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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many Nation, a lot of individuals face various medical problems such as obesity, heart disease, and high blood pressure due to fast food consumption. In this essay, I totally disagree with more taxation system in fast food.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food.It is therefore necessary for governments to imposw a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many Nation's, a lot of individuals faced various medical problems such as, obesity, heart disease, and blood pressure due to fast food consumption. In this essay, I am totally disagree on more taxation system in fast food.

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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to sports activities as they do allocate to the libraries To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Universities should invest the same number of money to sport activities as they invest to the libraries. I absolutely agree with this statement as sport gives good impact for your health and sports gives more opportunities to people who are not academically successful.

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Science tells us that some activities are good for our health, while some others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people all over the world continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is the case and what might be done to change this?

Currently, huge number of people remain to choose unhealthy habits, although there are many science research explain some activities that provide good impact, however others give bad effects for our health as people still do now. I strongly believe that this was led by lack of awareness and addiction that embedded in human life. However, it still can be stoped by several efforts such as understanding triggers first and start to take over with positive alternatives.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, children got stress to finish about their academic subjects. Some people believed that, it should be remove some unimportant subjects from their syllabus. As a result, children can concentrate and pay more attention their academic subjects without taking extra stress. In my opinion, I agree with this statement due to the two reasons. In the next paragraph, I will discuss in details for my agreement.

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Some people think the government should provide free education in all levels. Others argue that university students should pay for their education. Discuss both views.

Education is instrumental in shaping the future of society. While some suppose that the government should take responsibility for free education at all levels, there is another idea, which is also in my favour, that studying in universities should not be free. In the following essay, I attempt to investigate both views and I will also express my opinion.

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People from many countries are marrying later and having fewer children. Give reasons why this is happening. Are there any positive or negative developments regarding this?

In today’s world, it is alarming, a reducing of newborn in countrywide causes government concern about this situation. This essay will examine the cause of the couples delay in wedding and both of advantages and disadvantages impacts that marriage later and having fewer kids.

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The Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.

The table illustrates the number of students who were able to attend four different schools from 2000 to 2009.

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In recent years, the number of people choosing to work remotely has increased significantly, resulting in a considerable shift in the traditional workplace environment. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend, and provide your opinion on whether this shift towards remote work is ultimately beneficial or detrimental to society as a whole. Support your arguments with relevant examples and evidence.

It is generally believed that working remotely, is increasingly popular for the number of employees. Some staffs want to work at home has risen dramatically, leading to a significant modification in the traditional workplace environment. This essay will explore the pros and cons of this trend before presenting my own matter.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Sugar consumption has increased recently. High level amounts of sugar in ready foods and drinks result in health problems and disease. It is said that the price of sugary products should be increased to stop people from buying these kinds of products and hopefully, eat less sugar. In this essay, I will delve into why I disagree with this statement.

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In many countries, fast food become spart of everyday life. It affects people’s lifestyle and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

There is no objective fact that this statement about fast food become spart of everyday life is prevalent in our reality because of its importance. Most people agree with this statement because of its many benefits. However, some of the people highlight its disadvantages first. My next paragraphs will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the same.

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Nowadays many young people deliberately damage public places. What are the causes and solutions?

Nowadays, many teenage people are harming society.However, it is necessary to find alternative ways to prevent this and help them to grow up to be useful people in public places.

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Tourism is becoming increasingly important and a source of income to many countries, but its disadvantages shouldn't be overlooked . to what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, touristry has been an upsurge of becoming important and inventorying of funding in few countries, meanwhile, its drawbacks must not be neglected. I strongly agree with this statement and I will define it in the following essay.

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages

It is true that the invention of household facilities created more spare time for women and gave them opportunities to pursue their work aspirations as well as maintain housework with un-reliant children. Although it may have some drawbacks, I believe this can bring more benefits.

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Nowadays young people know less about traditionas and culture than in the past.what are the reasons for it?is this a positive development or a negative development.

In this modern age minor people know only little about traditionas and culture than in the old age.If questioned,I think it is a negative development with several reasons.So, many reasons and negative Points have been articulated in the upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples and explainations.

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Some people believe if a police force carries a guns, it will encourage the level of violence in the society. To what extent you agree or disagess

In the modern world, it is still legal in some nations to possess a gun by the police for defending and protecting purposes. Some people argue that this practice increases criminal rates, whereas others oppose this viewpoint. I truly agree with the former statement, and this essay will explain why.

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Nowadays many young people spend their free time in shopping centers. This has a negative effect on youths and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People wonder whether it is good or bad if young people spend their free time in the shopping malls. In this essay, I will argue that this does not have negative impacts on the youths and society.

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n the future, nobody will buy printers newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is opinion , that individuals prefer to read magazine , books and other stuff online instead of buying printed version of books and magazine in the future . In this essay we will examine the reasons of agreement and disagreement with this issue.

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Economic progress is often used to measure a country’s success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country’s success? Do you think one factor is more important than others?

It is a common thought that a provincial's accomplishment is measured by economic progress, others believe that there are other point that help a agrarian's achievement. In my opinion, there are many thing that bring accomplishment to a agrarian.

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Some experts believe that school it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primaryrather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A number of specialists assumes that, ideal time to start learning on a non-native language is at the elementary school level rather than middle school level. In my conviction , learning foreign toungue later makes the students overburden with all other academic burden in secoundary educational institutional status. However, exporsure to a external language at early school age's let them to be fluent in a languge and more easy to learn. Thus, I think the benifits of learning a secound toungue early outweight the drawbacks.

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