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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions To what extent do you agree or disagree

House is one of elementary needs of people. In my country, there are 3 basic needs for people, clothes, foods, and house/place for living. In my opinion, owning a home rather than renting one is important for human.

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Genetic engineering is an important issue in society. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it might be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a debatable question for long time whether people still have willingness to pay conventional newspaper in the forthcoming era in consideration that almost all the information will be available for free in the internet. In my opinion, conventional newspaper will be replaced by online media. In the next passage, i will provide some arguments support the projection that paper based newspaper will be less need by people and someday it will be extinct.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem.

There are a lot of criminals who repeat their crimes after they were reconvicted. Certainly, the number of criminals depends on several reasons. And I would like to start with the first of them.

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Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, computer is an important things for our daily life. Some people said it has more drawbacks than advantages. But I extremely disagree with this perspective. In the following paragraphs, I would explain more details to support my opinion.

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Some people think that families have the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think other factors such as television, friend, music. etc. gave biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that family plays a crucial role in children's development. Others believe that television, books, etc., are the factors that can affect a child's growth. This essay will discuss these both views and argue in the favour of the prior.

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Do you agree or disagree with the idea that high schools should prohibit students from using their sell phones at school?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that secondry schools should not allow to using mobile phone for students. I completely agree with above mentioned statement and this essay will delve into discussion of my supporting views in upcoming paragraphs .

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Sone students tend to travel after finishing school and spend time working somewhere instead of going to the university directly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that a few pupils prefer to travel after completing school and getting employed rather than attending university immediately. There are several merits and demerits of it

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More and more people are using computers and other electronic devices to acess information. So, printing of books, magazines and newspapers should not be done. Do you agree or disagree with this?

In the contemporary world, advancement in technology has changed the way people acquire information. An ever increasing number of individuals are utilizing electronic devices such as Tablets, computers, laptops. Several I opine that there is no need to print traditional ne s hard copies of books and magazines. I firmly believe that this statement does not hold much ground. This essay intends to discuss why it is necessary to print such material.

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Many people believe that education standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

in the modern era, most of people belive that education standards have declined, such as in the area of literacy and numeracy. It happen because in the recent times the technology has grown rapidly and it makes there are alot of obstacles to concetrate. In this essay I will discuss the problems and the solutions in way to increase the standards of education.

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Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I hope this letter finds you in the pink of health.I'm happy to disclose my higher studies plan to you.I have opted for a course at Kings institute which is located in Canada.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for the society. I too think that there are lot of advantages to that person if she/he gets married earlier. However, I could not forsee any benefits of an early marriage on the society.

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Alternative energy source that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

It is frequently believed that, the production of green energy such as, solar power wind power and wave power is unaffordable and complex. While the traditional energy sources like oil, gas and coal is cheaper for city and transportaion purpose. I disagree with this belief. In this essay, I will explain the green energy is more productive and harmless for earth.

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Nowadays, it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitats at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people's recreation. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Explain your reasons and support them with specific examples.

In the recent era, replacing the sea creature from their habitats with an aquarium is easily doable with the great enhancement in transportation and technology. However, the question still remains open whether this relocation is beneficial for community's recreation or not. In this essay, we will discuss both points, and I think it's disadvantageous to move the animals from their natural habitats.

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Nowadays, it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitats at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people's recreation. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Explain your reasons and support them with specific examples.

In the recent era, replacing the sea creature from thir habitats to aquarium is easily doable with the great enhancement in the transportation and technology. However, the question still remains open whether this relocation is beneficial for people's recreation or not. In this essay we will discuss both points, and I think it's disadvantegous to move the animals from their natural habitats.

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people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?

It is true that the development of technology makes communication between people easier and the world has become a small village, the individuals all over the globe have the choices to work and live wherever they want, I totally believe that the merits of this outweigh the demerits.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why it might be the case? What could be the disadvantages if being self-employed?

Nowadays, it is a common belief that a lot of communities believe that self-employed could be more beneficial than employees. However, there is a more persuasive argument that self-employed has some risks such as unstable income and hard time management.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

The society now has various types of music.,n this essay, we will be discussing on the importance of music,as some people are of the believe that traditional music of a nation is more relevant than the international music,while others feel these way I'm of contrary oppinion.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is considered people in a country who can not speak a primary language can cause critical problems like social problems and practical problems. I completely agree with that because these people can not make new friends easily, and solving problems becomes so hard for them.

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NOWADAYS ROBOTS DO MORE AND MORE JOBS INSTEAD OF HUMANS. DOES THIS DEVELOPMENT HAVE MORE ADVANTAGES OR DISADVANTAGES?

As new technologies continue to emerge, more and more organizations are beginning to adopt it and make changes to the way they run. One of these changes is the replacement of humans by robots in jobs that were formally executed by humans. While this may be seen as an advancement of some sort, I seriously stand against it as I believe that the risks and disadvantages associated with it outweighs the benefits.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some professors suggest that learning a foreign language in primary schools is better for children rather than secondary school.In this essay, it is clear that the advantages outweigh the drawbacks.The benefits are that not only children are likely to master the language if they learn earlier but also it can help them to improve the brain function. The disadvantage is confusion with their native tongue which is not entirely proved.

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