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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The demand of oil and gas is increasing so there is need to search new sources of energy in untouched natural places. Do its advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In this contemporary era the use of renewable resources is increasing day by day for transportation and other purposes. It is observed in the last decade that our resources like oil and gas are depleting at a considerable rate, which is creating an alarming situation for us and our future generations. This essay will discuss that, keeping this situation in mind, why it has become imperative to exploit the hidden resources in untouched natural places and how its advantages will outnumber its disadvantages.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays television and computer games became the most popular form of entertainment among people. It is often believed that the violence displayed on these platforms has a harmful impact on society. However, some people think that these type of images do not play any role in human's way of behaving. I personally, agree that being exposed to horror in any shape or form has a negative impact on someone's mind.

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some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Completing different community service projects can not only have great benefits - both academically and emotionally - for the students, but also be beneficial for certain groups of people who are in grave need. However, if it becomes compulsory, I believe, the result will be counterproductive. Below is the explanation for the fact that I am against making an altruistic behaviour an obligatory action.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays people are more willing to help people they don't know (for example, by giving clothing and food to people who need them) than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

Helping needy individuals can aid mental health and anxiety by showing kindness to others. Even it is believed that in today's era people are willing to assist the needy more often by contrast in the past, people do not use to help many people whom they don't know. Hence, my arguments will be in favour of the aforementioned statement with reasoned examples.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

After completion of high school, young people are advised to work or travel for a year before they join their university studies. This advice has positive implications on the youths such as saving money and gaining experiences but there are disadvantages that their motivation level of study can reduce and there is a delay for career development.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the negative impacts on society and family life?

Some people argue that the government is waiting for resources in certain aspects such as arts, paintings and they should spend the funds for public services like education, transport and healthcare. From my point of view, although arts such as painting and music is vital to relax in daily basic, the governments should spend the expense of for public service

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in some countries owning a house rather than renting is very important to people. Why might this be the case? Do you think is a positive or negative situation?

Throughout the world, the majority of populaces argue that owning a shack is a status symbol rather than a rented home. I want to discuss both views in this essay although, having a mortgage accommodation is a crucial prospect for the future generation, and it is undeniable.

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What are the possible advantages and disadvateges of being a professional athlete?

Sport promotes mental and physical health. Everybody needs to exercise for keeping health. However, be professional athlete is so hard and need lots of exercises.is this essay I write about benefits and drawbacks of professional athlete.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Discussion of the issue of consistently proves to be a veritable minefield of controversy, with a chasm separating the opinions of the opposing sides. In spite of this, this paper will navigate through the discord and illustrate in crystal-clear fashion why the stance that__ view you accept__is better grounded.

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It is said that watching TV is a waste of time for children. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, spending time watching TV becomes a part of the daily routine almost of each human, and kids aren't an exception to this trend. It is often suggested that spending time like this is absolutely useless for children. But I strongly disagree with this point of view, as I believe that in the long run, it helps them to learn the human life.

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It is said that people who read books with preasure have more developed imaginations and better language skills than people who like watching TV. Agree or disagree ?

These days the people who prefer to watch tv are getting more day after day opposite the people who would like to read a book. So, some people would like to watch tv or any source of the video, while, others believe in reading books. this essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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Some people think that a sense of competition should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and your opinion.

It is often believed that pupils should be thought how to compete at an early age. However, it is also argued that children who have a prominent sense of cooperation are the foudation of a functioning society.

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Nowadays more and more people have access to the Internet. But constant availability of any information worsens people's memory and critical thinking skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to the advancement of technology, people tend to use the internet to search for information. Some people state that it will negatively affect people’s memory and critical thinking skills, this essay totally agree with this statement.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think that it could be better to our environment and economic if people only ate local produced food. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Foods are exposed to imortant distances in order to be reached last consumers. One of the most fundemantal reasons is the conversion foods to an industrial bussines. To be conveyed the foods from one region to another without any limits is to bring about some problems along, such as environmental and economic fluctuations. According to point of my view, the most logical solution is to prefer the local alternatives rather than global scale.

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ith the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The two diagrams illustrate the current and the proposed modifications for a house building.

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Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers. Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The revolutionary changes in the matter of technology has significantly impacted the lives of the people.A school of thought believes that modern technology always act as tremendous valuable aspect for workers ,whereas some critics ponder that there are some negative ramifications of this practice. This discourse delves into both arguments in the subsequent paragraphs.

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It is important to study the literature of their own country than of other countries. Do you agree or disagree with this?

A canal knowledge of other languages wouldn't be a negative one . The study of literature has to do with patience and concentration. Some people think it's important to study their countries language to others.

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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Most offenders regret their past behaviors after receiving punishment, but some do not feel guilty and keep on violating the law. The reason for these people to continue their crimes comes from many aspects of life, yet there are general measures to engage in this problem.

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Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. Discuss both views and opine.

Unemployment is the biggest issue in many Countries. Some individual believe that primary teaching reveals all problems but others think that secondary schooling is more beneficial for students.i shall discuss both views in my upcoming paragraph with a crystal clear conclusion.

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Advertisements have impacted our modern world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.

Advertisement, wich has played a vital role in this modern era,might harm influence towards wrong product;nevertheless, it is believed by a few masses that marketing have adverse effects on our society.This essay will not only discuss drawbacks of of it but also benefits of broadcasting.

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