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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In this globalization era consuming liquor escalating at an alarming rate. Due to this, it has been controversial, in some nations legal age of drinking but others thought not imposed laws on it. I will discuss both sides of a coin as well as elucidate my opinion.

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In some countries, university students live away from home and in another city while studying. Do you think the disadvantsges outweigh the advantages of living in another city?

I am writing this letter to you because I recently purchased an item from your virtual store but when the item reached my home it was not working as expected.

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What Is the Global Warming Crisis? - A Global Warming Solution

Global warming has a huge impact on the earth. The world has been facing many effects from global warming and I will cover these issues and some resolutions in this essay.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what Measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is considered to be one of the most pressing environmental problems which we have at the moment. Increased greenhouse gasses is the main reason for global warming and I will suggest some ideas, which governments and individuals can imply, in this essay.

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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (250 words).

While singing can be perceived as a mere means of entertainment by some individuals, it can also play a significant role in the community nowadays according to others.

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Demand for gas or oil is increasing and so finding new resources in remote and untouched area is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

The posibility of finding new sources that can supply the currently raising demand for gas and oil is becoming a priority. This is leading to considering the explotation of zones that has never been altered in the past.

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Social media badly impact our relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree

in this contemporary epoch, social media play a major role in every aspect of our life. In fact, some people even say that it affected negatively the bonds between individuals. My personal position strongly agrees with that claim, therefore, in this essay, my supporting points will be provided along with relevant examples.

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the line graph ilustrates the supply of goods transported in the united kingdom from 1974 to 2002 by road,water,rail and pipeline.

The line graph depicts the information regarding the furniture that was shipped in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different means of transport.The data is calibrated in total oodles.

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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects better for children's future.

Some people argue that schools should teach children skills however, as for others having a variety of subjects is better for children's future. I strongly believe that these both sides are beneficial for them. And attend to one course would be great.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences arethe key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the social concerns today relates to reducing traffic accidents. Commonly suggested that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. However, others believe that it measures would be more effective in inproving road safety. In my opinion, the goverment has to strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents.

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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that goverment is wasting money on arts and thag money could better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some of them are of the opinion that the government is spending more money than needed on art and this has become a serious issue of argument lately. In my opinion, it is necessary that funds should be allocated towards art in order to preserve the cultural heritage of the country and encourage young and creative artists but in a reasonable manner rather than splurging.

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The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled plastic.

The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled plastic. It is clear that there are a total of 13 stages in this linear process, which can further be grouped into collection, preparation and productions steps. Additionally, a range of specialized pieces of equipment are utilized in this process, although the main raw material is plastic.

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Travelling abroad is a common trend nowadays for different reasons.This essay will discuss two main reasons for this cause and point out the negative impacts that would have on Society.

Many people often in more developing countries travel more and more abroad. The democratisation of travelling for tourism in foreign countries is one of the causes of this upward trend as well as the globalization more generally, with for example the delocalization of companies abroad.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the areas that governments must invest in is the transportation sector. Some people believe that they should spend more money on the railways section than the roads section. It is disagreed that governments should spend money on railways.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think advantage of technology outweigh the disadvantages

This day, most people using social media to stay updated to their loved ones and other people. I positively agree with this ways to communicate to others.

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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

The world is changing fast as a revolution of nanotechnologies in many countries. In this day and age not only electronic furniture, and gadgets are popular but also worker robots became famous. Using it at companies works even houses for relieving tasks for housewives. I believe this civilization is largely equal to positive and negative.

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The media should limit how much bad news they report because it discourage people from doing activitis which usually involve very little risk To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mass media needs to control the quantity of unsatisfactory information they portray since it dispirit individuals from performing activities that have minimal risk. This essay totally agrees with this statement. I believe that discouraging information effects on human performance, even if, this exercises are not dangerous.

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People should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people have different opinions on whether is it important the minimum age for driving 21. In my opinion, except in certain cases, I largely agree with the notion that people should have at least 21 years old because of the knowledge factor besides this a lot of traffic.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

There is no denying the fact that these days there are plenty of places in the world that earn money from tourism. However, tourism that is not well managed can be a huge source issue. The following paragraph will elaborate benefits as well as drawbacks with a responsable conclusion.

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