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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Overpopulation is a major problem in city centers. What are the reason? How can it be curbed?

These days the number of overpopulation is increasing dramatically and major problem in city centres.So many countries appear different problems and turn around the globe problem.

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Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent to do you agree?

There is a debate on how much one should evolve in terms of behavior and lifestyle when one moves to another country. Some people are of belief that it is healthy to adapt to another culture as it aids in smooth amalgmation into the new society and helps in individual growth. However, I believe while it is important to be flexible in your practices it is paramount that people retain their unique identity as it defines who they truly are and gives a new perspective to the existing culture .

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Many people prefer to spend all the money they earn and not save it. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In this era, inhabitants live hand to mouth since they do not like to do preserve money for their future.

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Childhood obesity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this and how can the problem be managed?

Nowadays childhood obesity is increasing rapidly in most of the countries. Children love to eat fast food and ignoring to eat healthy meals. This is a world problem because new generation is becoming unhealthy. There are many reasons why children becoming obese, and I believe there are some solutions to solve this serious problem.

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The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What problems does this cause and what are some solutions to these problems?

In these modern days, some people prefer watching movies on the screens of their phones and tablets rather than on screens of a cinema, while others say the film should be seen in a cinema to completely enjoy it. In the bellow essay, I will debate both arguments as well as my point of view.

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Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the Internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view.

In our modern world, along woth the advancments of technology and of the Internet, people nowadays can recieve any piece of information they want through the Web at home. As a result, some claim that having libraries that are free to the public is unnecessary. I disagree with this opinion and believe that free public libraries should be preserved. In this essay, I will discuss both view of this topic and will further explain my opinion.

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Some people say that computer have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. Discuss and give your opinion.

In today's globalised world computers are getting an integral part of our life. Some people claim that new gadgets relieve our life. Others believe modern tools are harmful for human health. In this essay I will discuss both sides of this issues.

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Nowaways, more teenagers want to become famous actors or singers. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

As ones realize, many young people would like to become famous actors or singers these days. one might have different arguments, but I believe this is happening because teenagers are able to see how famous actors or singers live by watching social media, and parents allow their children to have occupations. I believe this is a positive development.

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Professional workers like doctors’ nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to the society, so they should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that nowadays society can’t do without professional workers’ contribution, but it is also important to build personal entertainment and hold sports events. People may have different opinions on whether paid more for professional workers. I disagree that we should be paid more professional workers.

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Some people say that the main environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The sustainability of ecosystem, since directly determines the existence of all creatures on the Earth, has always drawn great concerns from all over the world.The booming population, however, together with the deterioration of environmental circumstances, have already threatened the maintenance of ecology.

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Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In recent years, education has attacted the general pubilc’s attention. Some people believe that the school should teach students about subjects them do ing well . While others say that school must teach childrens all subjects. This essay will give some reasons to support both views.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, the usage of social media has gained certain popularity among the public. it is widely notice that more and more human adoption social media, and there are some public who believe that there is a risk would leakage of information when they are on the social media websites. However, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for social media becoming popular.

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Buying goods and services online is very popular and has many advantages, but it is not always safe to shop online. do you think the advantages gained from shopping online outweigh the disadvantages?

Globalization is emerging at a rapid rate and individuals are being more tech savy, in this modernisation, doing online transactions

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number of male and female partiicpants in the olympics

The following bar chart and graph represent the participation of male and female players in the Olympics in the years 1924 to 2012.

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Children should play online games nowadays. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

Children at between the age of 4 until 18 they have to play video games to waste their time in finding new games to play on. Video games have purchased several new games for the children to play on. This essay will discuss the advantages and the disadvantages for children to play video games.

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In today's world, private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, the private sector is doing notable work in scientific exploration. Some expound that it is a good development because they can invest more in research work, while others oppose this due to the security vulnerability. I equivocate the latter notion and believe that demerits outweigh the merits. In this essay, I shall propagate my viewpoint with reasons.

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in many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

In many nations around the world nowadays, thoughts about young children after they complete their high school. They tend to go out and experience new life on their own or with relatives, and friends. I absolutely agree with this and will discuss it in the next paragraphs.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays a huge number of individuals prefer live their lives near their hometown or in the same country. This essay first will discuss that stable life is the main reason for this choice. Then it will focus on the fact that people live in their comfort zone as the strong side of this topic and will suggest that they lose the chance to know something new and change their lives as key drawbacks.

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The first man to walk on the moon said space exploration was going to change mankind’s life. Some people argue that it made only a little change to our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Curiosity about exploring the world beyond the earth has always been a hot topic of debate amongst the scholars. Some people argue that exploring of space, and reaching on the moon has altered our lives. Meanwhile, the other half believes that it has only made slight changes in human being's life. This essay will explore both the notions and will provide a logical opinion.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Migrating abroad for tertiary education has become increasingly popular (widespread) among learners. Although it can have some negative outcomes for some , according to me the positives are more potent .

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