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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school . Do you advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

Upon the view of some people, learning a non-native language at the ages of 6-10 is better than learning it at the ages of more than 11. But, which of these views has a better perfornance? However, I believe that learning in lower ages has significant effects that noboday will not be able to reach it in adolescence or adulthood.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

To make bright future of a nation we ought to overlook to the children how they pass leisure time with different activities.However, few individuals thinks children should pass free time activites by learning something instructives otherwise it counted as waste of time.I am in agreement that youngstar should capitalize their free-time activities by gaining new things,which is important accodring to build a perfect individuals.To illustrate that prarticipate in sports event to gain experience and reading books in leisure time to know well.

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‘Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

It is advocated by some when children have free time they should be with their families, while some are of the opinion that this idea is inconvenient and has an adverse influnce on them. I agree with the argument that if children find free time they should be on their own so that as a person they can be less connected with their families in a good way and can obtain individual ideas.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world money is seen as an isdispensable part of our lives. People have a tendency to choose their job if it offers adequate amount of money. However, after doing these works they are mostl aware of that, this field is not their domain. I reckon that to choose a job our priorities shouldn't be limited by money.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmentalists tend to believe that the amount of litter of households is being reprocessed is insignificant. These individuals as well as I believe that there are no options ,besides the implementation of laws, that can cope with it effectively - while others, on the other hand, take the opposite opinion. In this , essay I will further explore this interesting and thought-provoking topic.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Today’s world challenges with several problems related to the global warming issue, which leads to the rise of sea levels is becoming more serious than even before. Some solutions will be given to this problem.

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Fast food has become more common in recent years. Some people think that it has a negative effect on lifestyles and diets. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the fast food industry is developing in many countries in the world. Fast food seems to have become a favorite food of many people and especially young children. However, many people recognized that it is harmful to lifestyles and diets. In my way of thinking, I absolutely agree with this opinion because its drawbacks outweigh its advantages.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people think cheaper air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expansive in order to discourage people to have it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's world of globalisation, many people say learning a forgein language is required in order to travel or for work in forgein countries. However, there are people who say that there are many other reasons for which one should learn a language. In my opinion for someone, to stand different in the crowd as having an expertise over more foreign languages is an art which one should learn.

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The crime rate increasing nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime do you agree or disagree

It is undienbly true that there has been a tremendous development in the technology nowadays. Some people think that this evolution has led to a fall in the rate of crime,while I disagree with this notion because there is no significant decrease in the criminal activities,in fact they have risen enormously.

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Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school years. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

These days, some children in primary schools are taught other languages. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh its disadvantages.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is evident that technology has become a global necessity. This is the reason the internet has taken over leadership from reading materials which I agree totally with based on several reasons described in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Presently, the zoos serve as public attractions and tourist centers where wild and rare creatures are preserved and kept on displays. While some exponents view this as a brutal measure, others, are of the opinion that it begets a secure environment.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is true that plenty of people live in various parts of the world, and communicate in non-native languages.

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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, enviromental issues become more and more alerted to global mankind. In this concept, who is responsible for environment is always in controversial arguments around the word. Numerous people argue that governments have to responsible for local and international ecosystem, meanwhile others claim that the citizens are the major portion of this whole problem. My essay will discuss both of these viewpoints, followed by my own idea.

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the floor plans of a public library now and after its intended development.

The illustration shows the floor plans of a public library now and after its intended development. Overall, it’s a one-floor building and has steps leading up to the entrance. The main difference is that the library will be extended to the east, roughly doubling its size to allow for the addition of extra facilities.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Nowadays there are more and more people meet serious problem with sleep. They can not find a way to get enough and well sleep during a day. This phenomena will impact on their health if it still occurs for long time. And in some case, some people also get stress because of lack of sleep. There are several reasons that many people do not have enough sleep and we will discuss more details in the following passages.

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the primary hobbies of the adult residents in a small Tunisian town in three different years with 20 years interval,starting from 1980.

The given bar chart and line chart illustrate the information about the primary hobbies of the adult residents in a small Tunisian town in three different years with 20 years interval,starting from 1980. The general overview here is that adults whacking TV and Movies the most throughout the periods.

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When new towns are planned,it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centres. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It has been claimed that while palnning for a new residential area the main concern has to be establishing green public areas and leisure facilities rather than constructing new shopping center.s To me , I totally agree with the conception that shopping malls are far less important to be built up than parks and recreational centers.

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Some international companies are very powerful now and many people believe that it is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your reasons and relevant examples.

Nowdays, multinational corporations become more and more powerful and able to influence on global markets and even politics. It could be both positive and negative for an economic and a social development. For my point of view, disadvantages outweigh the advantages by now.

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