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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Essay Question: Some people think that to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately-owned vehicles should be banned in city centres, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's world, the problem of congestion in megapolises is increasing. While some believe privately-owned vehicles should be prohibited, others think this is unreal. Both sides will be analysed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn

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There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, ,many believe that other meausres will be needed. Discuss both sides.

The number of criminals and law offenders increases year by year. Many would argue that death penalty would deter them to repeat crimes, while others think that these measures is cruel and must opt to alternative ways. In this essay, I will explore and discuss both views and give my opinion.

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In the future all cars,busses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The development in technology and introduction of automated systems has made travelling easier over the past few years. Nowadays, transportation lines, for example, orange train and metro busses have made it possible to travel long distances without traffic difficulties. Some believe that all means of transportation will become driverless in future. However, I believe, as much as, convenient it is for people, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages.

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Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages.

In today's world, economic development is a major factor contributing in a country's growth. Over the years, many developing countries have become successful because of economic empowerment. I believe that the benefits of economic growth outweigh its drawbacks.

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Some people believe that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement?

In this modern era, there is an increment of criminals in the world. Few masses believe that once a human becomes a culprit. he will never switch and he will always be an offender. I totally disagree with this statement and pertinent arguments in upcoming paragraphs and thus will lead to a logical conclusion at last.

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Some feel that individuals should have the right to strike in all jobs while others feel there are exceptions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In this competitive ,world everyone is trying to earn bread for themselves. As a result, there have been two classes which are formed. One is the administration and the other is the staff. Many times we hear news about the exploitation of the department by executives and that has given birth to strikes. Few masses in society believe that everyone should have the right to crash while others feel that not everyone should be entitled to have this. Personally, I believe in the latter notion and I will throw some light on both parts in this essay. To embark, Strikes give voice to the grievance. In this competitive ,world employers look after the profits from the business and try to cut dat expenses. In such situations, multiple-time employees suffer from serious exploitation. To avoid this scenario, every employee should have the right to raise their voice during the strike. Moreover, sometimes workers do not get the basic need from the organisation for which they work. To have t...

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Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problem can this cause?

it is true that more and more parents get involved in working, so they do not have enough time for their children. personally, I hold the belief that the increasing burden of workload is the main factor. however, this trend has a negative impact on both children and parents.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

In current era, our planet's habitats and ecosystems are at an alarming risk due to anthropogenic activities which are resulting in huge losses to biodiversity and leading to extinctions at an unprecedented rates than ever before.

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Some people think computers and the Internet are more important in child’s education. Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Now worldwide, people believe that the Internet and computers are more crucial to a child's education. Others think that for kids to learn, schools and instructors are crucial. In my point of ,view technology is very essential for every pupil and ,nevertheless teaching institutions and tutors also require for every student. In this, essay both points of view discuss and explore personal examples.

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Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings. Do you agree or disagree?

People have different perspectives on allowable utility animals in medical analysis for satisfaction for human beings. This essay disagrees that using animals in a medical studies for human benefit is appropriate.

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Some people focus on news in their own country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, the type of news that are more necessary still provoke debate among people. While some claim that national news should be prioritized, the opposite side believe that other nations news also should be considered. Personally, I would contend that both types of news are needed.

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Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interele are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.Some people regard w...

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some people say that the Government should not put money on building theaters and sports stadium. Others say that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different point of views and different perspectives in today world, some want their Government to spend money on medical care and education and some don't want to their Government spend money on building theaters.

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.Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The Internet is developing at a surprising speed and is change the whole way of our life and education. Although there are some people argue that in this case, students can learn by themselves at home, I still disagree about this opinion because even though the Internet plays an important role in pupil' study, school education is still indispensable.

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Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh disadvantages?

Taking risk in lives either professional or personal are important.

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Some people believe that professionals such as doctor and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It has been observed that, in the past few decades migration of professionals such as doctor and lawyers are noticed a group of some people agree with this view because they believe in work without restriction theory, as well as I also believes that but, others argue it will On their current country.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Natural resources like oil and petroleum are consumed greatly nowadays. So , some assume that new lands and fields need to be explored to find fossil fuels. However , I believe that exploitation of new sites can lead to so many problems like pollution and environmental issues . Therefore , I think thatthe disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Some people say that in all levels of education from primary school to universities too much tine is spend on learning than facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Practical skills are an essential part of working life. Some people think that the stage of education from primary school to university spending too much time on learning. However, I agree with those who feel students are less prepared for practical skills in school for two main reasons.

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Surveys conducted in 1982 and 2002 show different pictures of what motivate students to choose a college or university in the U.K. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

These two pie charts illustrate the changes in various factors that affect students’ choices about a college or a university in the UK in 1982 and twenty years later.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days, there is a controversy about studying about the past. Some people think it is an unnecessary task because the information about the past is unvaluable for modern people. However, I confirmly believe that it is important for our lives because of several reasons, which will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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