IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 613

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

A significant number of people out there hold the perception that doctrine should be educated in schools, by contrast, other individuals also share the sentiment that it should not be part of the educational curriculum hence it should be halted. This essay shall completely endorse the former assertion. However, the two opposing views will be brought to bear in the following paragraphs after which a logical conclusion will be drawn.

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Nowadays the way many people intereact with each other had changed because of technology. In what ways technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Means of communications changed dramatically by technologies nowadays, from interacting in person to making international friends around the world on the internet. Whilst some drawbacks provoked from such trends, I personally agree that the advantages of such situations overweight the disadvantages.

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Some experts in road safety say that all cyclists should pass a test before riding a bicycle on the public road. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is pointed out by some experts specializing in road safety that one should obtain a license before riding a bike in public areas. While some may argue otherwise, I believe that passing a test is necessary because this could heighten the awareness of traffic rules and lead to the reduction in the number of traffic accidents.

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Some parents buy their childern a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

It is a common norm to see that a numerous number of minors demand more and more stuff for their leisure needs from their procreators. This essay discusses and elaborates on the benefits and demerits of the issue regarding kids having a profusion of playing items.

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As the result of tourisms and the incresing number of people traveling, there's an growingh demand for more flights. What problems does it have on the enviroment? What measures could be taken to solve the problem?

People nowadays are love to travel more some where else by airplane, which is one of the factor the frequency of using plane experience a significant increase. In this essay, I will examine the factors that contribute towards flights request which impacted to the environment and propose some solution to deal with the issue.

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Some people think people can exploit animals for any purpose they need, while others do not think so. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many believe that animals can be exploited for any reason they want while some oppose it.I agreed with the latter opinion.In this essay,I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Fast food is a part of life in many places and as a result, this leads to bad effects in lifestyle and diet. To what extent do you agree?

The popularity of fast food growing in size provoke negative effects to modern societies, I only partially agree with such opinions for some advantages prompted from such trend.

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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in water, so people think that they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or dis-agree?

Most of the countries globally, aware about single use plastic bags are the main cause of environment problems and stop to use it. In fact, i agree with this perspective that plastic shopping bags leads to land and water pollution and should be banned.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development

Young population is the most valuable asset of a nation.Nowadays, an optimal number of youngsters use most of their time on cellphones on regular basis.I believe that there are multiple reasons behind this negative trend.

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Fresh water is a limited in some parts of the world. Today, Increasing demand made it a global problem. What are the causes of increasing demand, what measure can government and individuals take to solve problem?

Fresh water is our one of the essential natural resources but at present, some places to around the world has water scarcity issue and this is considered a global trouble. Population growth and overuse of agricultural practices are the main reasons for this phenomenon and some feasible measurements that can be solved. This essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.

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what is the Pros and cons of tv? give your opinion

Television had long been a subject of debate, with some arguiun that is a waste time and others not. The majority of the families have a television and it make part ou their routine. Let’s discuss about the pros and cons of spending time with television.

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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people advocates that History has been a forgotten school subject. In addition, people state that subjects like Science and Technology are taking over the masses. I do not agree with both statement because history and science intertwine with one another. In this essay, I will mention both views regarding the benefits of those subjects and why we need them to further advanced the society as a whole.

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Some people think that products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making the products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and express your own opinion.

Some people are of the opinion that lasting for a long time is a key feature for products, whereas some other place higher value on making products with lower prices. Although both perspectives can be considered reasonable in some respects, personally, I am among the supporteras of the idea that expresses: “the more the products last, the better it is.”

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment and and people? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Plastic-made products, commonly used for wrapping and storing in our day-to-day lives, contribute to irrepareable damages to the environment through extermination of some animals and bringing about lethal diseases to the humankind. The responsibility rests with both community members and policy makers to take serious measurments to tackle this critical issue.

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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

Parenting is a complicated task to raise their babies. However, it is reckoned by some pupils the females are better ones due to they play an important part to feed them. On the other hand, a large group of people consider that the fathers are also better parent as the mothers. Both the parents are equal responsible to grow their children. This essay will elaborate both points in further paragraphs.

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Some people think it is a better way to leave their own country to improve their work and living opportunities, while others think that staying in their own country is better choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the social concerns today relates to leave country to develop work and have a better life. Beside, there are people who intend to settle in homtown as a better choice. In my opinion, i belived that leave country to develop work or stay in country all bring different benefits.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many sport facilities in schoolthat student can participate which their interested, other students wants to cooperate but they are not good at sports that make joining the sports team inefficiently. From my point of, I agree with first view and think that through team sport at school give many benefits to students. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined.

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The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media?

In recent times, social media applications have increased and has allowed individuals to express frustration and comment widely. This essay will first suggest that this problem can result in controversy among people, followed by addressing the improvement of person’s skills.

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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that ancient people have many ways to deal problems for their lives. While it is a commonly held belief that studying ancient life can not help us with our problems, there is also an argument that people ought to study the historical life and routine. This essay will discuss this topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, many people believe that, problems in the past are different that today's problems. In other words, studying old methods for buildings or treatments are considered as wasting time as technology continues to advance. In addition, the way that people dealing with a problem can not be effective nowadays regard to the different tools and instruments. For example, in the past, to build a house will take too much time and could not be resistance to the storms or floods, while today building a house will take much shorter and more resistance. On the other hand, many people believe that, studying the past plays a crucia...

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that learners in the educational system have the disare to study some additional subjects. On the other hand, some of them want to spend all their time learning only major subjects in the field of their future profession. In my opinion, I believe that both of these points of view are possible and depend on personal choice.

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