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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the declamation of do secondary students should study one subject of international news in school I will strongly agree with this thought. Yes, secondary school students should study one subject as internatonal news as a school subject. My opinion for this is enlisted below.

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Now-a-days many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

The transformation of drastic change in the economic system this past few years has taken a toll on the way people behave and work. Many people start to build a business and be self-employed, leading them to leave their corporate jobs. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits of why people choose to work for themselves and the disadvantages of being self-employed.

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nowadays because of digital technology it s possible for not only studious but also individuals to produce their own films. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Knowing about the digital technology is very easy for people who live in the current generation. But it is considered to be a vast topic because it has a wide range information and technology involved in it. Nowadays individuals at any age has the capability of using the technology. Besides, digital technology has the greatest imapact on young people. So this essay illustrates the boons and banes about producing a movie by the individuals.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is argued that by working hard, people can get what want. The main benefits of this are individuals will continuously make effort and people will have higher self-esteem, however, the key drawbacks are too much emphasis in hard working and unable to face failures.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices

It is argued by many that the today's world has provided us with a wide range of options, so that it is hard to make a decision. Meanwhile, I am inclined to agree will this notion that the modern world alternation has put us through this situation

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, music is considered to be a key in gathering people of different age by the common music taste and creating multi-cultural communities, and I strongly agree with it.

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New forms of money are becoming extremely popular nowadays. Is this a positive development or adding risk to the system? Should new money technology face greater regulation and scrutiny? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt that the usage of money has changed significantly in the last years. Cryptocurrencies and digital payment platforms have became an integral part of our live. While there are some drawbacks, I tend to believe that there are more positive sides.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your work place tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this ?

Organizing and neatness is vital to success things in life. Some have believe, people need to keep their house and office organized and clean. I think it is crutial to have a unstressful life. I totally agree with this opinion and I will explain the reason in the further.

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"Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. "

"Most people agree that cities should give the right graffiti designers to show their skills in public spaces, While others do not prefer to allow that type of art on the walls of the street. Personally, I believe that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti, I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting a university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

A gap year has been a topic of discussion of parents and students for years. In some nations, young students graduationg high school are encouraged to work or take their time off to travel for a year before furthering their higher education. Personally, there are both benefits and drawbacks for those who decide to take a break for a year. The advantages and disadvantages are to be elaborated with reasons to support.

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Nowadays, the use of private cars is increasing dramatically and moeny spent on the road system is rising. Who should pay for this? Some people think the users should pay, while others think the government should pay. Discuss and give your opinion

with the repid development of society, the numbers of private cars are growing dramaticaly in recent years, and the cost on road transporation system is quickly growing corespondingly. It has become a noticeable debate on whether the car drivers shoul pay for fees or the government should pay. In my opition of view, Government should take more responsibilities.

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The charts below the main reasons for the study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The bar graph illustrates the main purposes of studying for the students in different age groups, which the reported reasons are for career and for interest. The other graph depicts the employer support that the employees gain, which is also represented in various age groups.

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supermarket sells more import products than local products. explain the advantage and disadvantage

There are two main reasons why supermarkets are selling foreign products more. Firstly, because there is unbearable demand of customers that favor more quality product provided by import supplier than local ones provide and supermarkets sees that as an opportunity to gain more profit. Secondly, due to prices. Even though some stuffs are imported, surprisingly the price can be cheaper than locally produced items and it is reducing cost for supermarket.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of university?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that people tend to think that graduates should be provided with the comprehension and skills which they will need in their workplace. However, others think that the real responsibility of a university is to give access to knowledge, no matter the course is important for employer or not. It is undeniable that education has become an essential part of our life.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It seems that there are little to no differences between each nation since similar products can be bought no matter where you live. Some people have a pessimistic opinion about this trend since it has negative effects on the country’s culture. While I believe that this opinion has credibility, its benefits such as better quality products and better understanding of other cultures are things needs to take into account.

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and healtg care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays increased number of obesity in adolascents is a vital issue. This could result many issues in their future in terms of health problems and health care costs. In my opinion, changed food habits and lack of exercise are major reasons behind this issue. In this essay, I will discuss some solution for this problem.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify these problems and suggest ways through which governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Nowadays, most countries facing overpopulation issues. A lot of people live in city areas than before therefore citizens face many problems. In this essay, I will address some problems and solutions for those matters.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Although some people think that we should not change things which affect our lives badly such as working in the job that we don’t like or shortage of money, others believe that we should change and improve these conditions. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and explain why we should change situations that we do not want to live.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, advertistments are more powerful. Some TV commercials specially focus on young children, it is should not allowed. I totally agree with this statement . In this essay I will discuss further and explain the reasons for my agreement.

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In the past, most working people had only one job. However, nowadays, more and more people have more than one job at the same time. What are the reasons for this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of having more than one job?

Recently with expansion of priority duties and increase the fee of primary life’s requirements. Most people have done more than one occupation at the same time.In this essay, I will highlight on the reasons of this issue and its benefits and drawbacks.

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