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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, school have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The Covid 19 pandemic is a problem for all of humanity, it not only affects people's daily lives but also causes other activities to be suspended or halted. Similar to education in Vietnam, universities are required to accept students to study online instead of having to go to campus as usual and it makes a difference in students' daily lives. Any few differences will be highlighted for better understanding of the matter.

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Although most people are much richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful, and the number of people suffering from stress is at record levels. What are the main causes of the stress of the modern life , how could stress be reduced?

These days, due to social development, people have a better life than before. However, the proportion of people facing stress at high levels. Thus , it is important

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Nowadays,many xschools find it profitable to sell food and sugary drinks to students during lunch time breaks. Is this a positive or negative development?

Selling junk foods and high level on sugar drinks help many schools to make an important profit.

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People in big cities are facing many healthy challenges due to a high level of air pollution. What cause air pollution in big cities? Can you suggest some ways to deal with this situation?

The pie charts give information regarding the proportion of nutrient types including Sodium, Saturated fat and added sugar are contained in meals in the United States. In order to remain good health, it has to balance between three substances

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1.Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance leaning from the internet than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of development outgoing the disadvantages?

Nowadays，many universities and colleges have not allowed students to learn in school due to the COVID-19 pandemic. Therefore, the qualifications are now given to students through distance leaning instead of teaching in the classroom. I think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

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the international tourist arrivals in five various parts of the world in four different years with five years intervals,starting from 1990.

The given line graph illustrates the information about the international tourist arrivals in five various parts of the world in four different years with five years intervals,starting from 1990. The general overview here is that North America was the most of the number of tourist arrivals.

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Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Gyms and health clubs are believed to be the first-rate way to keep in shape. However, this idea is not straightforward and some people cite that daily routine activities such as walking and going up the stairs are sufficient. So, the views are on both sides which will be discussed in this essay.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food.

Nowadays, there are many fast food restaurants on the streets which are accessible and attract many people. As a consequence, a number of people around the world suffer from health problems from consuming high fats and low nutrients food. In my opinion, imposing higher tax on unhealthy food is not the promising solution.

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the number of academic staff members by gender across the faculties of a major university in 2012.

The given bar chart illustrates the information about the number of academic staff members by gender across the faculties of a major university in 2012. The general overview here is that the most male staff was work at Engineering faculty, while Education faculty had the majority of female staff.

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Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The choice to choose what form of employement to take, has always been at the hands of every individual for instance full-time jobs or casual jobs, depending on the pleasure they derive from taking such employement. This essay will be dicussing why people prefer casual jobs or full-time jobs and also state my opinoin on the subject.

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Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

Different studies say that when inmates go out of jail, they again do some crimes. This may be because there are no laws or social programs for change the behaivour of them. In my opinion, government ougth to create laws and invest money in this problem.

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Advertising discouroges peopre from being differenl individuals by moking us oll wonl lo do lhe some ond look fhe sorne. Do you crgree or disogree?

The role of advertisements in destroying individuality has sparked much debate in the recent times. Some people opine that advertisements eliminate individual sense of identity, making people indistinguishable from each other. l, however, disagree with this allegation.

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Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations. Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

Air traffic is organized movement of aircrafts to fly from one place to another. Every mode of transportation plays part in damaging the environment. Aviation is one of them. I strongly agree that that higher authorities should impose more taxes on plane tickets to reduce amount of passengers which will lead to less noise pollution. Moreover, lesser the travelers lesser the airport construction.

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some people clain that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for giovernments to make it a legal requirenment

People who claim that domestic waste's recycling is not common in population, emphasize that it should be required legal by governments. Some countries are demanded spesific rules for domestic waste, while most of them don't have any certain approaches. In fact, whilst most Europian counties have to bury their organic garbage to their garden to dispose and classify , in Turkey we don't have to do it and, because of the different between these two governmental approaches our country is dirtier than them and we are not able to use these wastes as recyclable source.

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the figure for visitors to Ashdown Museum and the result of survey asking visitors how satisfied they with their visit during the year before and after it was refurbished.

The given table and pic chart illustrate the information about the figure for visitors to Ashdown Museum and the result of a survey asking visitors how satisfied they with their visit during the year before and after it was refurbished. The general overview here is that an increase was seen in the number of visitors after its renovated, and the satisfaction of the people very satisfied with their visit was also increase during the same period.

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successul sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

As a fan of many types of sports, I am nevertheless surprised knowing that successful sports professionals, Jordan, for example, can earn much more money than other successful professionals in other sectors.

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five various product category in term of the number of export earnings and the change of values proportion from 2015 to 2016.

The given bar chart and table illustrate the information about five various product categories in terms of the number of export earnings and the change of values proportion from 2015 to 2016. The general overview here is that the majority of export earnings was petroleum products, and the values of gems and jewellery experienced a downward trend, while the other products increased.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Nowadays, a substantial number of waste products increases dramatically in domestics and overseas. Some individuals believe that the recycling matters which occur from consumption in households have declined. So, those who recommend a good method in favour of rising awareness in recycling so that governments must have a regulation to control people in daily life. This essay will point out the laws can convince citizens in reduction their waste and also give the opinion.

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the number of man and woman participants in the Olympic and average number of participants between 1924 and 2012.

The given bar chart and line graph illustrate the information about the number of men and woman competitions in the Olympics and the average number of participants between 1924 and 2012. The general overview here is that an increase was seen in the number of females more than males, and the figure for participants was considerable went up throughout the period.

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

In this pandemic of Covid-19, there is a significant increase to shop online instead of door to door. The big reason of click and collect is lockdowns where all cities of the world are closed for customers to shop inside. Everyone is using the contect less pickups and drop offs to avoid the virus. There are several advantages and disadvantages of purchasing products online for both customers and sellers in the following ,paragraphs.

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