lack of socializing and bad content that is accessible. Therefore, this essay will list the reasons for my preference.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

These days around the world novels and TV shows that are related to crime activities are gradually becoming popular. In this essay i will outline the reasons and my belief behind the phenomenon.

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Many people use their phones for sending text more than talking. What are the reasons for this? Are there more advantages than disadvantages?

Nowadays, sending text is more common in many individuals than talking on phone. There are multiple causes behind this: like it is time saving and cost effective. It will be discussed in the following paragraphs. I believe that texting have more benefits than harms.

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Nowadays, many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

These day , lack of sleep is very Common among people , and they would Complain about it . In this essay i will outline it would be offered .

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Environmental protection should be the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are two controversial perspectives heating a debate over the fact in this day and age that most scientific research are financed and carried out by private firms instead of the governor. In my opinion, the benefits of this can do greater than its cons.

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