IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 748

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Robert Snowden: Some people think that people are naturally gifted to be a leader. Others, however argue that anyone can learn leadership. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Leadership qualities are frequently discussed in popular media nowadays.It is often argued by some that leaders are born with birth due to the requirement of the extreme level of dedication and intelligence.Meanwhile,others still claim that any human being can become leader as a result of hardwork and honesty of the people.However, I believe that every individual is capable of becoming leader.This essay will explore both sides of the arguments before discussing my opinion.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching tv or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Books are the helpful tool of developing the reading habits among the children.It is said by some individuals that children should read story books instead of playing games on the computer. In my perspective, I personally believe that story books enhance the creativity of children ,and they should avoid playing games on the computers and my viewpoints on this issue will be elaborated in the aforementioned paragraphs.

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Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

I tend to confess that the richest and governement authorities, controls the media and also insists the their opinions and controls attitudes of the people. To convince and to divert the hot issues in the society, people will raise some fake issues and will do the propaganda on those issues. The following essay will outline, what could be done to rectify this issue.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and as a result. Why do many people not get enough exercise? What can be done about their problems?

Exercise is nothing but burning our calories and stretching or moving your body, therefor that particular body part gets strengthened and our physic seems to be fit. Actually speaking, It is not necessary that exercise should be done only with the related equipments. It is there in our routine activities. But nobody is ready to do as there are compromising, time -saving alternatives. Many people think, when there is an easy option available, why should they go for an option that is physically hard to do.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, obesity is one of pressing problem in almost country in the world, this leads to some health isues. There is a host of culprits that breed to this task, and some effective solutions need to be taken to address the problem.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays the argument over whether owning a home or renting not settled yet.

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Some people believe that women should play equal role in military force.while others think women are suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views give your opinion

In this contemporary era, the concept of gender disparity has been vanished. Some people opine role of women and men should be equalized in the field of defence.However, other's are indifferent to this notion.I, personally, opine with the former view.

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Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, it has widely been observed that people prefer to live in a society having individuals from different cultural beliefs, educational background and geographical places than living in a place with the folks of the same culture. In my opinion, residing in a multicultural society have many benefits as they improve knowledge, and skills of the person. In this essay I shall discuss how it is advantageous for human beings.

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The solution of overcrowded traffic. What are the problems? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowaday, these are about of cars on British road and they have increased day to day. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. In this essay, I intend to examine, about the solutions of these problems.

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3. Public celebrations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

Every nation spends funds on the celebration of special days and huge extent of cash is utilized for the preparation of festivals.Some individuals believe that regime should utilize money for the welfare of the public, and their main focus should be on the social, economic and cultural problems.In my perspective, celebration of national days and public festivals are really the essential, but limited amount of money should be used for the festivity of these festivals and authorities should also focus on other problems.

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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Truly people do extreme activities like mountain climbing and sky gliding, cliff jumping, mountain biking, scuba diving and so on.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent times, the topic of children having excess weight compared to their age has been widely reportedly published from the countries of western world. This essay will discuss how the growth of fast food chains and lack of physical activities in school curriculum has led to unhealthy eating habits and obesity in children.

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Most people believe money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced personal life. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people work for money; others work for personal fulfilment. So, which is the better reason to work? Plethora of masses opine that in order to live a better lifestyle, money is imperayive whike selecting a job, on the other hand some handful of people believe that one should maintain the work- life balance bt not running behind the high- scale jobs. I will discuss both the views, along with my perception which is in the favour of later group.

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Some people say that travelling to a country is necessary if one wants to become familiar with a new culture. Others, however, feel that technology gives us enough tools to make travel unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The necessity of physical global exploration has come to the forefront of travelers’ awareness in this technological era. Some feel that travel is no longer required to obtain cultural experiences, as the internet provides all. However, I agree with those who say that journeying to a place is the only method of truly comprehending a foreign lifestyle. In the following paragraphs, I will explore the rationale for both beliefs as well as proffer justification for my own viewpoint. Regarding those who hold that technology is enough to learn about foreign cultures, there are many reasons. One supportive claim is that the internet offers endless resources to nearly immerse oneself in any environment. More specifically, an enterprising individual could become completely fluent in another language, by watching subtitled programs on Netflix, and then paying a local to converse on Skype. In fact, Stanford published a study in 2017 that found 60% of language learners utilized ...

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A section of society believes that it is important for children to be independent just as their choices ought to be them as it were. While others disagree with it. What is your opinion?

The paradigm shift in the lifestyle has changed the way parents nurture their off-springs. Owing to which a section of society contends that it is imperative for children to become self-dependent as well as their decisions should be made by them only. However, others are in disaccord with this. A question that arises is that, which ideology is worth supporting? I vehemently believe that former will be more fruitful for them. This essay intends to elucidate reasons along with relevant illustrations behind complete accordance with this notion.

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Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many species of animals are getting extinct. It is widely held believe that we must preserve all organisms but there is a strong counterargument that we should save only few of them. This essay will discuss both points of view and argue in the favour of first idea.

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People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Large cities bring about difficulties fo city dwellers to deal with in their daily life.This essay will discuss some major problems,and in my opinion,goverment shoun’t encourage people to move to smaller regional areas.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often said that music has the power to unite and connect people, regardless of their culture or age. I fully agree with this point of view, and will give my reasons below. Music can certainly reach across cultural and national boundaries and bring people together. Perhaps the best examples of this are the Live Aid concerts that took place in the 1980s, and were broadcast to a global audience. Two live events were held simultaneously in the UK and the US, with the aim of raising funds for famine relief in Ethiopia. The concerts have been hugely successful, both in terms of the number of people around the world watching them and their impact on international public perception of hunger. I believe they have proven that music is indeed the global language of the planet.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, there is a wide range of distinctive music genres in the world since music is playing an important role in our daily life. The traditional music of each nation and global music have different aim and original value but they share the same role in our entertaining world.

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It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries, owning a house rather than renting is very important for people. Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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