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‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to sup-port charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

Helping charity is a controversial issue in contemporary culture, and

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Keeping things in order is very crucial both at home and workplace. It helps you identify wanted and unwanted things. A clean space also helps in calming and concentrating rather than a shabby place. A clean space also is a matter of personal hygiene. This essay will discuss my opinion on having a clean space.

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Mobilizing Financial Resources to Turn the “potential” into the “practical” market

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The economic growth in developing and developed countries is making people richer. However, the research indicates that people in the developing countries is happier than people in developed countries. What is your opinion on this

There is no doubt that economic advancement is making people wealthier in developed and developing countries. However, the standard of life has improved a lots during last decade and the population living in developed nations are much happier than in under developed nations. In this essay we will try to intend some of the reasons for the above mentioned argument.

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People today generally have better lives than people in the past did

For the past centuries, peoples' lives improved significantly due to technological, medicine and welfare developments. While some people think that the past life dwellers were happier and generally had better lives, I strongly believe that the modern lifestyle brings far more benefits to mankind.

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Today parents spend little free time with their children. Why is it the case? Who are more affected: parents or children?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the amount of time parents spend with their offsprings currently. In this essay, I am going to critically discuss a major reason leading to this reality and show who will be affected considerably.

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Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that these days the significance of technology becoming very popular. However, the question: Are digital book and the development of technologies will change the old ways such as newspapers and magazine? Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

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some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace tradtional newspaper and magazines to what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days using technology in our life becoming very strong side. However the question, are the traditional newspaper and magazines less use than Ecommere world ?the topic is consider one of the controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to examine this phenomena from both viewpoints.

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Applying for a job interview has become important. What are the causes and solutions for the same?

I am writing this letter to apply for the advert inviting job applications for the post of Company Secretary in your esteemed organization. I am the right candidate for the job and have enclosed my resume for your perusal.

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

Violence rate has been increasing all over the world while it is growing up considerably among youths. The origins of this situation seem to stem from three factors, while several remedies appear to be open to us.

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Some people think air travel has more negative impact than positive on modern life,to what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about whether air travel is a positive trend in modern life. Personally, I support the idea that air travel makes it easier to travel all around the world despite the fact that it poses threat to human’s life and the environment.

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the road access to a city hospital between 2007 to 2010.

The given map illustrates the alterations of the road access to a city hospital between 2007 to 2010. The general overview here is that there are considerable discrepancies between the two maps after the construction take place.

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In many countries, school have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The Covid 19 pandemic is a problem for all of humanity, it not only affects people's daily lives but also causes other activities to be suspended or halted. Similar to education in Vietnam, universities are required to accept students to study online instead of having to go to campus as usual and it makes a difference in students' daily lives. Any few differences will be highlighted for better understanding of the matter.

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Although most people are much richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful, and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels. What are the main causes of the stress of the modern life , how could stress be reduced?

These days, due to social development, people have a better life than before. However, the proportion of people facing stress at high levels. Thus , it is important

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Nowadays,many xschools find it profitable to sell food and sugary drinks to students during lunch time breaks. Is this a positive or negative development?

Selling junk foods and high level on sugar drinks help many schools to make an important profit.

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People in big cities are facing many healthy challenges due to a high level of air pollution. What cause air pollution in big cities? Can you suggest some ways to deal with this situation?

The pie charts give information regarding the proportion of nutrient types including Sodium, Saturated fat and added sugar are contained in meals in the United States. In order to remain good health, it has to balance between three substances

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1.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance leaning from the internet than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of development outgoing the disadvantages?

Nowadays，many universities and colleges have not allowed students to learn in school due to the COVID-19 pandemic. Therefore, the qualifications are now given to students through distance leaning instead of teaching in the classroom. I think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

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the international tourist arrivals in five various parts of the world in four different years with five years intervals,starting from 1990.

The given line graph illustrates the information about the international tourist arrivals in five various parts of the world in four different years with five years intervals,starting from 1990. The general overview here is that North America was the most of the number of tourist arrivals.

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Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Gyms and health clubs are believed to be the first-rate way to keep in shape. However, this idea is not straightforward and some people cite that daily routine activities such as walking and going up the stairs are sufficient. So, the views are on both sides which will be discussed in this essay.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food.

Nowadays, there are many fast food restaurants on the streets which are accessible and attract many people. As a consequence, a number of people around the world suffer from health problems from consuming high fats and low nutrients food. In my opinion, imposing higher tax on unhealthy food is not the promising solution.

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