IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 613

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some parents are worried about increasing levels of violence in TV,Video games and other entertainments for Children's leisure. how does this affects the children? how do you think this can be tackled?

TV and video games have shown a lot of harsh activities in their programs which could make parents feel insecure that those programs will impact their children. These performances can directly affect kids’ behavior by going through their habits and daily activities and this could be prevented by parent’s involvement in their kids’ entertainment.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self- employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why it might be the case? What could be the disadvantages if being self-employed?

Lately, self employed people is becoming trend in many work environment. This became more apparent after the covid pandemic force people to work from home. Despite many advantages of being self employed, many disagree with this.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

University students around the world are losing their interest in science for various reasons, the causes include, lack of early education and restricted job opportunities in the future. Such trends will reduce the competitiveness of a society in the long term.

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In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right privacy. To what extent do you agree?

Over the last two or three decades, media has been exposed the well-known people's privacy more tremendously than ever before. As a result, media is persecuted to people who are famous. Some claim that the well-known populace's privacy should not be exposed by the medium of communication. I strongly agree with this statement amd this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation of committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Punishments for all kind of crimes are very useful as social control in society. People have different arguments there should be fixed punishments for any crimes while others against that rules. I believe fixed punishments should be standard to make life more orderly.

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Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is argued that local initiatives deserves the gevernment's financial support. While some individuals believe that the money should be used in environmental stratups, other think that the stickholders should enrcourge fine art movements. In my opinion, it is more improtant to direct the attention into the global issues more than the secondary painting organizations. This essay will discuss the aspects behind the necessity of using the country's wealth in helping the Earth's health.

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Some people say thay History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subject like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the last two three decades, eduaction perspective has been revoultionised more tremendously than ever before due to innovation of the technology. As a result, some claim that history is one of the imperative school subjects while others opine that science and technology are crucial than history. In this essay discusses both view points and I will give my opinion in the conclude part.

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In many countries, sports and exercise classes are replaced with academic subjects. Discuss the effects of this trend.

A trend of substitutating sports and exercise classes with academic subject can be seen across the world. This essay will discuss the impact of the situation on the new generation.

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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional news papers and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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People are using bicycles despite the development of other modes of transportation.what are the advantages and disadvantages of a bicycle.

Technology is flourished by leaps and bounds in each and every sector, especially transportation. Even though there are some advanced modes of transportation available, people are ridden bicycles. This trend has some benefits to the rider such as healthy and environmental benefits although there are some drawbacks like limited distance can only ride and lack of bicycle lanes and trails. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages for the following reasons.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at schools nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Students today are having problems to pay attention in their courses. The main cause for some is that experiencing inadequate sleep which stem from playing games too much along with the monotonous class which cannot engage students to take a part in it. There are some possible measures could be done to deal with these problems including involve taking a nap as part of curriculum and conduct a fun learning.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at schools nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Many students state that it is very difficult for having focus in the schools presently. I believe that this issue was caused by a profound effect of screen addiction and social media. However, parents and teachers as primarily shoulder the responsibility could overcome the problem through having a strict rule and giving a deep advise for students.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effect of this epidemic?

These days, more and more people has suffered the obesity issue around the world as compared to the past due to consuming fast foods and beverages vastly, being a sedentary lifestyle. This can lead to getting serious health issues and mental problems.This essay, I will discuss both reasons and impacts on this trend.

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Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days people argue that traveling is expensive and a waste of money some people believe that traveling is valuable, exploration and entertainment while others think that traveling means more money and is invaluable. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my conclusion.

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Some people believe eventually all jobs will be down by artifically intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

In this contemporary epoch, the use of artificial intelligence is surfacing day by day. However, it is believed by few individuals that artificially intelligent robots are progressively replacing human workforce. While it is possible that most of menial jobs will be done by robots, but it is unlikely to take over the work which require human contact. This essay will discuss why only few jobs will be carried out by humans, in the upcoming future.

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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Import and export of fruits and vegetables have been increased via air transportation, so that areas where supply of fruits and vegetables is limited, or they ran out of session can be fulfilled. There are some pros related to availability and employment. Also, some drawback such as expenses and diseases.

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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the world is directed into modern practices, some of which is following up with latest news via the internet platforms, while previously, people used to purchase newspapers or keep up with the television’s anchors. In my opinion, using technological platforms to get news is a positive achievement, the essay will discuss the advantages behind using the internet as our news presenter.

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Some employers are willing to give their workers a certain amount of unpaid sabbatical* time, believing this benefits the individual and the organisation. Other employers see no merit in this arrangement and discourage it. Consider the possible arguments for and against unpaid sabbatical leave, and reach a viewpoint of your own. * Unpaid sabbatical time or leave = extended, unpaid time off work, in which an employee can follow personal interests or studies, and then return to work.

According to brain behaviour, a calm mind has more productivity than a busy one during work. In this point of view, some employers offer a certain amount of unpaid sabbatical time to increase their employees' yield and on the other hand, some of them disagree with this solution. Both approach has some benefits and drawbacks. In this essay, I will consider each one.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in the history of the house or the building they live in what are the reason for this? how can they research this?

In some countries, the number of people who are interested in the history of the apartment or the building they are going to buy is increasing. That is because they are probably concerned about their health as some places can have a damaging long-term effects on our health.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is claimed that accepting an unwanted circumstance is the most appropriate way to deal with while others state that we should effort to improve those situations. In my opinion, both arguments have their merits.

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