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Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, life has become an extremely hard more than previous one. Teenagers are suffering due the challenges such as finding a good job, education and relationships. In this essay i will provide an several different reasons supported by real examples based on my own experience.
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The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people’s freedoms. Do you agree or disagree

Smoking is one of the major problems facing people and governments around the world. Some people think that should government be stuck to ban smoking in all public place, even if that will conflict with the freedom of individuals. I would agree with this statement, the government should control the smoking inside public place.
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Some people think that government funding should not be used for supporting Art & culture, while others think that supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own openion.

As per some views, it is believed that ruling authority's more expeditures is to promote art and culture, however, along with remaining people I also believe it can be spend to build good sewage system and infrastructure in the country.
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, females and males are at equal status. In many ways, girls can do some difficult jobs like working in a factory and even more better than boys. In addition, man can be a nurse and more careful than women. Thus, in universities, of course they should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject for university may affect what people do in the future.
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Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you thinnk the educational benefits of testing outway any disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that checking students knowledge is vital in each country`s education system. It is very common to test their knowledge through final exams or mid-courses. While it allows students to raise their knowledge and skills, some traditional approaches that can check their skills for exams might be the reason for their demotivation. In this essay, I will discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Generally, old age will given a traditional culture and develop life of ancient culture and young people will develop society by the technology life with a lot of new modern life. This essay will discuss that young age should connect to a lot of cultures with the modern lifestyle and develop the society with many fields.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Living in this modern era means that sometimes we listen to plenty of ideas, notably when confirming how we react in a worst situation. Some people believe accepting a bad scenario, like unvalued works or lack of money is the best, whereas others think that we should challenge and embrace ourselves. This essay definitely will discuss both opinion followed by supportive reasons.
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Some people believe that engaging in an active pastime does more to develop children`s life skills than time spent reading. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children like to explore new things in their lives, especially related to playing around with their peers. This brings on debate that some people would agree if children involving in entertaining activities occur in an ancient time because it can led to children’s developmental skills compared to spending time on reading a book. This essay would help to explain an idea as the background to support the statement followed by supporting points.
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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people; however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that other types of progress are very important for a country. While there are some reasons why this is the cause, I believe that it is the most important aim for a country to have other types of progress than economic progress.
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The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying up-to-date or fashionable products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The modern world is consuming natural resources more than that can be renwed. however it is nassecery that company try to products made to last. Governments should force people to consuming recycle products. I would agree with this statment that must be regulated.
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People in many countries are spending more and more time away from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people are working long hours more than spent time with families, because of responsibility of jobs or study at the university. I believe that learnings and developing themselves in live individual and have benefit than live with parents.
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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, with a globalized world, some argue that if the government put higher funds into public vehicles and reduced the fee for tickets would lead to a dramatic decrease in transport pollution. To be honest, I, firmly agree with this statement, and in this essay, i will discuss the reasons for this and provide examples to support my point of view.
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Some people prefer living in an apartment while others believe living in a house brings more advantages. Which, out of the two, is better?

Nowadays, there are two types of people who prefer residing in an apartment or in a house and this is a debatable topic. In my opinion, dwelling in a studio has more advantages than in a house. This essay will discuss both perspectives and introduce an opinion.
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the comtemporary market, there is no doubt that advertisement is playing a essential role in incentive the consumption. Regarding this, some perceived that result in our purchase for unuseful commidities. Whilst others contend that it is due to advertising we have acceses to better quality product that elevate our living standar. In my perspective, as customer, we should dispose the capability to distinguish the feability of information and benefit from that.
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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, some people believe that going to the cinema for watching the films, would be useless because people can see them on their phones or tablets. others say that to be fully enjoyed with saying the films, people should go to the cinema. In this essay I will outline these to viewpoints.
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Problem /Solution Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. -What do you think are the causes of this? - What solution can you suggest?

Nowadays, it is quite alarming in our society the increasing number of people getting sick due to stress. It is important that we should also have time to relax and enjoy life.
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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?

It seems that with the passing of time, children have become smarter because they are technology generation and the modern era. Overall, some children want to control their own decision and their own things, also achieving complicated things to prove their personality. In my opinion, I will tend to agree with this statement and I will first provide some ideas why and then look at some benefits.
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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Since the beginning of mankind, there is evidence that men used to find food for the family while women took care of the children. Therefore, through evolution men got strong enough to fight, face to different kind of situations while women became emotionally strong to tackle family problems and taking care of children. Hence, most people believe that taking care of children and household situations are entirely up to women. But the world has changed so fast over last two decades and women have started to earn like men. Thus, if a child of a working mother starts to struggle with the life, the public does not hesitate to blame the mother for that. However, I strongly disagree to the fact that children are entirely women’s responsibility. In this essay, I will discuss further about my opinion.
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Nowadays the environmental problems are to big to be manage by individual persons or countries. In other words, it is an internationl problem. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

The last few decades have seen heated discussion about how are play the major roles to preserve environment.persenallty, I am inclined that globle issue . Nevertheless , I would argue that individual contribute in solving this problem.
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Now, a lot of charities and organisations have to publicize their activities by setting up a number of days to name the special day like National Children’s day and National non smoking day. Why do they do so? What are the effects?

Nowadays, we celebrate different types of national days. Mainly it is conducted by the charitable trust organizations and other public organizations. This essay, discussed the reason and the effect of arranging these types of activities and its effect.
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