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Nowadays a large number of wild animals are under the threat of extinction. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

At present, an enormous of faunas are a risk to disappear from the planet. The aim of this essay is to give the relevant causes and how to find the proper solution.
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Accidents are common on roads. What are the causes of this problem? Can you speculate the effects of this phenomenon and how could the frequency of accidents be reduced?

The number of vehicles on roads such as cars and buses has increased recently. This has resulted in the quantity of accidents is increasing day by day. This essay will argue that the causes and effects of this problems, and the solution way of this situation.
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Some people say that now is a best time in the history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to living

The 21st century is truly a golden age in mankind's history, because of the advancements in transportation, medical science, food production and education. I think we are very lucky to be born at this age because there is a very low death rate due to sickness and famine, also education is easily achievable and the advancements in technology have made our lives very comfortable.
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Nowadays, with advance of technology and transportation facilities, people can work and live anywhere they want. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

In recent years, tech and transportation systems have been progressing dramatically and thanks to such development, people have massive options to decide about their intended cites of working and living.
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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the lack of certain types of plants and animals. A more important environmental issue that others say exists. Discuss both of these points of view and give your opinion.

In recent years, more and more environmental issues have been widely discussed broadly all around the world. There are many unpleasant changes on the earth which caused by mostly human’s actions. Some people claim that the disappearance of particular species of animals and plants is the main problem of our time, while others argue that there are more important problems in our environment. This essay will concern each of these views, give explanation.
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Q: Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The diagram illustrates the stages of making a storehouse facility using concrete canvas materials.
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Some people believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both the view and give your own opinion.

Some are of the opinion that capital for schooling should primarily be allocated to improved computers because they support lessons to be effective and efficient. However, others are convinced that funds could be employed to specifically instructors due to morale and motivation. From my perspective, it essentially should be used for lecturers who are building blocks of education.
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Nowadays eating habits of people around the world are changing causing them many health problem including obisity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

Nowadays unhealthy eating habits are  causing people around the world to get sick and die. This essay will explain in ditail the reasons as well as steps to mitigate this problem with examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
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The age of information technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While it has become a way of life for some, others know very little about it and may be unlikely to learn. Eventually, we will have a polarized society and this will lead to serious social problems.

In the modern world of today, we have to face new technologies on a daily basis. Although this might be easy for the generations already born in this atmosphere, for others, and especially elder people, it might be quite overwhelming. Some people think that this divergence will bring important social issues in the future. I somewhat disagree with this statement, as more and more elderly start to deal properly with matters related to Information Technology (IT).
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Government money should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for the general public. To what extent do you agree?

The pie chart and table illustrate how the police budget changed between 2011 and 2018 in the city of Briton. Generally speaking, the table gives the detailed price of the budget which is the money cost by the police and the chart shows where the money was spent.
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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In recent years, there are many students want to gap for a year after they finished high school. Some people think it is an opportunity to increase own life skills and relax. But another people think we should not to do that. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages.
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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

Nowadays, everything we buy from shops is packed in plastic, like bags, bottles, and food packets. The excessive use of plastic is adversely affecting not only the land but also the ocean. The harmful effects such as non-biodegradable plastic waste menace and the threat to marine life. However, we can solve this problem through the intervention of suitable government policies and cooperation of the people.
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Some people argue that capital punishment is good for the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some communities, the execution is one of the measurable ways to judge crimes. Also in some countries, governments realize execution as punishment tools. In contrast, other countries have already stopped using this punishment and their heaviest punishment is the life sentence. In some part, it seems to be appropriate, but there are some factors that cannot be overlook.
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Many people do not pay enough attention to their mental and physical well-being. What are the causes of this? Support your opinion with explanations and examples and provide possible solutions.

It is a famous saying " Health is the actual wealth". ,However the sad reality of today's time is that this very important aspect of our life is grossly neglected .This has resulted in the deterioration of the overall quality of human life . In the following paragraphs , we will discuss the various reasons why people are not able to pay enough attention to their mental and physical well-being.
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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style . What are the advantages of this trend ? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

the rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of modern life style.
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Topic: a great city should not be confounded with a populous one. Discuss the above statement and give your own opinion

I think that this topic is very impotent for me, because abroad degree is my point. Now I am considering studying’s advantages and disadvantages in own city and abroad.
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Although, more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remian the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that use of newspaper will always be same in future even if folks read news on the internet. I completely disagree with this notion.
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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Growing trees is very significant for the environment. Few masses are of the opinion that trees must planted in the vacant spaces of cities and towns but other think residential facilities should be provided. I agree with the former view to plant trees on the empty lands.
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Some people think that modern technology has more negative effects on our lives than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people think social media like Instagram, Facebook, WhatsUp, and other web have many negative effects on real life. I partially disagree with this issue, and I will explain the benefits and problems in this essay.
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1.You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: oWhat the gadget is oWhat you think about it oAdvice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Hope you are doing well. I was delighted to know that you are contemplating purchasing a smart television set like mine and I am glad to share my recommendation to advocate your decision.
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