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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities having a negative effect on children because, the seer thinks about their life and favorite stars popularity but they wont think about the future generations. If they deliver the news in a good way that will not create more impact on kids. Media can gather information from various channels and telecast content in own way.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In this fast changing world, most of the people try to push their boundaries and explore new things in life. Nowadays, many folks try to migrate or move away from their home towns finding new opportunities. However some prefer to spend most of their time at their born place or near by. In this essay, I will discuss the adavantegs and disadvantages of the said fact and finally my personal opinion as well.

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Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think that cheap air flights should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, numerous people are having opportunity to explore and travel because of the low-cost airfare, however some people think that this gives middle class people to enjoy their freedom, while others think that this should be banned because it gives air pollution and creates a lot of chaos. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think that private schools have many advantages while others think there have many drawbacks for the community. Discuss both sides and give an opinion

In the contemporary world, different kinds of schools are mushrooming at different levels including high-level and private schools for affluent families. While some people mention the idea that these kinds of schools separate students and affect them in an adverse way, others think that there should be differences between wealthy and underprivileged societies.

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The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books as they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive high tech media , such as computer software, videos and DVD's . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this segment?

Public libraries should put their main financial, staff and space resources on normal books rather than on those expensive devices like computer software or videos. As far as i am concerned, I agree with this point.

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Space exploration is too much expensive and the money should be spent on more important things

Nowadays, many scientists try hard to explore space or new planets. However, space exploration is too much expensive. Many of the Earth's population want to spend money on other projects. Personally, I believe that scientists and governments should spend more attention on the exploration of space.

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Internet has changed our lives and economies besides turning our world into a global village . To what extent do u agree ?

At present time, we are so much dependant on internet that it has changed our lives and economies besides turning our world into a global village. As a result, everybody will think and behave in the same way. I completely agree with this opinion because internet has become a part and parcel of our life.

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Nowadays many people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this modern era, many individuals prefer to wear trendy designs more than their cultural outfits.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this century, there are a countless number of people that are showing interest in what concerne animals rights, therefore it is becoming an actual and argued topic.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people claim that it is the individual‘s responsibility. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable fact that the government is responsible for the fitness and academic values of individuals. Many pupils believe that the population is also taking a some responsibility of their own. In my, opinion the position of medical facilities and education appears to be more rational. This ideology has some advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, in this, essay we will address the positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their childern themselves at home istead of sending them school. Do the advantage of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, more and more parents who would like to teach their childern at home rather than letting them learn at school in some countries. I am of the opinion that it is more likely to have a harmful impact on pupil. Firstly, schools have more professional learning system than homeschooling. Secondly, offspring can learn and share their opinions with each other.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Majority of times more and more people spent their lives near where they tak birth. Although, it is an adavantge also, they are more confortable, however, there is disadvantage, which is lack of knowledge of other places. In my opinion, living in our mother land is not harming ones moral, while, staying in different place gives the knowledge and value the things which we have already.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.

There is an opinion,that it is worthy a significant proportion of family budget on celebtrations,however there is an opponent point of view,that it is a squander.I am inclined to agree with the first statement, as while gathering all together on holidays people create warmheart memories ,which stay with them forever.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is it a negative or positive development? Give your explanation using some relevant examples from your experience.

In today's perceptually transforming epoch , getting success plays a part and parcel role in any individual's life.As a consequence , it opined a few present, guardians put higher pressure on their offspring to succeed. I have given a few reasons along with suitable justifications for this trend for the impending subdivisions.And , also I believe this is a negative development.

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Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often suggested that unpaid community services should be mandatorily added to the curriculum of a high school students. Personally, I agree that the benefits of this required program, which include effective communication skill and better understanding of handling situations. I will explain my rIt is often suggested that unpaid community services should be mandatorily added to the curriculum of high school students. Personally, I agree that the benefits of this required program, which include effective communication skills and a better understanding of handling situations. I will explain my reasons in this essay.

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Many countries are worrying about people who have a lack of the ability to read and write nowadays. I think there are two main causes and several effects, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably people who live far from urbanization or rural areas are likely to have chance of becoming literate less than the villagers. It is a well-known reason that teachers are not employed in a sparsely populated area. The second key cause is a certain part of the total population of many countries does not have the natural ability to learn this kind of knowledge. If that number of people have severe mental illness, their chances of study something in any part of education institutions may be even lower. Firstly, Due to an individual's inability to acquire enough knowledge and information without the help of others, their opinion is sold and easily influenced by others who are not even sure whether he can lead others. Secondly, Universal Education is a social immuni...

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Many countries are worrying about people who have a lack of the ability to read and write nowadays. I think there are two main causes and several effects, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably people who live far from urbanization or rural areas are likely to have chance of becoming literate less than the villagers. It is a well-known reason that teachers are not employed in a sparsely populated area. The second key cause is a certain part of the total population of many countries does not have the natural ability to learn this kind of knowledge. If that number of people have severe mental illness, their chances of study something in any part of education institutions may be even lower. Firstly, Due to an individual's inability to acquire enough knowledge and information without the help of others, their opinion is sold and easily influenced by others who are not even sure whether he can lead others. Secondly, Universal Education is a social immuni...

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Many countries are worrying about people who have a lack of the ability to read and write nowadays. I think there are two main causes and several effects, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably people who live far from urbanization or rural areas are likely to have chance of becoming literate less than the villagers. It is a well-known reason that teachers are not employed in a sparsely populated area. The second key cause is a certain part of the total population of many countries does not have the natural ability to learn this kind of knowledge. If that number of people have severe mental illness, their chances of study something in any part of education institutions may be even lower. Firstly, Due to an individual's inability to acquire enough knowledge and information without the help of others, their opinion is sold and easily influenced by others who are not even sure whether he can lead others. Secondly, Universal Education is a social immuni...

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Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It's argued that Commimtent to the laws and regulations is one of the main marks of today's civilization, this essay discuss the shape of countries directed by laws and the main benefit of that, but also represent the opinions of those who want the opposite.

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Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives. Do you agree?

In this modern era, people like to spend a large amount of money on clothes, jewellery and many more items to look beautiful benefits the fashion industry. While some folks concur that the fashion industry has a bad negative influence on people's lifestyles. I tend to stand with the statement that does hold a valid ground which will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.