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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The number of people being sent to prison is increasing year by year. While some people believe prison is the best way to tackle crime, others suggest that community service is more successful.”

As the world becomes well adapted to globalization and modernization, the crime rates are also soaring than never before which results in a drastic increase in the population in the prisons. To diminish the rate of crimes in society, some argue that prison is the ultimate solution, and others contrarily, suggest that community services would be more appropriate. Both of the aforementioned will be discussed by elaborating on the negative sides involved with the influences that will be obtained in prisons and the moral benefits of social services.

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Many adults think that childhood and schooldays are the best years of a person's life. That is reason for this? do you agree or disgree

Undoubtedly, childhood period is golden period of life. Some individuals have the belief that childhood time is the golden time of life. Therefore, I accord with this assertion completely. In upcoming composition, I will elaborate more about this in detail.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is argued that although there are agricultural advances, increasing number of individuals still suffering from hunger. The main reason for this is an increase in population and some people are unable to afford products, and the most viable solution is to encourage people not to waste.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone app is becoming increasingly common. Does these development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Recently, there has been a growing trend of online purchase for products in different countries. Although, this make purchase of essential products quicker and easier, it could potentially result in shopping addiction. While there are various advantages and disdvantages associated with this topic, I am of the opinion that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

The economic independacy is essential for the development of any country. In several countires around the globe governments prioritises economic developement rather any other concerns. In this essay I will discuss some advatages and disagvantages of this.

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Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages?

These is no doubt that technological advancement creates the world into a global village. Now people can easily connect with foreign culture easily through various international media like TV, films and magazines.

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You should spend about 40 mins. Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are the significant numbers of languages that some of them are comman and others are less comman. Some people think that a new language has to be invented for international interaction. I totally disagree with this point and believe the demerits overshadow its merits. This essay will discuss both in detail.

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nowadays global warming change alot so what cause this problem and give effective solution

Global warming has been a threat to the enivronment for quite some time, and we have taken steps to control it but they are not as effective in real world as they were in papers. Global warming is known as raise in the global temprature due to greenhouse gases and pollution.

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Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

In the modern era, action movies as well as games are extremely popular among the youngsters. A part of society opines that such films and computer games should not be allowed as they have adverse effects while others reject the notion. Well, I agree with the first notion and the reasons behind both viewpoints will be explained in upcoming paragraphs. Thus, will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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Nuclear Energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand. Do you agree or disagree?

Prolong and competitive debates have been held on the topic of the nuclear energy. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using nuclear plants? What consequences can it have? In this essay I will put forward this subject and justify both sides.

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People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

society who are living in crowded towns have more cons compared to those who live in the suburb.

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It is difficult for people to get enough physical exercise in cities. What are the causes and solutions?

Exercise is one of the most important activity to maintain healthy lifestyle. However, these days it is hard for majority of urban people to do exercise. This essay will discuss the cause of it and will provide the soultions for the problem.

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The number of obese children is growing over the past years. Some say that parents should be punished for letting their child becoming fat. Discuss and give your opinion.

In the last few years, more boys and girls are becoming very overweight , and this has made a number of people suggest that their mothers and fathers should be penalised for such changes. Possible reasons why parents may have to be punished are because ,they are responsible for their children and are required to have suitable nutrition plans for them.

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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays it is very commonly seen how the reel-life stars and celebrities opine about almost every affair which may not be relevant to their career and stream of the profession and has caused a major impact among the people who look up to them. I believe it is a negative development, and in the following paragraphs, I shall propagate my viewpoints on this phenomenon.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs ( for example, working for a charity , improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children.

It is mentioned that some voluntary works for free should be compulsory part of high school programs. In this essay, I discuss on this topic. Then I represent my viewpoint.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It can be very useful in learning a foreign language. A few people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language for the purpose to travel or work in abroad countries. While others say that it is not the only idea to learn a foreign language. In this essay, I will explain both the views by providing examples to support my opinion.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

There is an argument from some part of worlds that to achieve what they want and need, they have to work hard on it. In my opinion, this can gives kids some encouragement to reach their own dreams and they are dedicating most of their time to it. However, from the statement, I believe some of them can be stressed since they do not have time to playing and they would be think it’s a mess if they had a failure.

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Some people think the best way to solve the traffic congestions in cities is to provide free public transports for 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A fraction or individuals think argue that unpaid transit facilities during day and night is a top-notch remedy to prevent traffic bottlenecks. Although it could encourage people to commute through public motor vehicles, this alone cannot solve the traffic headache for a government.

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It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centers and only bicycles be allowed insted. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, in this modern era, a number of modification has been taken place in this nation. Therefore, some people believe that cars and public transport vehicles such as bus, trains and other should be banned from cities and people should use only bicycles. I partially agree with this statement owing to some crucial reasons which I will hashout in my further paragraphs.

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Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays many people believe that one of the most effective ways to reduce air pollution is conducting car-free days, while others contend that other options are more efficient. I believe both views are valid, but car-free days exceed the benefits to overcome an issue of air pollution than another way.

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