IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 480

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The discussion on the potential adverse effects of daily computer use on small children has been active ever since these devices became common at households. Some people argue that playing games or performing other computer activities even as often as every day is good for the development of young people. I don't agree with that and strongly believe that there is more negative about these habits, and further down in this essay I will argue why.

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Some people think that famous people's support towards International aid organisations draws attention to problems, while others think that celebrities make the problem less important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's world shopping malls have become so popular among folk our small markets have their own customers therefore in the following is a I will examine both views and also I will give my opinion with suitable reasons in the conclusion to begin with there is no denying that shopping malls are bigger convenient and they have ride of items because of because these malls are more spacious moreover shopping malls recommend efficient prices efficient and reasonable prices because they sell more products on a daily basis in comparison to a small markets on the other hand shopping malls are not as available as markets for instance there are three markets adjust near our house but there is just one shopping mall in our town for them or small markets are situated in various locations incentives does getting to a small markets is more convenient moreover markets do not have customers as much as shopping malls there for Market sellers have to sell products more expensive in order to make pr...

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier stage. Do you agree or disagree?

Some communities believe that, it is unfair that everyone should get retired without considering their proficiency but for some ,pupils it is necessary to get retired at an early age and enjoy benefits. Certain occupations do not require a break at a certain age. In this essay, I will discuss certain reasons for this matter and then give my opinion on this statement.

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Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas (in paintings, books, films and songs) in anyway they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

There is an on going discussion around the world that artistic freedom should be restricted or not, even in some democratic countries. I agree with the idea of no restricts because I believe that society’s best interest are served when there is no limitation in artistic fields.

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Some people believe that advertisements targeting children may have negative effects on them, and suggest banning such advertisements as a solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Ever since the liberalization (losing of restriction) of media, advertisements have been its primary source of revenue. Children, who are in their formative years (early stages 0-8), are more likely to be influenced by advertisements than their elder counterparts (peer/equivalent) and are regularly targeted by marketers. It is agreed that this has negative effects on children, thus, shall be banned. This will be proven by looking at how, these advertisements can ultimately make children defiant, (resistant) and play a part in distracting children from academic activities.

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How buildings have changed in comparison in the past

Over the past many years, there have been huge changes in how buildings are designed and built, from the introduction of indoor plumbing to luxurious extravagances like glass windows. There has also been a huge change in the construction industry as a whole, which has affected housing for everyone.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, the society of some nations has been formed from younger people which outnumber than older ones. Although the Young population has many benefits, the drawbacks involved are important to be scrutinized.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, howerver , say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that exercising infrastructures should be built to prompt public health, while others think that those facilities can be replaced by other methods. In my opinion, governments should take several steps to deal with this problem.

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Nowadays many people prefer to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the past, brand name was a minor matter when people were purchasing a product.

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In some countries, many people choose to educate children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Education nowadays plays an important role in modern society. It is common to see parents sending their children to school instead of tuition at home. Some people believe that the kids should be educated in an academic institution while others oppose that they should be coached at their house. From my point of view, although home-based tutelage has some advantages to a certain extent, it has more negative impacts on the next generation.

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Some people think that strick punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Travelling across the city, whether to commute to work or just to get groceries, has become a real challenge due to the increasing traffic accidents occurring every day. Many think the only way to combat driving offences is with more severe punishments. Other sustain there are other ways to achieve safer streets. In this essay I will discuss both views and explain why I believe there are many other ways society can find to prevent traffic accidents from happening.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very importatant for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, people in few countries around the world argue that have a home is necessary than renting. A House is as place for people living, it has an important part to support the quality life. Housing issues is one of serious problem for some people. The condition happen because the number of people population is getting bigger each year while the space of land is limited. House ownership has two condition both positive or negative for people.

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In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of change have occurred? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

Nowadays,It has seen the switch roles among family characters ,for example,the most majority of wife duties have been divided between men and women,although ,these new actions might build more gender equality in the society ,but , It is inevitable this new behaviours are a source of controversies among families ,although ,in my viewpoint,there are much pros than cons for a nation in related this evolution ,so, I am going to bring some piece of evidence to clarify my opinion.

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Today there is a great increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce this problem?

Nowadays there is a dramatic raise in anti-social behavior and lack of respect to each other because of many cases. Moreover, there are some solutions to tackle this problem.

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Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

It cannot be denied that farming work in rural regions has failed to attract the young generation for some reasons. Nevertheless, they should get involved in that kind of job.

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Рeople today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on communities. what are the possible causes and solutions to this problem?

The human contact between people has become less than before, it is true and undeniable, it leads to negative consequences and impacts on society, we should to be more serious and consider causes and seeking solutions to this problem

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Nowadays people like to use new electronic equipment. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, electronic equipment is familiar to most people due to the enormous development in technology. In my opinion, I think it made a great change in our life, which is a positive one. These types of equipment facilitate the work and added joy.

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A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety Therefore some people think that the government should increase spending on defence but spend less on social benefits To what extent do you agree

The defence of the citizens' main responsibility relies on the government's shoulder, it's considered by the population that the authority should rise the spending on it and decrease the social expenditure. I think that it's important to ensure the security of the citizens by giving a reasonable budget should be done by the administrators, taking into account their other responsibilities like social benefits.

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In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

These days, it is a hot issue in many countries that high schools should teach students a comprehensive education to know a broad range of skills, or should educate them to concentrate on particular subjects, which can be directly applied in their future careers. In this essay, my opinion to support the latter views will be presented in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays many people choose to self employed rather than to work for a company or organization why might this be the case ? what could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays, the number of employees who tend to run their own businesses has increased significantly which raises the question that what is the reason and drawback?

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