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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Advertising have always been a topic of debate. Some people argued that it is helpful for individuals and businesses, but others believe that it is negative.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

It is generally acknowledged that in this days and ages people tend to sleep less compared to recent ages. In this essay, I will examine the factors that contribute towards the lack of sleep and the effects it caused.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. What is your opinion?

In today world Marketing plays a important role in the market. There are both pros and cons when comming to advertisment. It also plays a important role in the product pricing as well.I strongly agree with the point about adverstisment lead one to buy product which are not important. which leads to increase in the shopping bill and takes unnecessary space in the house.

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people's health and capacity for work?

Psychologist have studied for many years that colour can affect people’s behavior. As a result, colour schemes should be crucial when painting places such offices and hospitals. There are reasons which can be identified to account for this statement and all of these explanations benefit our health and motivation for work.

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In modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with other people through internet. But others against it. Do you think this is positive trend or negative trend.

Daily activity is now easier to do by society because of the presence of the internet and it gives a lot of benefits. However, some individuals argue that this circumtances consider as a negative. In this essay, i will explain why this should be perceived as a positive trend for two main reasons.

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Are higher taxes or lower taxes better for society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to the economy in countries with a capitalistic system, people use to pay taxes that increase every year. Some of this are unfair for non wealthy-places dwellers, while the other ones foster thrive in nations. In this essay I will depicture from my own experience why higher taxes are not better for all society although some well-developed civilizations ought pay taxes according to their high incomes.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that sharpening public health is feasible by raising the number of sports amenities. whilst some people believe that other actions should be taken and this alone would hold minor impacts so it couldn't be the best. I would lean toward the latter since I believe that raising public health needs a group of measures that collaborate efficiently.

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Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue. You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In the world of technology and medicine, animal experiments have become a norm. It is an important practice before any finalization of a drug or any other practical experiment. Although, it is beneficial to test any new drug on animals before human, also, it is inhuman and dangerous for animal's life. This easy will discuss both the points and present a conclusion on the issue.

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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic

Other people are of the view that sentencing offenders to a long time in prison is the most viable solution to ameliorate crime while some believe that paying of fines and providing counselling services could be considered as better solutions. However, I believe that making crime doers to be reprimanded in prison is a noble idea.

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Some people think that traveling abroad is an important experience for youngsters. Others think that involves too much time and expenses. Discuss both perspectives And give your opinion.

While some individuals believe that taking young people outside the country is a

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Today it is common practice for many business meeting and training to take place online do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantage

It is indeed true that a common method for many business meetings and training are taking place on online platforms. However, this eassy will articulate some of the pros and cons behind this phenomenon.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

It is widely believed that some people prefer to remain vegetarian, which preserves nature by eating no meat and fish. I totally concur with this viewpoint for the following reasons

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Some people prefer to go to gym and clubs for health care other say that walking and jumping stairs are more affective. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different views about the best approach to stay healthy. While there are some benefits to doing outdoor activities, I would argue that exercising in the professional gyms and clubs is more conducive to personal health.

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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that children don't have idea how world of work is constructed and schools should make sure that teenagers will dedicate small amount of time as well as studying academic subjects. This essay disagrees that the work time of teens should be controlled. It will first discuss that schools should have control only over their academic side and then discuss the importance of working for students.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Environmental issues are raising day by day and it is impacting an individuals life also. Many people believe that these problems should be dealt nationally as compared to the global scale. In my essay I shall discuss both the views with supportive examples followed by my personal opinion towards the end.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people's skin.Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that nowadays people pay more attention to their self-regulation, in particular, they put emphasis on the color of skin. Towards this issue, people stand on different ground will give completely different views. Whereas, I will analyze this situation from many aspects as follows.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity: 2010

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of each gender of Australian people who did sports regularly at different ages in 2010.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

The famous people's income are always being gossip by community. Some people notice that celebrities earn more money than politicians. Personally, I think there are several factors, and the following content will outline them.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many scientists are interested in planets because they want to know what is there and whether there is life there. Now we are in the 21st century and technology is very advanced so scientists say that other planets are intelligent because in 1969 American Neil Armstrong flew to the moon and from there he got a lot of research and that research will be studied by many scientists and I think that the planets will also be studied and even now Nasa intends to travel to mars in the future and many scientists conclude that it's a good idea but they don't know what's on other planets so I hope it's worth thinking about.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the most effective way to teach students to cooperate with each other is to play team sports at school. From my point of view, I agree with this view and think that student will be more cooperate with each other when they play sport together. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in detail.

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