IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 482

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A disappointing job or being out of cash is one of a million troubles humans might face during their lifetime. Some people seem to accept living with these difficulties, while others consider that they’ll try working to get through this. With these two ideas, I have several points of view which will be discussed below.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Majority of people believe that a foreign language is solely learnt with the purpose of visiting other countries or business goals, while, there is an opposite opinion that the mentioned goals are not the absolute reason to learn another language. In this regard I am going to discuss both views and elaborate on my reasons to concur with the second opinion.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this time and age, some people have debates that it is not a great choice for an industry to replace old but experienced workers and recruit new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To my belief, there should be changes to the system.

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Some people prefer to have a job that requires a good deal of travelling, while others prefer a sedentary job. Why? What other factors should be considered while selecting a job?

In this contemporary world, everyone wants to do good standard job and ean more so that they can afford a good life. The work can require travelling abroad or within the country to different destinations or the person can persue job from home and office alone. In my opinion ,although work from office or home gives a person ample time for his family and little stress but , travelling extensively exposes them to diverse ideas, concepts and builds a global tourism experience.

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some people think sense of competition in children should be encouraged, other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The children are a relevant part of our society as they will contribute to the country as well as society. When it comes to the upbringing of the youngsters every parent sees their child be successful and achieve extraordinary in life. As a result, they tend to complete wishes and desires which in return are expected of good results.

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Some people believe that all students should be made to have an unpaid job in their free time. Do you agree or disagree?

Getting experience is more important than getting paid. Some communities argue that students should prefer a volunteer profession rather than paid work meanwhile others are not choosing to be a volunteer. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion regarding the given statement.

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some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teacher will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Education is very crucial in everybody's life. Some communities argue that children will be more influenced by their faculty rather than their parents. This essay describes both sides of the given statement.

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Nowadays fast food is a trend in many places and countries. Many believe that it is affecting our lifestyle and diet too much. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fast food nowadays is literally everywhere and is almost accessible to everyone. Delicious and fast, this type of food seems to be a combination of the best of both worlds. Whether we are looking for a quick bite or just running low on meal options, these establishments are always there to fill our growling stomachs. As good as it sounds, there are still numerous reasons why they have to be eliminated from our lifestyle and that is why I agree that they indeed destroy our lifestyle. In this essay, I will explain why fast meal is not the best choice for our diet.

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Nation should spend more money on vocational training rather than on university education. Would the advantages of these outweigh the disadvantages?

Every county contributes significant amount of money to maintain world class education system. Many today feel that countries should prioritize skill training over higher education. Here, I coincide that disbursing highly on technical training will be fruitful as such practice would succor during recession period, also the unemployment problem of any country can be resolved. However, this trend may impact the development of the country.

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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think a role of a parent should be in their child education. Write at least 250 words

Academic performance has always been a vital issue both to parent and their ward. High number of youngsters receive little support from their parents in respect to their academic results, while others are excessively pressurized by their extremely zealous parents and this pose bad effect on the child. The reasons why parents over pressurized their kids and also their duties towards their child's academics will be discussed in this essay.

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Should the government fund the education and healthcare system? What is your opinion?

Public services which include education and health care are major determinant of standard of living in any society. It is agreed that government should fund education and the health sector. This essay will analyse how this will give equal access of citizens to good education and health care, as well as serve as an avenue for revenue generation.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is in the debate phase on how funds raised from various means into the society's pocket should be managed by the government. Meanwhile, some people are saying that public funds should be invested in public services rather than arts, music and theatre. This easy, will give consequential reasons why such should not be done.

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You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, -asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need -saying why you need them -making arrangements to meet

I'm glad to hear about your visit to Canada next month, and can't express my happiness in words. Finally, we are going to meet after two long years, and I hope you have been doing great all this time. I'm writing to ask you a favour and hope you don't mind. I need some things from my home, and I'd be so grateful if you can bring them along with you.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that it is not wise for industry to replace the old and experienced workers with new but inexperienced individuals. Personally, I strongly disagree with this assessment.

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I've completed my Masters and Bachelor of Education from India.Currenly, I work in a primary school located in Surrey, BC. I worked for 3 years as a Science teacher in India. I’ve found that one of the best techniques for engaging students is to incorporate technology in my lesson plans, and to this end, I've utilized tools such as Microscope to create interactive activities and to achieve learning outcomes when teaching about DNA in plant cells.

Greeting! It’s my pleasure to introduce myself as Baljit. I was born and raised in Punjab, India.

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The charts below the amount of financial aid that four countries received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about how the aid money was spent by China, Indonesia, Thailand, and South Africa and how much they received in the years 1974 and 2014.

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ome people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many of experts believe that the experience persons such as medical man and the headmasters should be paid more than the average people like sports and different celebraties.In this essay,i will explain whatever i accepted this or denied this discussion.

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Some people believe that advertisements aimed at children have a poor influence on them and can affect their relationship with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that, adverts plays an vital role in this era ,but fer individuals opine that juveniles are targeted in a negative way with the exposure of advertisements . I, however contends that this phenomenon have wrong effect on younger ones. This essay articulates my agreement points in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The application of Artificial Intelligence (AI) has been thriving in different sectors like education and business. It is also predicted that it will be used in vehicles in the future. So, we may witness the vehicles without drivers after two or three decades. They may be several benefits and drawbacks of implementing vehicles that run without drivers; this essay will present them and reach a conclusive opinion.

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Some people think that studying from the past teaches us nothing about today’s life. Others argue that the history is a value source of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is often claimed that history has an essential role in our life while people are only concentrating on current scenarios. According to my opinion, our ancestors travelled and experienced several critical situations and provide viable remedies to confront the challenges.

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