IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 613

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Educational facilities predominalty focus on teaching English rather than languages of the surrounding locality. This practice could lead to the demise of lesser known speech. In this essay, I will discuss why it is both equally important to preserve local dialect as well as have good English skills.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many wealthy societies assist poor people by giving them money or another benefit, while that does not open the poverty issue. In addition, advanced government ought to help the poorer classes with different types of aid. I agree that poorer countries who recieve the aid from the riche countries to enhance their economic issues, I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

In today's world people's skin tone has to play an important role in their lives. So, many of them buy skincare products but company owners think about their profitability in the market compared to giving good skin cream to customers. In this essay, I will discuss and conclude my point below.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their

In this contemporary year, recycling is one of the most common and debatable issue. A part of society thinks that the way of making reusing maintain with legal regulations will be more essential. I totally believe that argument. In the following parts, I will try to explain why I am a supporter of this view.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

These days there are a lot of different types of activities that involve some level of risk. The ability to take risks is crucial for humans and has prons and cons as well as for personal lives and for work. First of all, this essay will discuss positive impact of taking risk for the achivements in sports and a career. Secondly, essay will make a notion about negative consequences of taking risks.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In today's world people's skin tone has to play important role in their lives. So, many of them buy skincare products but company owners think about their profitability in the market compared to giving the good skincream to customers. In this essay, I will discuss and conclude my point below.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, road safety is a serious problem in many countries. Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the best choice to reduce traffic accidents, and others believe that other solutions are more effective. Now I will see both views and give my opinion.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vechiles outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, transportation sector has developed more tremendously than ever before due to advanced of the technology. As a result, in the upcoming future, all vehicles such as buses, cars and trucks will be self-drive and people will be the passengers. Time saving and not exhausted for long trip are the benefits of this trend while accidents and expensive are the drawbacks of this phenomenon. I think this trend has more benefits than drawbacks and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some pepople spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Some people live permanently in their hometown due to they are familiar with each and every corner of their own place. Social interaction with residents and close bonding with relatives are the benefits of this phenomenon, although, limited workchoices are the drawbacks. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people say full time students should spend most of time studying; others believe that they should do other activities as well.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

A group of individuals believe that full-timetime pupils have to spend their maximum time for studying in academic institutions while others think that they need to engage in extra-curricular activities. I completely disagree with the idea of spending most of time studying rather than being involved with other activities.

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Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, education is considered by many to be a very crucial part of life. The studies should be available for everyone. In my opinion, I firmly agree that schooling must be costless without regard to financial circumstances of families as it will help the country grow along with the citizens. Also, there should be more government funded public school as well as universities which can give access to all citizens of country.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

Currently fathers are taking care of their children in their houses instead of going to work. Moreover, the number of mothers going to work recently increased. This essay will name the reasons for this and I will give my opinion about if it is a positive or negative development.

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some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. others say that children should be free to choose what they do in free time. Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a fact that what children do in their free time contributes significantly to their development in the future. Some people believe that children should be able to manage their leisure times, while the opponents of this idea prefer to prioritize the important role of their parents. I would argue that leisure activities organized by adults or teens offer more advantages.

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In recent years, the number of people travelling by air for business and pleasure has increased dramatically. Some people believe that air travel will continue to grow and that it will become easier, faster and cheaper. Others, however, believe that due to environmental pressures, flying is likely to become too expensive for most people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are an enormous number of passengers travelling by air to business trips and journeys, and according to certain researches air traffic has doubled last 15 years. Some experts believe that air transportation industry continues its growing, others contend that travelling by plane will become too costly because of ecological reasons. Personally, I hold the view that air transport will meet all ecological criteria and this sphere of transportation and logistics will be undergone by progressive development.

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Some people feel that entertainers(eg.film stars,pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Now-a-days entertainers are getting more money for their work.Example: film stars,pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.Yes, I gree to this details.Recently released leo movie in theatres.The leo movie box office collection was above 600 crore.In that movie,actor vijay got 120crore as a salary.

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some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsabilities.

Most of the people believe that the teenage is the best time of their life while others think adult is the joyful time instead of lot of responsibilities. I will explain both views further.

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Is mental strength important for success in sports or is it more important to have strong and fit people in sports? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports are the vital aspect of people's lives. Some claim that mental strength is the utmost important for accomplishmennts in games while others say that it is imprtant to the sports persons should be fit and strong. This essay dicusses bothview points and I strognly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have an operation to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Cosmetic surgeries have become quite popular in recent years, as a vast number of people are undergoing these surgeries in order to improve the way they look. Individuals who are choosing surgeries are mostly, because they want to appear flawless. It's worth mentioning that the advancements in medical technology have made the procedures painless and safer. So, besides that there might be minor mistakes during the operation by a surgeon, I completely believe that it has a positive impact on people.

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Some people prefer young leaders, while others think that senior managers have the experience. What do you think?

Leadership qualities is the utmost importance skill in people lives. Some prefers the young generation's leadership while others prefer the older people due to tehy have more experience. I think senior managers are most suitable for leaders. This essay discusses it briefly for the folowing reasons.

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Some people say that computers can translate languages, so children need not study foreign languages anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that new technologies can do translating for us,hence young people don't have to learn other languages. This essay disagrees with this statement and will first discuss the benefits of learning languages and secondly argue that it will not help for free oral communication.

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