IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 763

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A section of the populace is of the view that, using the web has made people United while others are of the notion that, people and the environment are separated from each other. Both schools of thought are right, however it is wise to side with the latter.

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Group and team activities are more important than the actives done alone, because they teach us important life skills do you agree or disagree

There is no doubt that group activities are more effective rather than alone activities. It is improving our knowledge at a rapid pace. In this, I would describe certain advantages of team activities.

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Some people believe that to protect the local culture,tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is believed by some individuals that in order to preserve the local culture,tourism should be forbidden while others are of the opinion that prohibiting tourism will have no advantage.This is due to the notion that tourism makes the locals to imitate a new way of life and lose their values. However, some believe that change is constant and people's way of life can still change regardless of tourism. I am of the opinion that tourism should not be outlawed.

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Many efforts has been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation has not improved. .What are the possible reasons for environment degradation? are there any solution to combat ? Support your answer with specific reason and examples.

It is a challenge for everyone concerning the global warming, many countries are coming together to face such a challenge, but the situation has not yet improved. It is responsibility of ever individual to take part in supporting the government and stand to protect the environment from getting polluted.

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Many countries think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress as equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most of the countries’ government think that economic developments are most significant aim; nevertheless, others opinion that other types of developments are as important as economic developments. In my opinion, education and health services also deserve investment.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In the globalization era, world has become a small village, which in results has become easier to access almost anything from every corner of the world and education is one of the impacted areas. Now a days, students has access to various institutes throughout the world, consequently, they are keen to study in foreign universities for their future benefits, though, this has its own pros and cons which we will discuss in this essay.

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some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most people do not know if they will stay in the same organisation or they will shift to another. Most people tend to think about the present and forget about the future. In my essay I will discuss both views and write my own opinion.

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Neighbours are the people who live near us, and their behaviour influence our daily life. Good neighbours can make us feel comfortable and give us many help, and everyone will benefit from a good relationship among neighbours. Friendly behaviour, willingness, and respect are some important qualities that make great people who live next door to us. For many reasons, which will be mentioned below the essay.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The purposes of sport are varied from entertainment to competitions. Some think that physical strength is the most essential key to be successful in sports while some argue that mental strength contributes more to sports. I personally think that both factors are important in order to win a sport however it as well depends on the type of sports.

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more and more students are choosing to study in abroad. do the benefits of studying an abroad.

Nowadays studying in foreign countries more popular. A lot of students choose the study in colleges and universities in the other country. Some people think study in abroad have not any beneficial ways, whereas, in my opinion, there are several useful sides to study, for example, some students decide to study for taking a lesson from professional professors, to start independent life or highly common reason is to see the world.

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Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In this stressful life everyone seeks happiness. No one wants sorrow in their life they want to live life happily.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Due to the advancement of technology ,students tend to learn everything by the aid of computer based programs such as Internet websites which are used commonly around the world.Thus,it plays an essential role to reveal an advanced level of reference settings.It is agreed that most people use it for a range of purposes like searching for beneficial materials and being familiar with latest developments.So,it is a simple tool to have such facilities, as I will illustrate in my treatise.

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What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

In today’s world,it is hard to imagine life without taking an expertise into account, By virtue of this one can find a suitable position even in difficult circumstances.As an example,it is known that most people who cannot find a proper job is often because of their lack of knowledge ,experience and academic credentials.In my opinion,having an excellent academic credential is the key to be a respected person in such cases.So,it is highly thought of one who has gone through this process and has reached the peak of its career .I will illustrate those key points in my composition later.

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some people believe that education should be free for everyone on the country.

Undoubtly, technologies are like a computer or smartphone are able to easily translate variously of languages promptly and precisely. Thus, some people believe that learning languages are just waste of time. I completely disagree with this opinion, as the computers are just a machine which is never taking the place of humans whereas there are several plus ways to learn languages. For example, introduce new alien people or see the world without any technique tools.

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In The Future,Nobody Will Buy Printed Newspapers Or Books Because They Will Be Able To Read Everything They Want Online Without Paying.To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree With This Statement?

It is generally believed that since people currently able to acquired instruction on the Internet in a much easier way than in the past, printed newspapers or books are no longer necessary. While I accept that online sources of material have some advantages over traditional books, I would argue that is still a great need for printed books in today's world.

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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

At the present time , cooking at home is considred to be immensely different from restaurants. Therefore,some people keen on dining out while others prefer to stay at home and cook for themselves.As for me,i would rather prepare food at home as opposed to going to food stands or restaurants.Eating in is both much healthier and has nutritional value and I will point out why in my essay.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

It is indeed true, in many countries around the globe, researches have conducted experiments and examinations and have concluded that genetic traits have a greater influence on the personality and development of an individual. However, some people are of the notion that experiences in life play a major role in the character moulding of an individual. I believe, although inherent traits and experiences may equally influence a person’s character, it is the experiences in life that have a greater impact on them.

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Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals hold the view that achieving minor income disparity between the rich and the poor is the key to a happier society. While I agree that narrowing wealth gap can improve the well-being of people, I doubt that a small amount of income difference is realistic and the outcome would be completely positive.

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today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. discuss this view and give your own opinion

In the contemporary world, a teenager experiences more stress to sustain in the society than anyone. The decision making process of a teen is more complex than any other age group. It is considered that 65% of the stress management institute consists of teenagers in their classrooms. The world education system has also given, stress management, a vital subject of interest.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Education, irrespective of the delivering source, is an important part of a child's mental and social growth. I believe both school as well as home environment plays a major role in the growth process.

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