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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Human activity has had a negative impact on planet and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others think actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

It is true that there is a deleterious impact on earth and animals owing to human actions. A number of people believe that this situation is unchangeable, while a vast majority of people argue that significant measures should be adopted so that world and animals can be protected. I firmly assume that conducive steps would be undertaken by the government to ameliorate this problem. This study will endeavor to explore the reasons and possible solutions for protecting the earth and its species.

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Describe the changes on the island due to some construction of tourism facilities shown in the two maps

The given two maps depict the changes that happened on the particular island due to the construction of some tourist facilities. It is evident that there has been a radical change in the transportation facilities and other infrastructures.

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Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer - planning or not planning for your leisure time?

Many people have different approach towards their free time, some want it to be pre-planned while others do not. It is planning that can help in covering all the activities in the free time moreover, it is the unplanned moments that happen to be joyous. I believe that planning can help in achieving all the unattained aims and wishes in the leisure time.

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Some cities create new housing for thier growing population by constructing a samller number of high-rise buildings.Other cities create more of Low-rise buildings whcih solution is better in your opinion

The increase in population has resulted in bringing up more apartments to accommodate all of them. The argument arouses between better accommodation with taller buildings occupying smaller area versus smaller buildings covering a greater area. In my view, it is better to build raised buildings than increase land area.

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At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As life has becomed more convenient and comfortable, families have seemed to have more than two children. Therefore the number of young adults in some nations has surpassed the older generation. Personally, I consider this phenomenon as a more positive than worrying one.

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Offline libraries are not necessary anymore.It is a waste of resourses and time.Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,Technology has become the important part of human life.With the help of gadjets we can easily find out any information we want.So,some people claim that offline libraries are no longer required,since both time and resourses are wasted.I'm in complete agreeement with this idea.In the forthcoming paragraphs,I shall explain my thoughts in detail.

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Some people prefer to save money. Others prefer to use their money on things they will enjoy. What is the best approach towards money? Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays, money is an important factor in our life routine. Some people prefer to spend their money on happiness, while others believe that saving money is more essential. There are a different reasons for in both of statements. The explanation behind this will be explained below.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Nowadays, a lot of people believe that it is good for a country to hosting an international event for sports while the others do not agree about it. Although the host country might pay a lot of money for their stadium's maintenance, I agree with the former opinion that holding a global event will support their advancement in many sectors.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, While some people think it is bad. discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people consider countries to benefit from hosting international events while other people believe it is not good. In my opinion, I Totally agree that hosting global sports events is a good decision for some countries because it can help their development but we have to be aware of the impact of it.

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Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

In the globalized world, money has gained more importance. Therefore, some argue that success is evaluated by how much money somebody has earned. In this essay, I will discuss that fund is the best measurement of success and that being beneficial and affecting people are alternative ways of measuring success.

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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Eduaction plays a crucial role in people's lives. At present in many nations, the pupils can work while they are studied in school and college due to the financial problem as well as getting practical experience. I consider this is the best plan for students. This essay shall discuss it briefly in the following paragraphs.

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Many countries raise fuel prices to deal successfully with problems of traffic and polluon. What effects do you think this move can have? What other measures do you think can be taken to reduce traffic and pollution ?

In many countries, the governments increase fuel prices in order to deal with traffic congestion and pollution. I believe that this move can have negative effects on society in the long run. In contrast, there are some other solutions can be made to help reducing traffic and environmental problems.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s would, subjects like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are people who argue that science and technology are more important than history subject. In my opinion, I agree to some extents because science and technology provide easiness to our lives such as digital literacy. In this essay, I will discuss and give relevant opinions based on factual premises.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, While some people think it is bad. discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people believe that hosting an international sports event is positive for the country, while others believe that it is not good. A country will develop if they accept an international sports event, this will bring some advantages for the country such as increase income of the country, it would bring benefit for local sellers, also build international relation for every country. Besides, it will increase thieft cases. In my view, I believe that this trend will bring advantages for the country.

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Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (write 250)

The world of working has lots of variety in one company, any different in income, position, or even task. As these kinds of things should be a factor that pay’s rate is not equal like in CEOs and ships get higher revenues than other employees. In my point, I agree that they deserved these higher return rate.

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Some people say that we must send our parents to old age home when they reach 60. However other think that they must be taken care at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are several choices how to take care our parents after they get older. Some individual believe that we can take our parents to nursing home. Some others argue that it is our responsibility to take care of our parents at home. While some some people argue that we should send elderly to old age home, I side with those who feel that caring our parents at home is part of their children responsibility.

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14.With computers and the Internet, people can study and work without going to school or a company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Students and workers could do their study and work outside their schools or a companies. Whether this technology is used as a platform of online meeting, many people believe the use of internet and computers could has more advantages than disadvantages. In my opinion, although internet and computers could hinder the managers and teachers to monitor their staffs and students, it could create flexibility in time, reduction of vehicle in the road, saving money. This essay will address why the benefits of computer and the internet outweigh the disadvantages and will include relevant example to support this position.

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Some say that watching television among children has detrimental effects on their growth while others say otherwise. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views

Some people argue that children growth could be affected in a negative way by the content of television, while other people say it is not related at all. I agree that television program have impacts on under age viewers as there are numbers of harmful content broadcasted via television.

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Some people say that all secondary and higher secondary school students should be taught how to manage money as it an important like skill. do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although financial management or money management is very vast with multiple concepts still I believe that the basics should be atleast taught to all higher secondary schools. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs enlighting my purpose for same.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the contemporary era, developing of public transport is a very disputable topic because of the global warming. It is claimed that, government have to spend more funds on public transport as well as reducing ticket prices. Undoubtedly, it has many benefits, but it also has some hidden demerits, which I am going to explain further.

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