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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many young people move out of their homes to live alone or to live with their friends. Some people think this is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that most youngsters leave their homes to live separately or shift with their friends as well, they think it is a good idea to become self-dependent. I agree with this statement because it gives privacy and a person can be stronger when he explores a challenging world.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The given plans illustrate next year's reconstruction blueprint of an airport site in the southwest area.

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Increasing number of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved. What are the drawbacks?

In the last few years, the number of students who prefer to study abroad is increasing, specially in some countries like China or India that own a very high population, or even a country called Iran where people suffer to live in there because of their bad economical situation. This essay will discuss how beneficial is studying abroad for students and also involved countries with some drawbacks that include for each side.

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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

It is assumed that in several nations, it is not preferred by teenagers to stay apart from their procreators there after qualifying their studies as well as getting employed. I firmly opine that this trend has the primary benefit of splendid relations and provides support which is more than its drawback such as dependency .

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Fewer citizens go to their local museums and galleries than ever before. What are the causes of this? What can be done about this? Write your response not less than 250 words. You get 40 minutes to complete this task

In this contemporary world, museums and galleries play an crucial role to broaden one's knowledge about local culture and heritage. However, the number of people of visiting local museums and galleries is becoming decrease as compared to past. This essay will give the possible reasons of decreasing this trend and also suggest several ways to improve the likability of people about museums and galleries.

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Sone people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree

Many population think that we have a various number of choices in this present world,I totally agree with this notion and I believe it’s because of advancements in technology and the internet.

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Some people think parents should supervise their children's activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion

One of the social concerns today relates to how parents should treat their children. While it is widely commonly suggested that parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, others believe children should have more freedom to growth. In my opinion, i support parent should oversee their children’s activities closely.

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In some Countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having a good place to live in entails making crucial decisions of whether renting or buying a property. In many parts of the world, buying a home is very essential than leasing for two reasons. First, it is cheaper and secondly it provides a sense of ownership. This essay will further discuss these reasons and why this is a positive situation.

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Should Government funding be spent on education and healthcare systems? What is your opinion?

Is it necessary for the government to invest money into healthcare and education institutions? In my ,opinion it is an essential part of any government structure, and we must spend money on that.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

It is a well known fact that tourism has contributed world economies in a positive way, in which the universal lanaguage "English" is also playing an important role. English has become a prominent language through tourism and international trade. Some people even belive that English will become the single language for the world. The next paragraphs will be discussing the pros and cons of considering English as single language globally.

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Some people claim that not enough the waste from homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. to what extent do you think laws are need to make people recycle more of their waste?

It is said that, recycling of household wastages is not adequate. so, it is necessary to enforce citizens by laws. in my opinion, laws are necessary. and, in this essay, I will give my reasons .

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able ho read everything they want online without paying . To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Thanks to modern technology, humans now have remarkable ways by which they can access unlimited information related to the topics and it can observe that a large number of people drawing attention towards the latest technology. I partly agree with the above statement I will articulate my pinpoint in forthcoming paragraphs.

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fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

In recent years, more and more numerous young individuals avoid working in the agricultural fields. From my perspective, this trend can stem from several causes, such as unfavourable incomes and unappreciated positions in society, this essay will provide some ways that can help people have enthusiasm for this specific field.

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Nowadays, discusses about children education taking their place a lot.

Nowadays, discusses about children education taking their place a lot. I think it is due to last events, like bulling in the schools or some villain actions of children and something like this. As result, many people started to discuss about child education, someone think that parents must take response for their children and educate them, other ones think that this role already busy by schools, colleges and university and such education places are not fulfilling their task clearly. And there might appear question, who is right?

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Environment problems such as pollution and climate variations are incresing nowadays. The goverments have taken some measures at problem be solved.?

Pollution of nature qnd climate change and various problems in the environment are increasing today. Governments are taking some measures at the global level,but it is difficult to climinate them .This essay will firs suggest that the biggest problem caused by this intends to look into the problem have always fallen short of the mark and offer some solutions to the problem.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

academy plays an important role in the overalll development of children. Young minds learn alot from the school and it's environment. Children develop their social, physical and emotional skills over here. During this some of kids started facing issues with their social skills as a result of this they started having problems with student behaviour.

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The best way to improve health is through regular exercise, to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is sometimes considered that the most effective means of promoting health is by engaging in consistent physical workout. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this view because exercise promotes physical fitness and reduces the risk of developing certain diseases.

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some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing

Some people argue that there is not nothing bad if you are sticked doing same activities regularly while others can not live without changing. In this essay, I will look both sides of the argument and give my own opinion.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, people prefer to have their offsprings at older age, this might lead to some complications but I think it enables the couples to be able to prepare for the child birth financially and psychologically,moreover,complications as a result of having children at older age can be corrected with the modern technology.

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Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

Presently, most of the people do not want to get married and have children in order to create the career till thier thirties. I am completely certain that first of all, every human being should create thier own life before they get married and have children.

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