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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.

Nowadays, many nations are waiting on the chance to host worldwide sporting programs, while others point to the fact that such actions have more drawbacks than benefits. In my opinion, international global sports are a good opportunity for the country to show themself and after competitions put them on a map. This essay will discuss both views and give reasons for my opinion.

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Some governments say how many children a family can have in their home. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

goverment need tax for the organise the situation goverment in every country but goverment must be transparant to cetizen for output paid. i totally disagree with this statement because not only from children to control massive children but also could be data regular for check the number of children a family. we know taxes always family paid to goverment, but it not logical because every family is not rich, so the goverment must think about how the poor family and whether the situation family is a good or bad.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to mankind, wildlife, and the ecosystem worldwide. This issue stems from a number of causes, and several solutions will be proposed in this essay.

There are several reasons why the temperature on the Earth has become more intense these days. The main cause is due to human activities such as building factories, driving more cars, and increasing number of airplanes. Since these activities make a significant contribution to releasing carbon footprint. For example, human burns fossil fuel to create energy, leading to the rise of greenhouse gases. Another factor is related to the act of cutting down trees in excess and damaging the natural habitats of wildlife. The atmospheric content of CO2 also depends on deforestation because trees are a huge reservoir to reduce carbon emissions.

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Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientist in today’s world. Do you agree or disagree?

Today,some people thinking about the entertainers are more important that scientist in the world.I disgree this opinion.I think scientist is very important in today's world.On the other hand,I think that entertainers are also important iin the world.So,this essay will show you why I think both people are importan our life.

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed

In the present scenario, crime rates are being increased day by day. Some people opine that these can be reduced by declaring the death sentences as people give more importance to their life. At the same time , are individuals who argue that new measures can be introduced to deal with this. However,In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

A wide range of people believes that having a car has more cons than pros. I will discuss these points of view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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some people think that the media should be for entertainment only, while others believe that media should have educational values. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is believed that the media should have only entertainment values. Other people, however, think that the media should have education values. Personally, I agree with the second group.

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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, we recognize the rate of rapid growth use of social platforms regarding youth. Numerous people consider that it's due to parents' focus on working and less looking after their kids. I personally agree with this statement as parents are not solely accountable for taking care of their kids, as well as they educate their children to use social platforms.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, the society believes that many children has spent most of their time in a day using phones, either it is smartphones or androids. This phenomenon happens probably because of lack of parents' invigilation and less of outdoor activities provide by school. Personally, I think this issue brings negative development than positive one dealing with children's characters building and health problem.

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The advantages provided by English as a global language will continue to outweigh the disadvantages.To what extent do you agree?

Globalisation has a huge impact on human population. Language is an integral part of culture and society, determining the country's strength. English has proved to be a universal language that is acceptable around the world. I believe its benefits outweigh its drawbacks.

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Some people say that ebooks and modern technology will replace traditional newspaper and magazine.

In the last few decades, a maintain increment of the online study material that is why few individuals contend that online literature will be only option for readers in the near future. I

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, computer seem to be a requisite in our daily life and even children start to use computers every day, which has caused some concern from the public. Admittedly, being a frequent user of computers has its drawbacks. However, it would be untenable to assert that daily use of computers is more negative than positive to young children.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

In this contemporary world, it is irrefutable that parents are the best teachers. Some people are of the opinion that nascent parents should learn parenting skills at school while others opine that it is needless to guide generations to be a parent. Personally, I agree that schools should incorporate parental education. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on this and will explain the skills needed to be a nice parent as well.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Nowadays, environmental degradation is being an acute problem worldwide, particularly in urban areas, thanks to human activities. To deal with this problem, governments in cooperation with individuals can take proper measures.

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses.Is it right to exclude males or females from certain profession because of their gender.

Women and men are generally look as having dissimilar forces and weak.It seems to me that women are weak toward men for working,and I will explain why in this essay.

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Some people think that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, the most important subject to learn in School is debatable. On one hand, people think that is History, on the other hand, it is surely Science and Technology. This essay will explain both of these arguments and provide evidence on why the importance of studying history is superior.

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Essay Question: Some people think that to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately-owned vehicles should be banned in city centres, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's world, the problem of congestion in megapolises is increasing. While some believe privately-owned vehicles should be prohibited, others think this is unreal. Both sides will be analysed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, ,many believe that other meausres will be needed. Discuss both sides.

The number of criminals and law offenders increases year by year. Many would argue that death penalty would deter them to repeat crimes, while others think that these measures is cruel and must opt to alternative ways. In this essay, I will explore and discuss both views and give my opinion.

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In the future all cars,busses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The development in technology and introduction of automated systems has made travelling easier over the past few years. Nowadays, transportation lines, for example, orange train and metro busses have made it possible to travel long distances without traffic difficulties. Some believe that all means of transportation will become driverless in future. However, I believe, as much as, convenient it is for people, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages.

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Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages.

In today's world, economic development is a major factor contributing in a country's growth. Over the years, many developing countries have become successful because of economic empowerment. I believe that the benefits of economic growth outweigh its drawbacks.

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