IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 497

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, children are busy with their studies as many subjects has been added in their academic studies which is a topic of concern. I agree with the notion that extra curricular activities should be added in their free time .

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that the biggest environmental matter is losing of certain species of animals and plants. However, others claim that there are vital issues now. I strongly agree that losing species for animals and plants is a big problem because it will affect air pollution and agriculture.

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Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ future career success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument about schools solely provide beneficial subjects for the success of student's future career and argues that music and sport classes are not necessary. This essay is completely disagreed with the statement, because smarts students may not necessarily success and not all people gifted with academic's skills, so this system only benefits some group of people.

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In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more commonplace than face-to-face meetings. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the era of modern technology, communication can be done easily. In many offices, online conversation is commonly to use instead of eyes-to-eyes meetings. I agree with this statements that people perefer to communicate by online before directly meet. I also believe phenomenon have advantages and disadvantages. I will first focus on the advantages first then moving to look at disadvantages.

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In modern society, fashion is becoming more and more popular in people’s choice of clothes. Why? Do you think it is positive development or negative development?

In this modern era, the fashion industry has been revolutionising as compared to the past. In these days, the fashion is quite renowned also the individual's preference due to the advert and technology. I think it is a positive development and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Social networking platforms indeed are an integral part of modern life. While a faction of poeple holds the notion that social media enable digital communication and helps to be active in society, others argue that social media usage has several demerits. This essay will delve into both viewpoints and explain my support for the former view with relevant illustrations.

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Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential for us to learn history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

History plays a crucial and significant role in everyone life because people can control themselves to their roots also ot enhances the knowledge and information about their ancestors. Some people argue that it is a waste of time and others think it is important to have history subject in the schools . I believe that it is not worth to attend history classes.

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Some people believe that mobile phone converstions should be banned in crowded and social places. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Due to the advancement of technology, it become very convenient and comfortable for all the individuals to keep in touch with parents and near and dear ones. Some people believe that usage of phone to make call should be banned in the public areas. While others are not agree with the notion

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed by a group of people that, It is better to simmer down in an unsatisfactory situation while some people think that, tying to improve an unpleasant phase of life is better. Personally, I strongly agree with the second opinion.

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some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People argue about the responsibility of taking care of the environment. Most believe that the government has to take part on it, whereas others have the opinion that it should to be protected by everybody. This essay deeply agrees with the later position and the reasons will be discribed in the following lines.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is ubiquitous that enhancing public health, especially in sport centres, is the best way to provide health infrastructure. According to the supporter of this statement, advanced facilities in the sport centres are the greatest solution to changing people's lifestyles. In contrast, the opposant argue that allocating more funds in new sports facilities are a waste of money. This essay will elaborate these contrasting views and offer the writer's opinion.

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Advantages and disadvantages of being a music lover? why do people enjoy listening to music?

Universal music group chairman and CEO said in September 2022 that 100,000 tracks were being added to music platforms every day. This statistics shows how closely modern people and music are connected. There are both merits and demerits of this phenomenon. The following essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of being a music lover.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museums and art galleries are claimed to be unimportant as people have access to see historical objects or art works by computer. In my opinion, that action can be categorized as a form of disrespect to the artist, specifically if we view it illegaly, who may had painted with all their money and tears.

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Advantages and disadvantages of working abroad. Why do people prefer to work abroad?

Nowadays, working abroad is one of the most discussed issues among people. Residents leave families and countries looking for more profitable occupations in other countries. In fact this phenomenon is not only positive, but also negative. The following essay will present all the merits and demerits of working overseas

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the world faces a lot more environmental issues than it did in the past and many are increasing rapidly. It is believed by some that the main environmental issue currently is related to the extinction of animals and plants. While others think there are many other major issues to be considered. In the following essay I will be discussing both point of views.

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What is the reason of increasing the number of population in cities?

Cities around the world are getting larger, for majority of modern residents prefer to dwell in urban areas. From my view there are both positive and negative sides of this process. This essay present all the merits and demerits of this issue.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Kids are nation builders, and how we are developing them is going to decide the future of the country . However, it is found that offsprings are being distracted and losing control over studies. Although this could be a result of electronic gadgets and social pressure, implementing mindfulness and cocentration in school curriculam makes things better.

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News plays an important part of most people´s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

Nowadays, news have a significant part of most individuals lives, so the news are in tv, papers, magazines , internet or socialmedia in every moment, in every city and country.

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Share your academic and non-academic accomplishments (applicable to undergraduate and vocational students) and any relevant industry experience (only for vocational students). Please elaborate on the processes and skills you've acquired during your previous or ongoing degree program.

I believe discovering joy in learning encourages individuals to approach challenges with unconventional ideas and cultivate innovative solutions. Hence, medical school did not stop me from pursuing my passion. In the past two and half years, I have built a socio-health platform while maintaining my 3.61 GPA. I am grateful because my platforms, Little Scientia and Healthy Higinia, allow me to resolve health-related social issues such as dietary problems and impaired children development directly. Various institutions appreciated my efforts, and I have been awarded funding grants four times.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that clothes can represent about a person’s culture and character. but I argue that type of clothes isn’t link to about a person’s culture and character. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the latter view.

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