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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The top priority of business is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilties. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are number of organazations 's aim is earn money and have high expenditure so that there do not have to do social activites. I agree that this expect is somewhat justifiable. However, I still believe that each business also need to have the responsibilties to social not only focus on finance.

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The top priority of businesses is making money , and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

it is said by some individuals that it is no need to have social responsibilities for top priority of bussinesses. This writer completely disagreed with the given topic and will explain the reasons why in the next essay.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Undoubtedly, the advancement of technology around the globe has become a phenomenon to put reliance on ourselves, rather than depend on someone else. Whereas some individual's belief of the modern world is putting us in conditional others. This essay will examine both of the prospects of this argument.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles overweigh the disadvantages?

Advancement in technology has affected every aspect of our lives even the transportation system. It is predicted that, in future, vehicles would be automatic without requiring drivers. Although it would have some advantages such as decreasing accidents and less effort for the public, some careers related to driving would be eliminated. In this essay, I will scrutinize why its drawbacks overweigh its benefits.

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The majority of people believe that zoos ought to prohibited while others think that zoos must supported . In my opinion , I agree that zoos have positive effects on animals

The majority of people believe that zoos ought to be prohibited, while others think that they must be supported. In my opinion, I agree that zoos have positive effects on animals and therefore the government should invest their money to build more zoos.

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In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.

Nowadays in some overseas, there is not good carrying old people. In this essay, I will discuss these problems and solutions.

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1. Some people believe that violence in the media, such as in television programs and films, directly results in violent behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Majority of folks think that the main factor of violent act affect by strong sense program show on the media pathfrom. However, some of individuals may argue that the violent show can not build up a culpilt, there are many factors develope pesonality behaviour more agressive. In my opinion, I stongly agree with the rather viewpoint. Concequently,This essay,I will be discussed my disageement in the furture paragraphs with the reasons to support my opinion.

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Nowadays, many governments' budget money for the sports industry. Why do you think governments are funding sports so heavily? Do you think this is an appropriate investment?

In recent years it is seen that authorities are allocating funds to the sporting industry and they should provide those benefits. I believe that it is necessary to have an investment in the sports sector.

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It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed but they do not enjoy. Do you agree or disagree?

It has always been argued that living without any job is better thing as compared to who do occupation, whereas not gratified. I partially agree with this given statement and this essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs along with a reasoned conclusion.

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Nowadays nations are becoming more interesting and developing better thanks to the mixing of different nationalities and cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the development of the world in this century, Some people say that the cultural interference of different nationalities and cultures will bring interest and development. Personally, I completely agree with this above viewpoint. This essay will explain more about this problem.

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Some people say that because we can now watch films on our phones, there is no reason to go to the cinema. Others say that films should be seen in a cinema in order to be fully enjoyed. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Due to advancements in technology, a debate about cinema has arisen, with some believing that there is no point in going to the theatre when your phone can now play movies while others disagree and stand with the belief that in order to fully enjoy a film it needs to be seen in a cinema. This essay will discuss both views and the reasons why my opinion agrees with the latter.

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You recently agreed to meet a friend but missed the meeting. Write an email to your friend. In you email - explain why you missed the meeting - describe the impact that has on your day - suggest how you can meet up in the future

I’m writing to let you know I missed my flight because the airline's staff messed up.

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The top priority of business is making money, they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the almost businesses have the purpose of making money. So that, it believed that they did not need to have any public responsibilities. According to my opinion, i disagree totally this idea and this writer will give all the reason. On the one hand, the idea businesses don't need to have any public responsibilities alo right apart.

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The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In morden society, we are getting more economic development day by day. Everyone has many vital roles and their accountability. Many peple claim that the target of entrepreneur is rasing money without have social liability. From my perspective, I strongly disagree with that argument.

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The top priority of business is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The majority people said that the top antecedence of business is making money and they do not need to have public responsibilities. This writer will totally disagree with this opinion and will explain why in the text below.

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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

In the modern human society, the majority of people across the globle share some thought that possessing either a house or an apartment is more adventages than paying monthly rend to the landlord for one. In my opinion, I beleive this is possitive development which will be further explained in this essay.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvatages of working and living in a foreign country.

As nowadays many people are going to other countries for a job or study this has two sides advantage as well as a disadvantage for people who are living abroad.

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The given pictures illustrate how Youngsville in New Zealand transformed over the course of 25 years, starting in 1980.

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Some people think that the government should give financial support to artists such as musicians, painters and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, literature and art have started to become disappeared into the shadow of struggle in personal life. Therefore, some would think that the government should support this artist financially. Whereas, others believe that money should be invested somewhere else instead in talented artists.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Living in a foreign country can cause some problems, because communication is a basic skill needed by social creatures like humans. The most used method of communication is language. Every country developed its own language for thousands of years and then the language barrier came up as a serious problem for visiting other countries. As a non-English speaker, I find it hard to express what is in my mind. When you can not speak your mind, you cannot communicate. Every day we communicate with people, buy groceries, buy food, asking for help using our mother language. When we go abroad, we have to speak their language. We have to understand the currency so we can pay the right amount. In addition, we need to build relations with people around us and foreign people also have different types of humour that we must understand to build deeper emotions. To solve this problem, we can do things prior to living in a foreign country to adapt. We can take speaking classes to improve our speaking...

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