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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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It is responsibilty of government to take care of health of citizens or citizens should take care of their own health. Give your opinion.

Access to Healthcare facilities is the most basic need of our citizens. Although some people believe that authorities should be solely accountable for taking care of the health of its residents, I somewhat believe that apart from the government, people should also take care of their wellbeing. This essay elaborates and discusses my viewpoint by juxtaposing the both arguments.

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Research into new types of medicines and treatments are essential for improving health and dealing with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments?

Econonic development not only brings material lifestyle but also brings more sickness to the population in nowadays. Research should be needed to findout new medicines to improve folks well-being with illness. Although, the main argument is that who sponsers capital whether the authorities, companies or people. I think the government should allocate more funds of these. This essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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IELTS Writing The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer and the poor are even getting poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In this day and age, the world faces a gap between higher and lower levels of society, as is clearly shown. The rich become richer and the poor get poorer; this phenomenon is because of the low level of interindividualization.

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interest in homeschooling is becoming more widespread around the world. in your opinion, should school be compulsory for all children, or should families be allowed the right to choose to educate their children at home?

Nowadays, homeschooling is becoming increase than past, people have a debate about children should go to schools compulsory rather than attending homeschool. I strongly believe that children should go to school for studies, in this essay I will explain the reasons for my point of view.

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Unemployment is one of the most serious problems facing developed nations today. What are the advantages and/or disadvantages of reducing the working week to thirty five hour

in most developed nations, unemployment problem is a common situation at present. Some say that mitigating the working hours a week can assist to reduce the joblessness. I accept that this action has many advantages although it would lead to some troubles. This essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people think media should be allowed to publicize information on someone’s private life. Some others believe that media should be regulated in this regard. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and relevant examples.

At present, technology has been advanced in many fields, especially the comminication sectors. A few think that channels should be permited to announce details on people's confidential matters who are being celebrity while others opine that media should be needed some controlling power to avoid these kinds of adverse effects. I will discuss both views and also state my perspectivce as the conclusion.

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For reducing the case of crimes, the only best way is to increase the punishment Do you agree or disagree?

These days, an increasing number of crime cases calls for the government to take measures to tackle this issue. Some believe that the best way to decrease the rates of crime is to give longer sentences to criminals. I do not disagree with this, and this essay will explain why I think this way.

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Being selfish is considered a reason for job success? Give your opinion. Reasons with examples

The secret of being good at the job is to become a selfish person. I totaly disagree with this statement as to become sucess, an employee need to have a good teamwork and good working environment.

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Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student’s home country?

Nowadays, with countries connecting closer with each other, more and more students choose to study abroad, whcich leads to a discussion that whether the phemomenon is beneficial to the student's home country. It depends on each countries' conditions, which can be influenced by their population, their economic and their policy. To most of countries, it does have some benefits.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued whether girls and boys should study in separate schools or they should attend mixed schools. Although studying in separate schools help both genders to stay more focused towards their goals, I believe that co-educational schools help them to learn how to treat opposite gender in a respectful manner.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not fuction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

When it comes to living in society, some would argue that the existence of rules and laws is pivotal otherwise people would do whatever they wish for. In my opinion, however, it would be possible to live in a society which does not have any laws as we do have ethics and moral already in us.

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all cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric car should replace them. Do you agree or disagree ?

In the world, nowadays, electric vehicles should substitute any car that uses fossil fuels such as diesel, petrol and others. Personally, I believe that using electric cars could

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The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a debateable issue in teaching process to teach student to be good in attitude. While applying physical punishment on student cannot be applied in school due to rejection, this option could be the way to improve children manner. I really disagree by introducing physical punishment in learning process at school because there are many alternatives to increase student mindset to be good.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

New houses are essential because of increased population, however only villages are the left out places to construct them. It is believed that the natural environtment in rural area to be reserved and should not have any buildings over there. I agree with this point of view and this essay discuss both of them before stating my opinion.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the growth in demand on an online version of books causes the fall for paper ones. I am opinionated that this an edge-cutting innovation can brings series of benefits such as easy access into people’s lives, while others believe there are more drawbacks.

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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to work harder. Do you agree?

It is thought that head managers have to offer a long holiday for employees in order to fulfill their complex tasks. In this essay, this topic will be discussed in addition to my opinion.

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In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this? (Write 250 words.)

Many people in the world want to be wealthy. They take time to work and develop their country for a good life and facilities. That is the reason in the present time there is much economic growth. And then after economic growth that gives people life easier and richer than the past. But sometimes so much money does not mean a good life. It has two main reasons that I think about the paragraph below.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reason for this? How can people research this?

In many nations there are large number of individuals that are giving attention to the past of the building they are staying in. There are many motive for this, mainly it is the curiosity of the individuals. Moreover, it will help them understand the architecture if they want to remodel it. People can gain knowledge about it by discussing with civil engineer and researching it online.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fast food is quite popular among the world, as a result, conventional cuisine are replaced by fast food in many nations. This trend has an adverse effect on society, families and individuals. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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More and more parents allow their children to play on computers as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development overweigh the disadvantages?

These days, more and more people incorporate technology devices in many different context in their life, no exception for parents. They start to think some advantages for their children and let them exploring deeply, especially on computers since very young age. In my point of view, although there is some negative consequences but the positive effects overweigh them.

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