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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from stress is at a record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how stress could be reduced.

here are several reasons why people are more anxious in modern society in comparison with previous centuries. Both problems and its solutions will be mentioned in the following paragraphs. This essay elaborates on the reasons for high stress in regular life and possibilities to solve this.

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some people think that iNTERNET HAS BROUGHT PEOPLE CLOSER TOGETHER WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT PEOPLE AND COMMUNITIES ARE BECOME MORE ISOLATED. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

There are some arguments that agree that social network connects everyone together, while many people would not agree with that point. This essay will discuss how social media can help everyone keep in touch easily, showing the confidence of people who would prefer face-to-face meetings, and why I prefer using the social network to offline meet.

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The picture shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram given illustrates the process of how wasted glass bottles are recycled.

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Some children spend hours on their smartphones everyday. Why is this the case? Do you think his is a positive or negstive development.

Nowadays some youngsters overuse smartphones daily. The main reason behind it is risen demand on these devices amoung the elder people that are role model for youngsters and also amount if intertainment that smartphones contain.This is overall a negative trend for young generation despite one single benefit that it may bring out.

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More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.What will be the reasons of this.What solutions can you offer.

In the contemporary epoch individuals opt to reside in urban areas rather than in countryside in order for them do make a decent living.To me not only does this phenomenon have adverse impact on countries economy,but also dwindle agricultural sphere and I will develop this idea in subsequent paragraphs.This discourse is to appraise reasons of this issue and preventive measures to tackle with it.

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Neglegtion of science based subjects.Reasons and solution

In the conteporary epoch the problem of neglegting science based subject in university increaseS*rapidly severe in numerous nations and countries.From my staindpoint the main reason of this is low income with which this faculties provide their students in the future,however there are other crucial reasons for this phenomenon.In this discourse i am to appraise the main reasons and negative consequenses of this phenomenon.

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Some students work while studying, resulting in a lack of time for education and constant pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

While acquring an education is essential, numerous students multitask out of necessity, causing them to sacrifice precious study time and puts them in a contant state of frenzy. Furthermore, it strikes as an obstacle for them to be on top of their coursework. One might investigate various factors leading to such situations for learners; identifying the grass-root problem can help devise a solution to alleviate the students' exhaustion.

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Today more people are overweight than before.what in your opinion are the primary cause of this? What are the main effect of this epidemic?

Nowadays, it has been noticed by summer individual that people now weigh more than they use to. This is largely due to their inactive life style and over consumption of processed foods which had increased the rate of morbidity and mortality. This essay will explain these with relevant examples and a logical conclusion Will be drawn.

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Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while other think that there are other better way to remain fit. Discuss both the views with your opinion.

In recent times, gyms have gained immense popularity amongst the youth and working folks. Many believe and credit gyms for their fitness, however, people are also of the opinion that there are various other methods to be healthy. This essay discusses both point of views as well as expresses my opinion.

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Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary era, the advancement of technology has led people to work or study from home as computers have become cheaper and can be accessed easily. This essay will discuss my complete agreement on this notion and we will elucidate the reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In recent times people are adhering to the culture of giving birth at older age. Most importantly this phenomenon affects the children in one aspect or the other. Therefore, this essay will highlight the pros and cons of giving birth at later age.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

Nowadays, people tend to start childbearing at their older ages.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

In the present world, many couples prefer to give birth to their offspring when they are more mature which demonstrates the responsibility and awareness about the raising of children. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this decision and which of them outweigh more.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage

In recent times, people are likely to give birth to their offspring that an older age. Although having children at old might be detrimental to their health and various complications can arise. However, it enables the guardian to be mentally prepared and financially stable .However, I believe the advantage outweigh the drawbacks as complications can be reversed with adequate medical treatment. However, lack of stable income can lead to poor upbringing of the child.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older age Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage

Nowadays, people tend to give birth at an older age. This might be due to emotionally preparation of the parents for the process, however, delay in the ability to conceive can also be disadvantage which I believe outweigh the disadvantages which can be medically corrected.

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People nowsday tend to have children in older age . Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

In recent time,most individual desire to have youngster at golden years. There are series of reason that could lead to this situation, which includes financial constraint in taking care of a family while the others factors is inability to woo a lady and psychological preparedness. From my observation , the demerit outweigh the merit .And this relevant consequence will be further explained in this essay.

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These days, people's impact on the ecology is increasing.How can this problem be solved

People have a lot of negative effectual for the ecology.In this essay,I will look into the causes of this and suggest some solutions.

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Many are of the opinion that the internet is inundating our children with dangerous information. There is however no doubt that the Internet represents great advances in communication. Discuss the pros and cons of the Internet.

It must be accepted that as we move ahead into the twenty-first century, we have become more and more dependent on the most outstanding innovation of information technology - The internet or what is called the World Wide Web. Along with the admiration and praises, it also brings a few doubts and fears. Both, the positives as well as the drawbacks of the positives as well as the drawbacks of the internet usage are chronologically discussed.

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Some people believe that students should begin learning a language very early in schoop while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There have been differing views whether people should begin learning a language very early in school or later. In my following essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

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In many countries, paying for thing using mobile phone(cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

It is no doubted that technology has growth rampantly. Therefore, in many countries, people are buying and paying bills using smartphone's applications. This kind of development has more merits than demerits. I will discuss both views in ensuing paragraph.

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