IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 613

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Is using physical force to discipline children acceptable?

Children discipling is a critical issue which a number of people including parents and teachers are responsible for. The point is that the approach which would be used in this way. There are two methods for shaping children correct behavior, the first is that employing physical force and the second is to using psychological approaches rather than force. In following sections, these two approaches will explain in details.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternatives ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The discussion of adapting long jail time for a crime-free society is surely one that begs the question of how truly effective it is. Some people claim that such a practice should be entertained as it keeps criminal inside the wall and gives them a lesson for life to correct. In my opinion, due to the presence of rehabiltation centres and other social activities, it is plausible to assert that options over jail to eradicate bad ailments of society will be the most apropos choice.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

The economy mostly depends on gas for everyday products and uses inspite of the negative impacts to the environment. It is argued that if the gas price increases, growing traffic and air pollution will be solved. In my view, I completely disagree on this count, however, will discuss some effective ways that will help control the congested traffic and some environmental problems.

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Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the contemporary era, almost all types of vehicles, healthcare facilities and public transport depend on up-to-date computers and microchips. It is claimed that, too much people rely on technologies, which can be dangerous or even harmful, in case of a global disaster. However, there are some merits which modern science may bring in the society.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree.

There is a school of thoughts who believe that the crime rate is reducing nowadays as compared to past just because of advance technology which can not only act as preventer but aslo resolve the pending cases. As my view point is concerned, i totally disagree with above notion.

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Some people think that family is the most powerful influence of a child's development while others thing other factors such as friends, television and music have better influence. Discuss both of views and give your opinion

Nowadays, it has become a common argumentary question that, 'who is making more impact for children's development?'. It is considered by many that, family background makes a massive impact for the maturing of a child and on the other hand, some people think society and modern technology are responsible too. This essay intends to analyse both views and explain why I am in favor with the first opinion.

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More and more people are relying on their private cars as a major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over resilience on cars can cause and suggest atleast one possible solution.

These days, many people use private cars more than another transportation types like public transportation or use trains. But if every person starts to use his own car, it will lead to many environmental issues. In this essay, I will describe some problems and solutions.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training) Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

In Recent times, skill migration has become highly controversial issue, as number of skill emigrant increases. There are those who say that doctors and engineers should work in the country where they trained, while others believe that it should be free to choose work place. In this essay, I will examine the both arguments and give my overall opinion.

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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this technology – oriented society, individuals are bombarded by advertising, therefore it makes people think the advertisement things are quite necessary and useful in their daily life. Consequently, this phenomenon brings some negative influence on human life. In my point, I wholeheartedly agree that with this point of view.

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Many people are afraid of leaving their homes because of their fear of crime. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, many people are afraid of crime, and they want to put new regulations to limit crime. So, some people think that we should complete life because crime will last all our lives. While others believe that we should put new regulations to limit crime. This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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Dome people prefer one on one classes while others prefer groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, there is an ongoing debate regarding the ways of learning lessons. While some people prefer in-person classes, others argue that they need group learning sessions. In my opinion, I believe that group learnings are much better because it provides an opportunity to acquire new skills and moral values. This essay will examine both views and my opinion in detail with relevant examples.

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In many parts of the world, people do research on their family history. Some people believe that finding out about previous generations is a useful thing to do. However, others believe that it is better to focus on present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that many people argue of whether human should look for their ancestors information to understand about family historitical value or concentrate on next generations. This essay discusses about both points of view and I believe family historitical problems are a wonderful treasure of people that cannot underestimate.

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Many people believe that the only benefit of working is the money that they earn. However, working provides other benefits as well. Apart from earning money, what are the benefits of working? What measures can be taken to ensure that everyone benefits from their work?

Nowadays, human being are struggling for good job that pay good amount of revenue. However, many people believe that this is the only benefit of working, but working not only provide financial advantage but also some other benefits. Pros of the working and steps to ensure that everyone benefits from their work will bi discussed in ensuing paragraphs with relevant example.

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Some people believe that children should do organised activity in their free time while other believe that children should be free to do that there went to do in their free time. Blue point do you agree with use specific reason and example to support your answer

Some individuals are of the opinion that organising laser activities is essential for children the alternative view is that they should have the freedom to do activities of their choice .I find the first side to be more logical because of how it influence the immense benefits this approach offers and in the following program the reason will be highlighted.

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Some people think that zoos, which keep wild animals by man-made environment should no longer exist in 21st century. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Needless to say, zoos are well known for the diversity of animals and have attracted individuals for many years. Zoos are artificial habitats for wild creatures made by man for multiple purposes. However, some people believe that zoos should be banned in the future but I disagree with the statement and the reasons have been stipulated in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As a new student, some pupils aware and curios about whether they can be accepted very well by their friends or maybe they can be an isolated person without any mates. This frightened brings up an issue of what we described as a bullying. Such phenomenon become a serious problem that needs to be prevented by all the elements. This essay will explain a detailed reason why this issue happened including recommendation to tackle it.

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Opinion are divided on whether people should live in the urban area or countryside to have a healthy life. In my opinion, living in countryside or city both benefits residents in different ways, but living in the former is better for the quality of environment and avoiding unhealthy foods.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the last few decades, whether it is better to acknowledge worst situation or it is important to push ourselves to change that has sparked a debate. According to the point of view of some people it is wise to receive rough patch, such as dissatisfaction in work or problem of less money, whilst others reckon that it is essential to attempt to enhance their position. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the arguments and give my opinion.

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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere; this bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,we have noticed that fast food has changed our life.This has an impact in our life and dietary habits.I'm in complete agreement that fast food effects badly on us,since this is harmful for health and it destroys our mental health.I will delve deep and discuss more in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

Nowadays, many students who study in universities are intrested to learn a varid subjects besides of their main major.However some other part of their society believe that it is more nessesery to fouces on their studies for qualifications. In this essay I disscuse both sides and at the end I peresnt my opinion.

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