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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some countries, parents expect children to spend a long time studying in and after school and have less free time. Do you think it has positive or negative effects on children?

In some countries, parents expect children to spend a long time studying in and after school and have less free time. Of course, parents always want all best to their children. In my opinion, this has both positive and negative effects on children, both positive and negative.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life.Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.

For most people,when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation throughout their working life.If they decide to change,they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

High income performs a key role in choosing any job or career.I partially agree with this opinion for the reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We are living in a world where studying abroad is becoming more and more prevalent. However, there have been many controversial arguments about living in a foreign country where we can not speak our mother tongue. While some people said it may bring along some social issues such as practical problems.

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Some people say that it is important to keep Your home and your wife work place tidy,Is everything organised and in correct place.What is your opinion about this?

Many people argue that it is necessary to maintain cleaning in the houses and offices but others oppose that by saying in a busy schedule it is hard to keep everything tidy and organized. I will state my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and city closing do you agree or disagree?

The pie chart shows the percentage of people who tend to take food away in Canada, and the bar chart provides information about the number of Indian restaurants between 1960 and 2015.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays environmental problems are considering as one of the most important issues. Many people believe that the main environmental problem is the loss of specific species of plants and animals. However, others say that there are other environmental issues which are more important. I strongly agree with the first notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraph.

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Should not force children to learn foreign languages.

It is undoubtedly that learning a foreign language is essential for children. However, parents should not force the students to learn it. I share a similar point of view with this statement with the reason stated below.

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Essay topics: Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people love spending all their earnings rather than saving them for the future. Such behavior can be resulted from the belief of living in the present or not being able to use money efficiently. Definitely cosuming all we have is mischevious to our sustainability and by doing so people may bring sufferings in the upcoming days of their lives.

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you work at home and have aproblem with a piece of equipment that you for your job

I know you’re looking for a dedicated deputy store manager who’ll continuously adapt practices and policies to meet changing demands and circumstances.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

People who live in a foreign country they need to talk the mother tongue of this country and it creates some problems in their daily life and social life. I totally agree with this view that speaking in a foreign language can make a sever communication gaps for misunderstanding of their thinking and sometimes barriers in getting jobs and other facilities.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development

Thanks to the development of our society, individuals can now travel to isolated areas, namely the South Pole. Never has this area been exploded before so researchers could discover crucial information for thesis and tourists could appreciate a fabulous landscape. However, discovering those faraway environments could increase environment-related issues such as climatic change.

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Space research costs billions of dollars. Some people think that the money should be invested on more practical projects here on th earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Space research costs a fortune , I strongly agree with people who think that the money should be investes on more practical projects here on earth.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Despite of emerging opportunities for job in metropolitan areas, many find it comforting to live nearby their hometown for several reasons. It has its own merits and demerits which will be discussed further.

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Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I definitely agree with the notion that individuals should switch their careers at least once in life. A number of arguments surround my opinion. To begin with there are some strong benefits that can come from a course development. One of the major benefit of changing careers are money. People may make more per year than they did with their previous work. This can help to lessen the financial burden of an individual or family. Secondly, a course switch brings the opportunity to learn new skills. They will have to learn new actions and meet new expectations. This general education is formed through a course the change will be beneficial in the future. What is more, those who have a wide range of careers under their belt will have more work security in the long run. Instead of being proficient at one course path, a person can be proficient with two or even more. If he loses his work, he can seek out jobs in different career fields, as opposed to one course field. Therefore...

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Many things that use to be done in the home by hand are now being done by the machines. Does this development bring more advantage or disadvantage

Over recent years, rapid ameliorating of technology led to considerable changes in our lifestyle. According to this evolution, every aspect of our daily routine, even light housekeeping has been changed. For instance, many things like washing dishes and clothes are being done by machines, instead of hands. Obviously, this phenomenon has its advantages and disadvantages that I tend to discuss in this essay.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern techonologies such as smartphones and computers. What is the cause of this? What are some possible solutions?

Today some old age individuals struggle with use of today technologies item like mobilephones and computer, because of this they facing many problem such as not connecting with their childrens and in upcoming essay I will give some solutions as well.

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People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the vast majority of people tend to utilize credit cards more than cash due to technological progress that has grown in the last twenty years. Doubtless, there are some benefits and drawbacks such as cyber-attacks, spam, system problems, and so on. I strongly believe that the advantages overweigh the disadvantages of this payment method. This essay will examine the proses and cons of paying by card and provide a logical conclusion.

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There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Immigration is one of the most intentions of people learning a foreign language. It does not matter which country you would like to immigrate to, the fact is that you must know how to communicate and comprehend people in the common language of your destination.

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Nowadays young people mostly learn by reading books or watching movies and TV shows ,rather than personal experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a controversy among many people of at present-day teenagers are more likely to study knowledge through books and moves. I completely disagree with this believe due to the revolution of employment and the need for a fulfield wage.

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