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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development

These days huge number of individuals are spending most of their time by using a phone. In this essay, I will provide some reasons for this development and state my own position toward this.

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employers some times ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevent and useful. others disagree. discuss about these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, job interviews become a hot topic as the growing number of graduates are seeking ideal vacant positions from potential employers. However, some employers tend to require more personal details including hobbies, marriage status, etc. Some human resources professionals explain that it is essential, while others including applicants themselves disagree. Personally, I support the former claim for a better understanding of candidates.

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Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

In recent times, the incidence of usage of drugs to enhance performance by athletes has been rising. The main culprit of this trend is the huge pressure faced by the player and it can easily be fixed by better screening for banned substances in body of the sports person . This essay will discuss the causes and provide solutions for this problem with a resonable conclusion.

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Gaining an ability to manage money is one of the most important parts of a life of an adult's life. In this essay keeping a financial account and generating passive income will be discussed.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Being a useful member of society is a concept which should be tought to children either by parents or school. Some people consider parents responsibilities to do it, while others think school is in the place to teach suitable manner to children I discuss on this topic in this essay and finally represent my own viewpoint. Since their birthday, parents are responsible people for breeding their children until starting education at school for 6 years. According to psychology science, this period makes real personality of children . Therefore, teaching suitable manner to children is considered as significant duty of parents who have brought their children on the earth. Personality of a human determines his/her manners. so, any bad behavior of parents results in personality disorder of children. Parents should teach good behavior to their children to be a good member of society . there are many ways for them to do this duty. For example, parents should encourage their children to like th...

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home/allowing students to study at home. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowaday by the development of the technonlogy. It has became more and more popular for people to work/ study without leaving the home. there is argumnet that if this trend will have positive or nagative impact to the society. This essay will emphasis this phenomenon.

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Some people say tht now we can see films on our phones and tablts there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films, need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both· these,views and give your on .opinion.

Modern technology allows people to enjoy movies on various devices, such as smartphone and laptops. While some people suggest movie theatres should not exist nowadays, I personally believe the experience audience could have in cinema could not be replaced by personal devices.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the changes of Grange Park compared to 1920. The initial impression is that the seats all over the park have been moved to the central area around the new rose garden and there is a new entrance in the southeast from the underground car park.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some say that extinction of some animals and plants species is the main environmental issue, while others argue that there are other more urgent environmental complications. This essay will argue that although the disappearance of animals and plants can cause chaos in the biodiversity and life danger, pollution and climate change are major problems.

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: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unneccessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Certain people claim that children have to be with their relatives all the time, while others contend that it is unnecessary thing to do. In my opinion, spending time with their closed ones is essential and beneficial for children.

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as communication technology develops, it changes the way we communicate with friends and family members compared to the past. Do you think this has more advantages and disvantages?

Now we are in high technology era. People experience different communication methods to talk their loved ones than past. This development provides significant advanatages to users, in this essay I will discuss both benifits and drawbacks. In my point of view it has more advantages than disadvanatges.

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situations?

Most people hold the notion that having their own shelter is crucial than accomodating in a rented house. This esaay agrees with that statement as it enables positive impact on people's lives by enhancing their mental status and improving a quality life.

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a child's character is greatly influenced by the in which adults around them behave.Do you agree with this? What other factors influence a child's character?

No one can deny that a child's character can be influenced by people around them. However, an argument may rise among public on whether other factors also effect a youngster's character. In this essay, i will dicuss both sides of this issues and provide my reasons .

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some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that extensive travel is necessary to gain a comprehensive understanding of other countries, while others contend that the vast information available through media suffices. This essay will explore both perspectives and assert the importance of experiencing other countries firsthand.

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Some People think that fittest and strongest individuals and the team, can achieve success in sports, while others believe that sucesses depends on mental attitude.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people believe that victory in sports depends on physical abilities, whereas others claim that it could be attained with the metal ability. In my opinion, I believe that it is a combination of both physical fitness and cognitive strength that are required to accomplish success in sports. This essay will discuss both views and share my viewpoint with pertinent data.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued whether university students should be allowed to study subjects of their own choice or they should be restricted to study science and technology related subjects. This essay argues that despite the fact that studying these subjects will help in developing the world, I believe that learners will be able to show their real potential by studying what they like.

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Some think that some individuals are naturally good leaders while others think individuals can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This is a matter of great arguments whether leading ability is such an achievable skill or it is just a natural talent that some individuals are lucky enough to have it. While many people might believe that great leaders are those who have been borned this way, I am strongly of the conviction that everything can be learned easily by practicing.

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Many customs and traditional ways of behaviour are no longer relevant to the modern life and not worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?

The vibrancy of modern life has led to debates about the relevance of traditional customs and behaviors. I completely agree with the notion, as technological progress, evolving values, and shifting social dynamics make several traditional practices obsolete.

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Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What are the reasons for this? Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days in numerous countries, young people immigrate from rural areas to cities to study or work. Immigration can bring enormous consequences for governments and society. This essay will consider the reason for that and specify why it is a negative trend.

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Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that some special historical buildings are more worth to be preserved than other normal old constructions. In my opinion, almost all of the historical buildings deserve to receive equal attention.

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