IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 952

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates a comparison of expenditure on different forms of entertainment during a five years period. The comparison was generalised in 3 regions which consist of Asia, Europe and the United States. The concerned categories include Cinema, Video, Music, Publishing and Television.

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in some countries it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age is this a positive or negative development?

It is true that age is sometimes included as important criteria for determining selected candidates for job in companies. However, it is considered as illegal job requirement procedure in several nations. In my opininon, this phenomenon is a negative development which can bring downsides for both company and the labours themselves.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

College students are regarded as the world's future because they are well-educated and creative, so they always get much attetion. Some people consider that college student are supposed to study what they really like. But in others' opinion, subjects which are useful in the future like science should be the main study purpose of students.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human nature is versatile and unique, everybody is able to adapt to a new life and enrich his or her inner world. Unfortunately, a lot of people are not capable of brave deeds and live the life, which doesn’t, satisfy them. I believe that individuals should not be scared to make changes and learn to believe in themselves. Moreover, I will illustrate a couple of examples from my life, which are based on the following points.

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Some people say that mobile phones should not be allowed in public places, others argue that people should be free to use their mobiles wherever they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two visions about using the electronic devices in places with high density of people. Thus, the one part objects that individuals should not use the cell phones and stop bothering strangers with the noise, whereas another one posits to keep speaking on the phone in any places they want. Therefore, I would like to look at both of these views along with illustrating my own experience.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human nature is versatile and unique, everybody is able to adapt to a new life and enrich his or her inner world. Unfortunately, a lot of people are not capable for brave deeds and live the life, which is not, satisfied them.I believe that individuals should not be scared to make changes and learn to believe in themselves. Moreover, I will illustrate a couple of examples from my life, which are based on the following points.

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Empolyers should focus on personal qualities instead of qualitifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do agree?

Managers ought pay attention on characteristics of employee instead of certifications and experience when they take someone for a career. In my opinion, I strongly believe that qualifications and experience are important, but I do also believe that personal qualities are significiant.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that students should be allow to choose what they wabnt to study. While other claim that they should study only the relevance subjects that are useful in the future working life such as if they will be working in science or tecnology then they have to study the subjects that will get acceptable , to work in science or technology fields. In this essay I will be discuess about both views then, I will give my option in the end.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

Having different experiences requires the power of risk. While a group of people tends to satisfy their inquisitiveness by trying unfamiliar things, the other group would rather hold their accustomed lifestyle. Both views are discussed in the following.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

Due to Globalisation,it is possible for the University students to pursue their desire course around the globe. Most of the students are travelling out for their further studies are increasing day by day. This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks and explain the points further.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and production and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people buy local products

in this day and age, mass product cooperations are spending an increasing money to encourage consumers purchasing their commodities. This has leading to several adverse impact to the buying habit of local people which lately cause harm to the regional economic. To the best of my knowledge, the government should take actions to boost sales of smaller companies.

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Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

Nowadays, safety is managed by CCTV cameras, police stations at the corner of streets minimizing crime, however, some feel the danger even at home and the streets. I believe that the issue some from the fact people became smart about committing a crime by tricking devices and incorporating is key to solving it.

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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning is a must for each of us, learning will give us a lot of knowledge to make us more mature, it also gives us a lot of skills necessary for our lives such as: life skills, communication skills,.... Since ancient times, people have known the importance of accumulating knowledge and have sought to be able to pass on knowledge to the next generations, and from there the school was born. School is a place that will teach younger generations all the knowledge they need to have for their future lives, but in the current 4.0 era, school seems to be no longer so important when every student Everyone can look up whatever information they need on the Internet.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Punishment is not necessary and should be avoided entirely in helping children learn the difference between right and wrong. As a tool in teaching, punishment has multiple side effects that makes the learning experience undesirable and traumatic. The quality of the lesson itself is inadequate as reasonings and explanation may be missing entirely from the usage of punishment. Many other tools also exist to help children learn, and although they require more time and effort in administering, the result is well worth the effort.

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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go sporting or events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The current trend has seen many individuals spend most of their earning in buying tickets for entertainment activities.However,As much as entertainment has merits of releaving stress and also promoting social interactions it has some demerits too.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, availing news is quite easy, whether it is through news paper or news channel. However, young generation do not indulge in the news because online games & private channels have taken over it.

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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

It is undeniable that tourism is becoming more popular in many developing countries these days. The main reason is that local people can make lucrative incomes in this field. However, it may also have some drawbacks in some different nations. From my point of view, I strongly believe the cons would outweigh the pros.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

In this day and age, because of the rapid human civilization, the authority’s administration is crucial to the peaceful and independent state of a nation. Consequently, legislations are required to operate the community properly. However, there is a school of thought avers that human freedom is of greater significance than rules and regulations for some rationales. My firm conviction is that, without an official set of laws, the country can experience an acute crisis.

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in spite of the advances made in agricultures. many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

In today's world because of development in technology specificaly in agriculture, accesibility to the foods are easier than before. Although, a vast majority of people who live in the different parts of the world cannot provide food for themselves. I believe that we can tackle to this problem with some solutions despite the fact that there are an improtant reasons for this issue.

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

University education, even though is definitely directed towards generating lucrative employment opportunities for the advanced students; there are additional arrays of associated benefits of tertiary education that are worth mentioning.

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