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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Shopping online is becoming much popular in todays world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Todays, people have lifestyle of love to being in their places and order products that they want by shopping online. Various of products on online able to give the customers a great experiences by people can brought product from a store anywhere in the world. However, shopping onilne sometime would not be able to present same feeling as they buying in store. In my opinion, shopping online can deliver a comforable way of buying products but can not give people a full experiences like in the store.

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Most people believe that the model of the EU is the future, with countries gradually joining together into larger units. Write an essay expressing your opinion

Most people believe that the model of the EU is the future. The idea represents countries gradually joining together to make one larger unit. I will examine the benefits and negatives and argue that it could be a positive force for the future.

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The plans below shows a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

This map describes in changing of Grange Park between 1920 when was first opened and today.

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In many cities, old buildings are being destroyed to create more space for new housing. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, an increasing of people in each cities need more new facility or new housing that will ensure their life to have a better of living quality in towns. Even though, old building also important to show a culture and the way that how people in the past use to be living in that cities. In my opinion, to create new housing by replace the old one is nessecery for people to have better life quality in long term.

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Some people believe that we have too many choices. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this Statement?

In this century, people are given options not in all fields but certainly in most areas. Sometimes mankind is getting confused because it is becoming harder and harder to decide on. I completely accept that we have a lot of variety in our modernized lives and I will support my opinin with some examples.

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어떤 사람들은 그림이나 소묘와 같은 예술품을 고등학생에게 의무화할 수 있다고 말한다. 어느 정도 동의하거나 동의하지 않습니까?

Many people believed that arts courses such as painting or drawing should be required for high school adolescents. From my perspective, I totally concur with this statement owing to the following demonstrations.

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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers, and what effect does it have on our lifestyles? Discuss the issue and give your opinion.

Nowadays, we are surrounded by many advertisements on a daily basis. The impact which it has on society is quite huge, as it helps people to notice some products and push them to buy them by presenting them well. Moreover, it makes many individuals more vulnerable to manipulation, which I believe, is not a positive outcome. This essay agrees with that suggestion.

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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your firend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

Hi, I hope you are very well, I am writing to you to reply to your email in which you requested some advice about selecting a new sport to learn.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In this era, the community prefers to become an entrepreneur rather than an employee in such a company or organisation. The main reason why this is happens because it brings more creativity and a free soul. Meanwhile, being a self-employed has disadvantages such as needing a strong mindl and it is not settling.

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Nowadays, it has become easier and more affordable for people to visit other countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

It cannot be denied that as international travel is becoming easier and more affordable, certain issues and inconvenience have been brought to both the travelers and locals. As a result, some impressionable people might form the bias that the development of international travel is more of a negative development. Nevertheless, as far as culture and globalization, international economy, and environmental protection are concerned, such a development is for sure a positive one.

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Art is considered as an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is positive or negative for children to be taught art?

Learning art has a vital role in all societies around the world. Although adults can benefit from learning art, it can facilitate children’s job prospects, provide them with familiarity with their ancestors, culture, and improve their interpersonal skills. I hold the opinion that it has significant effects on various aspects of the lives of the new generation.

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some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt these days overall world individuals controversy surrounding the women right. The question is who is have high apportunity to be idel manger women or men ? In this , essay I am going to discuss this subject and i would draw my own opinoin.

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The government should spend more money on railways than on roads. That do you think about this?

In the contemporary era, one of the major problems for governments is traffic because of the increasing the number of population on Earth so powers need to manage funds for it. Therefore, some people believe that politicians should spend more money on railways than roads. I will support this attitude and will give some ideas regarding this issue in this essay.

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Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

Many people prefer price as an important element for a product or a service. Though, price is a necessary check before opting for a product or a service, I partially agree with statement. Apart from price, many others factors such as quality and budget are equally essentional and plays a key role in deciding for a product and a service.

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution.Do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people believe that condition which is serious lack of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution around the world. From my perspective, I agree with this proposal. This essay will demonstrate why its proponents are correct.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In new generation, Few people belive that the pupils can decide what they want to do in their free time rather then parents will prepaire for their child hobby and activity,In my opinioun, childrens can do activity according their plan in spare time. Now in this essay I am going to explain provided description.

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Some governments spend a lot of money on exploring space. Some feel that this investment is justified while other think that money should be spent on public services like healthcare and education.

the human has keen interest in exploring space even governments are also supporting such exploration by funding them. however, it is a matter of discord as some people think this as a positive step while others opposed it by saying that this money should be invested in public interest. this essay will elaborate both the views with my point of view.

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In some countries , owning a home rather than rentimg one os very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Owning a home is a dream of many people all over the world althought it is a developed or a developing country. This essay will discuss the importance of having an own house rather than living in a rented property and the potential advantages and disadvantages.

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Public services are also significant and shouldn't be overlooked. I would suggest that the revenue generated can further be used to invest in public facilities.

Government funding is the most paramount factor in running a country towards development,however to say ,that it should be spent on public services only is wrong.Art and theatre can preserve the culture of a country, therefore it has disagreed that the budget allocated to those is a waste of money and I will explain why in this essay.

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Some People believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

In today’s world, the discussion is more around punishment instead of making efforts to reduce crime. Some people believe that punishment shouldn’t be judged by crime and treated equally in trial. On the other hand, people recommend considering the situation of the accused when deciding on punishment.

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