IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 955

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the institute, students learn to analyse literature, calculate using trigonometry and understand how photosynthesis works, but often pupils are inexperienced and helpless after graduation when encountering the real world. It is therefore argued that academy should teach their pupils how to survive financially in the world.

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Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health? Do you agree or disagree?

It cannot be denied that health is the topmost priority in an individual's life. Few people think that schools do not put much effort in teaching health to adoloscents however I would argue that today's education system is designed in such a manner that health is the matter of greatest importance to everyone.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people are weak hearted like they accept their failure very easily without even trying for second time.While there are people who just do not give up to their situation they keep on trying to improve but just do not feel sad and sit around.This essay will delve both the perspective and will end with my own opinion on this matter.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately ,learning foreign languages is a waste of time ? To what extend do you agree or disagree

Learning a foreign language may be unnecessary after we found translators.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than other experiences we may have in life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

When we are brought to this world, we possess traits from both parents.The odds turn out to be the traits, that are displayed the most in that individual.Although, it is very common for the offspring to gain other characteristics as he/she grows up, these characters are merely noticable.They are gotten from learning and environmental changes, and always tend to be forgotten or unused.It is of this fact, that scientist adjudge that traits possessed as a child is given birth to, poses much more effect on the child's development or do they really ?In my opinion, they really do.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lots of choices have more open door for further for human being. In this fast updating era, every field sector should upgraded immensely and get much more outdated opportunity for the people. In this upcoming paragraph, i will truly prove this statement.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, working becomes a time-consuming activities for employees, giving them a minimum spare time to exercise. If this behaviour becomes more frequent, it might risk their well-being. In thi essay, I will discuss the potential symptomps and provides the possible solutions to this problem.

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Problems with environmental pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. discuss cause and effect and Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.

As the world is growing day by day, there are advantages and disadvantages. One of the main disadvantages is the emerging environmental problems. These natural issues have become a real concern that most of the developed and the developing countries are taking initiatives to solve the current issues or finding alternatives to overcome the situation.

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Some people believe that we succeed in sport due to our inborn talent. Others argue that continuous working on oneself is a key to success. What do you think?

Some people agree that talented athletes were born gifted. Others argue that raw talent is not the main feature that helps sports players to master a sport skill. In my opinion, despite the fact that being born with special talents is very beneficial, the skills that contribute to success in one's sports path are made from effort and determination.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

International tourism has had adverse effects on the local community and environment. However, the benefits associated with tourism are phenomenal. Personally, the advantages remain far more significant.

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Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us want to be and to look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, it is controversially debated that commercials prevent people from being characteristic since they make people want to be homogenous. I am not totally side with this statement and this essay is dedicated to analysing my perspective.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Traveling abroad and practicing outdoors sports has become a very popular way to relax from the daily rutine and a way to scape from the stress caused by living in the city. Throught the time, just going camping or walking on the field has gotten common and less exciting, causing people to explore new wild places with inusual environments. This new trend can bring both good and bad consequences for the area.

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Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the economic development, an increasing number of population flooding into big cities to pursue their dreams. A large number of them are suffering from housing scarcity due to the ever-accelerated housing price. Some believe that this problem can be only solved by government interruptions. To my mind, authority plays a role in tackle this problem, while there are still other alternatives that can be applied.

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Technologies like AI and Robotics are automating many human jobs and helping to maximize company profits. However, this may result in a new wave of mass unemployment and government should step in to regulate these fields. Discuss arguments for both sides and give your opinion.

Many large organizations are turning towards modernized technologies for automating their processes, this inturn is helping them reap enormous profits. According to some, this might have a negative impact on human resources as they are running out of options for jobs. They beleive that the government should intervene this process to save common mans livelihood.

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Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?

These days, It is undeniable that health problems are one of the problems that everybody should be aware especially the decline of consuming healthy food and sufficient exercising. In the following paragraphs, both causes and some sensible solutions will be presented.

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Schools concentrate for too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?.

School curriculums required students to study almost every subjects despite the fact that the students will not be using the things they learn from most of these classes as they are not relevant to their interests. In my opinion, I totally agree that schools should not be focusing on following the traditional ways of teaching in which students have to study many subjects that are not going to help them prepare to meet the qualifications of the working world.

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The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world is bedeviled with monstrous environmental hazards like global warming and a rise in seawater levels. Some think that the best solution to the problem is that the current generation should sacrifice their comforts for the benefit of future generations. I do not deny that lifestyle changes are necessary, but this does not mean that the present generation has to sacrifice their comforts. The lifestyle changes may be beneficial for the current generation in many ways. The lifestyle changes may not be onerous. For example, the government has banned the use of plastics. Shop owners have resorted to paper and cloth bags instead. This move has not reduced the comfort of the current generation in any manner. There is a change in lifestyle with no reduction in the comfort level. Another initiative from the government is planting trees and policing paper use. People are advised to take double side print outs. This is a welcome initiative as trees help to purify the air, whi...

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Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviours. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviours the most. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent years the more entertainment programmes on televisions have aired, the more parents concern about the possible negative effects. However whether the amount of time spent or the content of them has the most impact has been argued. In this essay, I'll cover both views and conclude why I opine with the latter.

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Most people around the globe are now a days working vigorously for lengthy hours.This is due to an increasing competition among the work force and our willingness to strive and be the best.In this process we forget to allocate some of the time to our personal development.We often allocate very little time for leisure activities.This kind of situation is very bad and I feel it has more disadvantages than benefits.

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PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT VIOLENCE ON TELEVISION AND IN COMPUTER GAMES HAS A DAMAGING EFFECT ON SOCIETY.OTHERS DENY THAT THESE FACTORS HAVE NO SIGNIFICANT INFLUENCE ON PEOPLE’S BEHAVIOUR.WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

It has been observed that television and computer games can lead to harmful effect on generation these days.Some people believe that watching crime content on television and playing brutality games on computer can lead to violence, while other refute the notion.Moreover,this can be due to several reason ranging from the content of movies and serials to the influence of video games.From my personal standpoint,I believe television and computer games these days create negative effect on community.

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