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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Leaders and directors in organizations are normally older people. Some people think having a younger leader would be better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Commonly speaking, heads of institutions are older members of society. According to some people's opinion younger administrators would influence the management system in a better way. I am inclined to agree with both of the ideas for a number of convincing reasons.

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Some argue that patriotism is the primary cause of wars globally. Others feel that it serves to prevent less ethical politicians from running a country and starting wars. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wars have increased by a great deal recently, primarily because of patriotism. However, a politician who is devouted to his own country will likely be against violence and bloodshed. In this essay, I will discuss why I agree with this notion and form a conclusion.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

In the present world, there have many many innovations and progresses made in terms of agricultural products. Despite this fact, there are still many deprived people suffering from hunger around the glob. There are many reasons why this situation occured. In the following essay, I will discuss the reasons and ways to combat this problem.

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The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of high street shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

These days, virtual shopping is quite popular across the world, as a result, small retail shops and street shops will be ended. I strongly agree with this notion because it provides more varieties and choices with discounts as well as it saves more time. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Recent times have, no doubt, seen a phenomenon among adolescents being employed during their studies in multiple countries. While this brings varied benefits for the group, it poses a few negative impacts on other age workers. This essay is going to hashout these positives and will mention the downsides as well.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

There are a multitude of people who experience life doing work they are not passionate for, or they possess no good skills for. In this essay,I will discuss why such a situation occurs, mostly due to financial struggles and speak about the consequences that arise as a result.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, some adults teach their children that if they work harder then they will get payback. This way has some benefits and also a few drawbacks, the following content will outline the explaination.

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People nowadays are more interested in technology rather than their physical fitness .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people are busy with different use of gadgets for their personal purposes and they can not spend much time looking after their physical improvement. Therefore,I firmly agree with this statement and I will discuss my viewpoints further in this essay.

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Nowadays, stress-related illnesses are becoming increasily common. What do you think is the cause of this? What solution can you suggest?

Stress-related sickness is one of serious problems that humankind is facing these days, with a concerning increase in reported cases. There are two primary causes, and some solutions should be proposed to address this pressing issues.

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The tendency of people to imitate each other is evident in the popularity of fashionable clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

In the modern world the public has few jobs at the same time. Is it useful for people or no? Experts and people seem to have been discussing this occasion for a long time. Some will agree with the statement, whereas there are opponents of this view. This essay will present my opinion and discuss both sides of the issue.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

There are believe that people should only study academically, while others think they have to be trained with certain skills. I completely agree with that idea and this essay will explain further about it.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advatages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums are places where historical remains and cultural antiques are stored and preserved in order to present what the past had to the present and future generation. It is usually funded by the government and thus avaible for public usage with its free-from-charges service. However, there are some museums that have some kind of incentive barrier that keeps them from getting freely visited by the public. This practice has its own advantages and disadvantages, and I firmly believe that the advantages are outweighted by the disadvantages and thus making this practice innefficient.

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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s digital era, the influence of technology on individuals’ social life is a subject of constant debate. Some argue that using devices could negatively affect people social skills, while others endorse modern technology as a tool to make people more sociable. This task will discuss both perspectives and give my own opinion.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.

Many people regard work as an experience that is found outside school. In numerous countries, youngsters are participating in the work that they get paid. Some say it is good for children’s experiences and also teach them life skills, including responsibility whilst some disagree. Both sides have their own aspects. However, personally, it is a better idea that children work and gain real experience before they have an actual job. There are reasons to back up the claims from both sides.

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Some people think that a person intellectual skill improving more when they doing group study.What extent do you agree or disagree?

Group study is quite popular across the globe. Some claim that group study can develop people's intellectual ability. I strongly agree with this notion because it improves person's social skills and and life skills. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree

Over the last two or three decades, product's price has increased rapidly as compared to the past. However, Some think that product's cost is the utmost important to think about when buy things. I partially agree with this statement and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Nowadays people are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In increasing number of creating waste is getting higher day by day. In this essay, i will examine the factors that contribute towards this issue and propose some solutions to them.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It has been frequently argued that physical strength is essential for sporting performance. Few masses opine mental fortitude is more vital. In this, essay I would like to shed light on both perspectives along with my perspective in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

this days many people believe that children using a computer every day can have a negative impact.

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: Computer games have a negative impact on children and their families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Parenting has never been an easy job and the implementation of new technologies did not make it easier.

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