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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

There is always a heated debate that what are the most influential factors around the globe. There is a group of people that asserts on the importance of scientist and the impact they have created; whereas the other group is of the view that people are more inspired and inclined towards politicians. This essay will discuss both perspectives in detail before reaching a final verdict.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

With the rise in global population, there has been an increase in the demand for new housing societies in urban areas. This has created many challenges for cities such as traffic or pollution. Hence, it is required to develop new living areas in the countryside.

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In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

Major crimes rates have been decreasing in some countries, but citizens feel more insecure than before. One of the main causes of this issue are fake news and a possible solution to this is to educate people to verify the source of any information.

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Spending on advanced computer systems by authorities is very beneficial for development but many oppose this trend. do you agree or disagree.

Any work these days are done by using computers. Authorities and government officials are also started working on advanced computers. Online services made everyone to adopt this culture, but few people oppose this trend. In my thought, working on computers is inevitable these days and I completely oppose those who oppose this trend.

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In many countries, people would rather rent a house instead of buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting

Even in today's modern world, some people still find that is fundamental to own a house while others believe renting is better. While renting a house can be much faster than buying one, there are pros and cons to consider when thinking about either of them.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that in educational institutions, variety of subjects are being taught to the students. It is often argued that secondary schools should also include unpaid community services as an essential subject for today's young generation. I strongly agree with this notion as this can certainly help students to develop their social skills as well as to be a more responsible citizen.

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In the past, people used to travel abroad to look many differences from their home country. Nowadays, the sceneries in places all over the world are more and more similar. What are the causes of the similarities? Do you think the advantages of this similarity outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that people are quite passionate to experience the different nations around the globe. Therefore, previously folks travelled to the different countries in order to see the different things rather than their own place, but these days everything looks the same in the whole world. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this similarities and to my perspective, this trend possesses some drawbacks which are outweighed to its positive aspects.

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Nowadays as a part of the education process students are working for a company for a short period of time without pay. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this ? Give your own opinion

In the present Era, practical education is a part of modern education system. Practical studies is necessary for every student and it is more beneficial for individuals and organizations while drawback are very few.

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Modern cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is incontrovertible that recent years have seen the transformation of traditions to the modern trends-- which has created a debate as to whether it is favourable development or unfavourable. Notwithstanding, this disquisition will delve into the causes behind this worrying trend, and subsequently will explore my perspective, accordingly.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are getting materialistic day by day. Because of this character, it would so happen while choosing a career or work students often consider high income as their highest criteria. Debaters often argue that whether it is a good idea to mostly consider high salary at the moment of deciding career or job. This essay will certainly discuss that although the expectation of higher income at the time career choosing is consequential for the requirement of living good quality of life however, it could also lead to the job satisfaction.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Many youngsters decide to take a gap year before getting into their university education. They may spend their time earning money or exploring to get more understanding of working environment or exploring diferent places that they do not have any chance to visit. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of having a year off.

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One way to reduce the problem of traffic congestion is by increasing the tax on private vehicles. Do you think this is a feasible solution?

There is no doubt that, presently, traffic congestion is so severe. It is sometimes thought that rising private vehicle tax is the best method to control the issue. I strongly believe this method cannot be successful, instead, this brings huge repercussions.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Garbage is one of the main threat to health of folks. These days, Waste become a big concern for garbage pickers as well as for the government because it cause major environmental problems. There are various factors which continues this behavior of a human being. I am going to discuss two main reasons in below paragraphs which are,- Product attraction and Increased amount of packaging material.

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There is growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. what are the causes and solutions.?

There is no doubt that, presently, scarcity of freshwater is a major problem, which is affected globally. Human population exploits the nartural water bodies is the main cause of this issue, however, this can be effectively managed by certain measures.

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Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?

Ever since the transportation companies revolutionized affordable vehicle to the public, many people preferred to drive with their own cars to travel. It offers comfort and privacy compared to travelling with public transportation such as, buses, trains, and trams. This cause traffic problems on the roads and may lead to carbon emission pollution as well. There are several suggestions to decrease the number of cars on the roads that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives How could robots be used in the future Will this development be a positive or a negative development.

Even though the use of robots have become common place, there is an assumption that they are more likely to become more essential in human life. There is growing evidence that mobile robots can be utilized in healthcare field which contribute to society and therefore, I believe this is a postive improvement in modern life.

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University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a debate of whether tertiary students should take different subject as oppose to focus on their one specific subject. While some people believe that studying different subjects apart from their own subject brings benefits for the tertiary students, I, however, side with those who believe it does not for three main reasons.

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Many countries today are expecting high level of migration from rural area to cities what are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

In today's Morden world, people are more fascinated about migration from village area to megacities. As a reason, those who are lives in the country side area, they wanted to be better lifestyle and graceful future of their children. In the following paragraphs, I will depict the reasons and what kinds of impact will on local people of the city.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Education gives us a knowledge of the world around us and changes it into something better. In 21th century, we now have many more option regarding where and how to find that knowledge. Study aboard has a good benefit to increase their chance securing decent position, however it would be culture shock effect their life style.

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The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the biggest challenges faced by the world is global warming, which has detrimental consequence on the environment. In my opinion, the governments must expedite their spending to curb this menace. However, there are a number of initiatives authorities can take on local level as well, which can have positive impact on climate change.

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