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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

some governments argue that economical boom and progress are more important than any other topics in a country, while i believe that other measures have the same importance . In this essay I will explain both these point of views .

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at presauding us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, advertising has a significant role in our daily life which leads to some people think that they fascinated the public to buy things while others are in contrast, they agree on this it is a useless way to presauding people to buy things.My firm conviction is that advertising helps people to find the product according to needs as well as their interest.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative a negative development?

Digital phones became an indeed thing in kids day to day life. From my viewpoint, its positive impacts cannot overcome the negative impacts. This essay will discuss why this became a trending thing among children and its pros and cons feedback.

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Television has become an important part of our lives. What are the causes behind it? Is it a positive or negative development?

Television is not merely an innovative piece of technology but also a curse for humankind. Nowadays, it becomes a pertinent factor of our daily lives. Although it has plether of useful benifits, it always a negative development in people growth. It certainly holds many repercussions behind it. This essay will discuss causes for TV playing an essential part in our practice and will provide alogical conclusion.

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You work in a very big office. There is a popular and cheap restaurant in the building. The boss is thinking of removing the restaurant and replacing it with a childcare facility for the working parents in the office. You have been asked to respond to an opinion survey. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice. Option A: I think we should keep the restaurant. Option B: I think we should replace the restaurant with a childcare facility.

While I see the benefit of having a restaurant, I believe having a childcare facility is a better option because it leads to the protection of the underage and provides greater revenue in terms of investments.

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You and your family visit the local shopping mall every week. However, it has become more and more difficult to find a parking spot recently. You would like to let the shopping mall manager know about this problem. Your email should do the following things: Describe the problem you are having with the mall’s parking. Explain what you and your family have to do in order to visit the shopping mall now. Provide some suggestions for how the mall manager can solve this problem.

Yesterday evening, My wife, teenage son and I went to the mall to buy a gift for my son in celebration of his excellent grade and profound performance in the completion of the 4th-grade exam. More so, we have visited the Victoria shopping mall numerous times in the past and noticed the great decline in the availability of packing space, but our experience yesterday was the worst we have ever had. Hence I will kindly crave your indulgence to utilize this medium to express my complaint and seek a solution.

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Many teachers assign homework to students everyday. Dou you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your anwser.

There have been various opinions on whether students should be assigned homework or not. There may be advantages and disadvantages to this discussion which we will explore further in this essay.

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Some experts suggest that when a country is already rich , any addition increase in economic wealth does not make its citizen happier To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many specialist believe that citizens would not feel being over the moon with going up in economic aspect when living in a wealthy condition . While somebody look this opinion like an accurate thing , I would argue that that is not right .

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Some people trust their first impressions about a person's character because they believe their judgements are generally correct. Other people don't judge a person's character quickly because they believe first impressions are wrong. Get ready to to talk to an examiner about this issue.

It is commonly believed that, the first meeting has significance for both sides. Many consider that figuring out somebody's personality and inner intelligence is possible with the first glance. But others advocate that if you want to clarify person's character quickly, considering prior impression is mainly redundant. I intend to delve into the the pros and cons of both approachs.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

Despite modern professions increase such as online content maker, blogger with high payment which could attract millions of teenagers and adults there are other millions of young people who want to work for the government so the competition between two generations for white collar jobs is still exist.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

success means not only winning , it is measuring the thing , which we like ,it shows a human's dedication towards an aim ,some tasks may need team cooperation.

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Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?

"For some people, it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school, while for others, girls and boys should be educated separately. Everybody is free to give their opinion. Of course, there are pros and cons to the two options.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people support the idea of big investment on expanding new railroads for high speed trains between cities. In contrast, some argue it should be fund to improve the existing transportation system. If we use an example from developing country like Thailand, improving original commune system is a better solution.

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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that growing and planting trees in cities and towns are more important than constructing more housing accommodation. I partially agree with this opinion for several reasons.

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The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree?

It is undeniable that the most effective way to become more healthy is to do a regular excercise. However, in my opinion, there are some factors that should be taken into consideration to keep our bodies fit.

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Most people think that Money Can’t Buy Happiness . Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our modern life,more and more individuals believe that nobody can't purchase happiness through wealth.From my way of thinking,this type of opinion is not true.This essay agrees that people may buy almost all things with money.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In recent times, most individuals choose to be sole proprietors rather than work for a cooperating group. This essay will elucidate both reasons and give the negative aspects of being a sole proprietor.

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Online shopping is increasing dramatically how could this trend affect our environment and the kind of jobs required ?

Online shopping has become more popular in recent years. This trend affect the environment in many ways such as by encouraging delivery vehicles on roads. It also change the kind of jobs required to encourage this trend which I will discuss in detail in forthparagraphs.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. What impact does it have on the environmental and people? Who lost their jobs because of it?

It is irrefutable fact that in this modern era an increasing number of more and more humans believe that online shopping is too well-known. This is the reason, it is making a good effect on individualsʼ life with its convenience and simplicity . Yet, this tendency has negative impact on the surrounding world , as well as on the occupation market . This is the reason, many employees can lose their profession .

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