IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 748

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays, more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be reason for this what would you suggest as a solution?

In recent times, increasingly senior individuals compete with youth people for the same jobs. In my opinion, there are several reasons for this trend namely, poor economy progress of country, and policy of retirement, however, I would like to recommend some measure to tackle this issue namely, governments could invest more money to create more job opportunities, and redcue the age of retirement.

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Topic: Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Though commuication can be done by many way but language is the best way to express anyone's feelings . However spoken and written both have their own significant in communication . I think talking face to face is the great way to conversation with othen rather than writting.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In my opinion, I will say learning foreign language not only work and travel language are benifit others side. For example, when you go to this learning for treatment someone then you speak fluently.

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Some people think that the government should provide free education at every level. However, some says that individuals should pay their university education. Discuss both view and give your opinions.

In this contemporary era,the expenses of improvement have been a debated issue. some people believe that the government should cover the cost of information at every level.while others tend to have the opposite viewpoint. This essay will discuss both aspects of this debatable issue and explain why should not be unpaid

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Do you agree with the following statement: home schooling protects students from a number of challenges faced by non-home-schooled children?

The statement that home schooling protects students from a number of challenges faced by non-home-schooled children is one that can be both agreed and disagreed with, depending on the perspective one chooses to adopt.

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The world is changing rapidly, working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the causes for the changes and give suggestions how people should prepare for work in the future.

The world is altering quickly , working conditions in present time are not the same as before and individuals no longer dependence on taking one job for rest of their life. The main cause for this changing is availability of technology, and job makerts has become more competitive, however, I would like to recommend some measures for people to deal with this changing including, adopt active lifestyle, and learn a new skills.

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The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

In recent years, increasing numbers of creatures are endangered; therefore, biodiversity is of paramount importance around the world. To preserve the abundance of species, some approaches should be implemented, for instance, organizing conservation areas and educating people to treasure all living creatures.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 254 words.

In several countries today, students choosing science subjects in university is not sufficient. This trend is becoming popular because of the various other subjects that have been introduced into the education system that the pupils could choose from. This has impacted the society in a positive way.

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People who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch TV. Agree or Disagree?

Whilest many people think reading books increase people's Imagination because book is a great source for knowledge whereas many think who watch Tv does not have better Imagination quality ,waste of time .I think both sides have its own significant .

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

In this modern era, everyone love technological gagets. In the next coming days ,every thing which we buy at shops will be totally replace with card payment and cell phone payments. I strongly agreed with this assumption. In this eassy, i will dabate , why am agree and why some individuals might be not happy with this advancement.

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many television news programmes show pictures of events in the news which people find upsetting. While television has a duty to report important news, it should not bring disturbing images into people’s homes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I completely agree that upsetting images must not be broadcasted in news channels that are watched by majority at home. Firstly, some viewers get afraid and the news they have watched might just be exagurated. Secondly, it can mentally disturb the spectators.

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Internet is an important part of our lives and we cannot imagine our job or studies without it. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?

With the increase in technological advancement more and more people are connected through internet. In recent times, learning and working cannot be considered without internet, as it become a cruicial part of our daily routine. This essay will not only discuss two main advantages including acessibility and reduced cultural barriers. but also highlights two major drawback which includes, physical isolation and increased dependency on plateforms.

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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, a number of people learn many kinds of languages in various ways. However, some children can not learn a language easily. ln my opinion, I disagree with this statement and schools should encourage them to learn languages for children.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The Impacts of doing sports on physical and mental well-being are manifold. Therefore, governments should provide sufficient facilities for their people as well as encouraging them to do such activities. Governments’ attention to sports could be judged by their countries’ success rate in international competitions. However, this may not be a good standard due to its shortcomings in including ordinary people.

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Some people believe that advertisements targeting children may have negative effects on them, and suggest banning such advertisements as a solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true to say that many advertisements are negatively impacting youngsters' lives. I completely agree with this notion and thus give my pertinent arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Scientific research should be the responsibility of government rather than commercial organisations. Do you agree?

Everybody knows that scientific research is very important for developing our life. We can catch good quality by scient. Some man or scient says ' scient our is sun, We couldn't live without it' that's why scent for everyone we shouldn't put it only responsibility of the government. İ disagree about it and have some reasons.

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Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

Obesity is one of the causes of preventable death, especially in industrialized countries. To tackle this problem, governments can reduce the impact of their overweight citizens by careful use of taxation to fund alternatives to sedentary lifestyle. However, individuals should also take responsibility for their own health by avoiding a bad diet and taking the initiative to participate in sport.

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Describe the type of clothes that you usually like to wear.

When I grew up, I didn't really have a lot of clothes, but I do remember one type that I was particularly fond of. It was jeans that are also stylish.

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Sports programmes are very popular on television nowadays. Some people argue that those programmes are the reasons for poor health of many young people as the prefer to watch sports rather than partake in them. Do you agree or disagree with this view ?

There is an opinion that teenagers’ health is weak since they like to watch sport programmes more than play them. I completely disagree with this point of view for two reasons.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Nowadays, many humans prefer to watch overseas films rather than locally manufactured films. This may be affected by the lack of financial support and the quality of the films. The government also can handle this problem by supporting it with money.

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