IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 750

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people these days have a computer, laptop, telephone at their home for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons.

Especially, during and after COVID more people start working from home. The companies provide their employees with the devices that they need work from home. That prevented the companies not needed to close their doors and did stay open, and therefore, makes working from home more common, nowadays.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is said that no risk no gain, however, often it give us misfortune.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a multitude of people consider that the main significant school subject is history while others believe that Science and Technology are more vital amoung subjects. In my opinion, the history is one of the most impostant in secondary and primary educations. This essay will discuss both sides of statement.

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In some countries married couples plan to have a baby at a later age due to the demands of their professional career. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion

Family planning plays an important role in our society without planning today's youngster does not see their age of getting married and having a baby. It is very important to have a proper plan for their life. The rapid growth of lifestyle and newborn babies are growing day by day.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home,leisure, and work activities. Do the advantages of information technology outweigh the drawbacks?

In today’s modern world digital technologies have a huge impact on our lives, including detrimental ones, such as the manipulation of personal information or addiction to gadgets. But despite this, information technology has more benefits than disadvantages that will be discussed further in this essay.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

It should be admitted that the 21st century being the era of more and more accelerating technological progress caused a dramatic shift in human priorities related to art and science. But what are the reasons for such changes and is there a way to attract society's attention to art again?

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

More and more people all around the world nowadays opt for a rental home rather than their own house or flat. But why is that? Do benefits of such an accommodation overweigh drawbacks? In this essay, I am going to discuss both advantages and disadvantages of renting a home and figure out the answer.

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Many companies and organisations require their employees to wear uniform. What kind of jobs require uniforms? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniform to work?

In Several corporates and organisations , it is mandatory for the subordinates to have their preferable dress code.Whilst, few other employees prefer to wear the clothes they prefer to wear.I would like to elaborate on the pros and cons of having a dress code .

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays,many countries schools have severe problems associated with students' behavior.However,the issue regarding childrens' behavior has being rising gradually and day by day it is getting worse.This issue occurs due to lack of self control.Furthermore,the world have been globalized and made people addicted to materialistic world more than having bonds are caused for the most of common behavior issues among children.

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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern times, everything is changing and marriage is one of them. These days merger is about sharing of responsibility equally between spouses to run a family together. I completely agree with the notion because expenses will be shared and trust will be more.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home,leisure, and work activities. Do the advantages of information technology outweigh the drawbacks?

The rapid pace of the world development contributes to the creation of different technologies which are commonly used by the population in various spheres of its life. However, there is a question If modern technologies have more benefits than disadvantages. Let's speculate on this topic.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home,leisure, and work activities. Do the advantages of information technology outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays technological progress immensely affects people’s lives and is rapidly squeezing into everyday routine, touching home tasks, recreation activities and work environment. While one might consider such a tendency in modern society detrimental, the benefits of life reconstruction dominate over the drawbacks.

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Some people believe young people are more attracted to fashion and it causes negative aspects to thees and society. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays having a wide range of outfit choices, especially the youths are becoming slaves of the fashion. i strongly believe that this tendecy has a negative influence.

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Some people move to other countries when they retire. Others think it is better to retire in their home country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some senior citizens try to move their residence area after retirement because of personal reasons. However, others believe that it is good to remain in their hometown when people get older. I personally claim that changing the environment by moving to other society could be helpful to refresh their mind in terms of having new experiences and finding an appropriate place of their own.

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TASK1- Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia

The bar graph illustrates data from a study about the consumption and purchases of caffeinated beverages in five big towns in Australia for four weeks.

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Some studies suggest that children spend more time watching Tv than they did in the past and spend less on doing active and creative things. Why do you think this is happening? what method and measure can be used to solve the issues?

Several studies offered that children spend most of the time watching TV rather than they did in the past and spend less on doing active and discovered things.

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Children ore focing more pressures nowadays from academics , social, and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures And which measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Many youngsters are feeling stressed about everyday activities such as attending school, interacting with other people but also their need of achieving financial indipendence. Our highly populated society is the main reason why this phenomenon occured, since schools' main purpose has become making kids learn notions instead of giving them the possibily to explore their individuality, because of the impossibility for teachers to focus on such a numerous amount of personalities; besides, schools lead children to compete in order to get scholarships and benefits, thus leading to a general diffidence between each other. Phsycologists can help these guys trying to make them focus about their inner selves, in order not to find their equals as enemies and competitors, but humans.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Availability and cheapness of junk food buys a large number of people to eat it in unhealthy amount. Nowadays people have a big number of responsibilities that make them hurry ap in every aspect of their lives. Easy way of getting food like this is not always the best and those who eat it constantly may suffer from it.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is said that no risk no gain, however, often it give us misfortune.Undoubtedly this is true that without taking any type of chance this is tough to achieve something special. I believe that in personal life it’s can be terrible but in terms of of Corporate life people should think twice before taking any type of risk.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

There have been immense advances in technology in most aspects of people's lives, especially in the field of education. Nowadays, an increasing number of students rely on computers to research for information and to produce a perfect paper for school purposes. Others have decided to leave the original way of learning to get knowledge through online schools. These changes in the learning process have brought a special concern regarding the possible decrease of importance of teachers in the classroom. Some people believe the role of teachers started to fade because computers have been helping some students to progress in their studies quicker than when compared with an original classroom. For example, in the same classroom, students have different intellectual capacities, thus some would be tied to a slow advance in their studies because of others’ incapacity of understanding. In this way, pupils could progress in their acquisition of knowledge at their own pace using compu...

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