IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 478

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

4.5

band

some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsabilities.

Most of the people believe that the teenage is the best time of their life while others think adult is the joyful time instead of lot of responsibilities. I will explain both views further.

4.5

band

Is mental strength important for success in sports or is it more important to have strong and fit people in sports? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports are the vital aspect of people's lives. Some claim that mental strength is the utmost important for accomplishmennts in games while others say that it is imprtant to the sports persons should be fit and strong. This essay dicusses bothview points and I strognly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

4.5

band

An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have an operation to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Cosmetic surgeries have become quite popular in recent years, as a vast number of people are undergoing these surgeries in order to improve the way they look. Individuals who are choosing surgeries are mostly, because they want to appear flawless. It's worth mentioning that the advancements in medical technology have made the procedures painless and safer. So, besides that there might be minor mistakes during the operation by a surgeon, I completely believe that it has a positive impact on people.

4.5

band

Some people prefer young leaders, while others think that senior managers have the experience. What do you think?

Leadership qualities is the utmost importance skill in people lives. Some prefers the young generation's leadership while others prefer the older people due to tehy have more experience. I think senior managers are most suitable for leaders. This essay discusses it briefly for the folowing reasons.

4.5

band

Some people say that computers can translate languages, so children need not study foreign languages anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that new technologies can do translating for us,hence young people don't have to learn other languages. This essay disagrees with this statement and will first discuss the benefits of learning languages and secondly argue that it will not help for free oral communication.

4.5

band

Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why it might be the case? What could be the disadvantages if being self-employed?

There is no doubt that these days you should have many sources of money the question is what the pros and cons if you have two choices to be an employed or freelancer, in this essay, I will discuss both sides and I will write my own opinion.

4.5

band

Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.

The employment of automatic machines is developing in this current era. Some people argued that robots will improve the production rate and perform a complex task that can not be done by human. Besides that, it also argued that several drawbacks that could be classified as a hazard for the human daily life. This essay will discuss the privilages and constraints for utilising automatic machines.

4.5

band

Some people think that foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors during their visit to historic and cultural places. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some individuals believed that foreign visitors should pay more money than local people during their visit to historic and cultural places. I totally disagree with this stament because foreing visitors might decide not coming to see cultural places anymore and historical places might have to closed due to not having enough money to maintain them.

4.5

band

Governments are prohibiting underage children from getting full time jobs in certain countries. Do you agree or disagree?

Child labour are banned by the authorities in several destinations as full time worker because it destroys the child development. I completely agree with this statement. There are some reasons behingd this phenomenon. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

4.5

band

Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why does it happen? Is it a positive or negative development?

Solar power has emerged as a primary source to meet energy need in the domestic sector in some parts of the world. There is one main factor responsible for this change and in my opinion this shift towards solar power is beneficial both for individuals and environment.

4.5

band

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What are the reasons behind this trend? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own

These days, the professionals' migration has been increased more tremendously than ever before due to the globalisation. As a result, many professionals such as doctors and teachers are moved to developed nations from their poorer countries for employment. Better lifestyle and hike earnings are the reasons behind this trend and some solutions can be overcome this tendency. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

4.5

band

Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Over the last two or three decades, the language transcription application has been improvised more tremendously than ever before due to the innovation of the technology. Despite learn a second language is still required. I completely agree with this statement because translation software discourages further interaction to others. Besides, learn a new linguistic can connect with the locals who speaks same accent. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

4.5

band

Despite the growing number of gyms and fitness centres, more and more people are leading a sedentary lifestyle in the modern society. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest

Eventhough, many fitness related infrastructure facilities are available in modern cities, people become more and more inactive due to their busy life style.This essay discusses that, this has become a pressing issue as it creates many adverse impacts on people's well-being.However, the government and the private sector interventions to increase public awareness on this regard may help to solve the problem.

4.5

band

The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

The given diagrams show the average income and spending on groceries and clothes in 2010 and 2013 by middle-class families and to which products the money was allocated in 2010.

4.5

band

Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

In recent times, a massive population is competing with young people for the similar job positions. Unemployment and inflation are the two major reasons behind this problem. To curb this problem, government support and establishment of new infrastructures are needed.

4.5

band

Some people say that arts subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that arts subjects such as painting or drawing must not be a must for secondary scholars. I agree with this opinion to a greater extent, and in this essay im going to explain my reasons.

4.5

band

Some people think student should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think student should spend time on other important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some assert that the studying of food making should be taught as main subject in the school curriculm while others believe that students might concentrate on essential subjects such as math, physics, chemistry,.. Because both viewpoints are justifiable, I personally lean towards the latter.

4.5

band

Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some peope believe that the demonstration of action, gore and fighting scenes in visual media is negatively our children and adults as it makes them vulnreble to develop aggressive traits. This essay completely agree with this viewpoint because an increased exposure to such media have negative consequences on our youth and also it also motivate people to engage in criminal activities who have propensity towards crime.

4.5

band

Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to the regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many factories and retail busineses are encouraged by the authority to shift to rural areas from big towns. This essay discusses the demerits and merits of this development while also stating why I believe that it is mostly a positive development.

4.5

band

The cost of living is higher in many countries. What are the effects of higher prices on individuals and society? What is the best way for people to deal with this problem?

The increase in the cost of living has a great impact on people and society. If the cost of living increases, but people's wages do not increase, then it will be very difficult for people to live.One of the reasons for the increase in the cost of living is tourists, because when tourists come, they bring foreign currency to the country they come to, and this causes the cost of living to increase.Another reason for the increase in the cost of living is the depreciation of the currency.Over time, the national currency depreciates, and as it depreciates, so does the cost of living.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.