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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is now more and more common that celebrities provide support, financially or through media, to international aid organizations, which sounds very generous and meaningful, but still draws mixed public responses. Some argue that their support puts organizations under media spotlight, while others rebut that it might undermine the importance of problems. I believe that if celebrities genuinely help organizations, they can make tangible contributions that few groups can make. For proponents of celebrities supporting international aid organizations, with their massive fan base, they can easily mobilize many people to draw attention to problems that organizations are tackling. Many high-end brands pay celebrities up to hundreds of or even thousands of dollars to invite them to show up in their advertisements, which well demonstrates their great power to draw public attention. When the power of celebrities is put into legitimate use, it can encourage countless people to take a...

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

The giving bar chart provides information about the habits of American people for eating fast food from 2003 to 2013.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowdays, Every human is relying too much on Technology. And due to this overreliance, it is unavoidable to say that traditional culture is coming to an end as technology is developing dramatically with each passing day. I completely agree with this statement and will give reasons regarding it in this essay.

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Some people fell unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? what can be done to address this issue?

Since industrial revolution our world has been developing in technological mean, on the other hand mental health getting less resistable to pressure from the outside. It led to appearance of some mental issues such as claustraphobia, hydrophobia, and the sence of being unsafe everywhere. Since the hystory of claustraphobia is way too sophisticated and hydrophobia is an aftermath of drown people, it is better to talk about the feeling of unsafety. What caused it, and how does it affect the daily life of the person?

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates a comparison of expenditure on different forms of entertainment during a five years period. The comparison was generalised in 3 regions which consist of Asia, Europe and the United States. The concerned categories include Cinema, Video, Music, Publishing and Television.

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in some countries it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age is this a positive or negative development?

It is true that age is sometimes included as important criteria for determining selected candidates for job in companies. However, it is considered as illegal job requirement procedure in several nations. In my opininon, this phenomenon is a negative development which can bring downsides for both company and the labours themselves.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

College students are regarded as the world's future because they are well-educated and creative, so they always get much attetion. Some people consider that college student are supposed to study what they really like. But in others' opinion, subjects which are useful in the future like science should be the main study purpose of students.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human nature is versatile and unique, everybody is able to adapt to a new life and enrich his or her inner world. Unfortunately, a lot of people are not capable of brave deeds and live the life, which doesn’t, satisfy them. I believe that individuals should not be scared to make changes and learn to believe in themselves. Moreover, I will illustrate a couple of examples from my life, which are based on the following points.

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Some people say that mobile phones should not be allowed in public places, others argue that people should be free to use their mobiles wherever they like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two visions about using the electronic devices in places with high density of people. Thus, the one part objects that individuals should not use the cell phones and stop bothering strangers with the noise, whereas another one posits to keep speaking on the phone in any places they want. Therefore, I would like to look at both of these views along with illustrating my own experience.

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People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human nature is versatile and unique, everybody is able to adapt to a new life and enrich his or her inner world. Unfortunately, a lot of people are not capable for brave deeds and live the life, which is not, satisfied them.I believe that individuals should not be scared to make changes and learn to believe in themselves. Moreover, I will illustrate a couple of examples from my life, which are based on the following points.

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Empolyers should focus on personal qualities instead of qualitifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do agree?

Managers ought pay attention on characteristics of employee instead of certifications and experience when they take someone for a career. In my opinion, I strongly believe that qualifications and experience are important, but I do also believe that personal qualities are significiant.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that students should be allow to choose what they wabnt to study. While other claim that they should study only the relevance subjects that are useful in the future working life such as if they will be working in science or tecnology then they have to study the subjects that will get acceptable , to work in science or technology fields. In this essay I will be discuess about both views then, I will give my option in the end.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

Having different experiences requires the power of risk. While a group of people tends to satisfy their inquisitiveness by trying unfamiliar things, the other group would rather hold their accustomed lifestyle. Both views are discussed in the following.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

Due to Globalisation,it is possible for the University students to pursue their desire course around the globe. Most of the students are travelling out for their further studies are increasing day by day. This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks and explain the points further.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and production and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people buy local products

in this day and age, mass product cooperations are spending an increasing money to encourage consumers purchasing their commodities. This has leading to several adverse impact to the buying habit of local people which lately cause harm to the regional economic. To the best of my knowledge, the government should take actions to boost sales of smaller companies.

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Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue?

Nowadays, safety is managed by CCTV cameras, police stations at the corner of streets minimizing crime, however, some feel the danger even at home and the streets. I believe that the issue some from the fact people became smart about committing a crime by tricking devices and incorporating is key to solving it.

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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning is a must for each of us, learning will give us a lot of knowledge to make us more mature, it also gives us a lot of skills necessary for our lives such as: life skills, communication skills,.... Since ancient times, people have known the importance of accumulating knowledge and have sought to be able to pass on knowledge to the next generations, and from there the school was born. School is a place that will teach younger generations all the knowledge they need to have for their future lives, but in the current 4.0 era, school seems to be no longer so important when every student Everyone can look up whatever information they need on the Internet.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Punishment is not necessary and should be avoided entirely in helping children learn the difference between right and wrong. As a tool in teaching, punishment has multiple side effects that makes the learning experience undesirable and traumatic. The quality of the lesson itself is inadequate as reasonings and explanation may be missing entirely from the usage of punishment. Many other tools also exist to help children learn, and although they require more time and effort in administering, the result is well worth the effort.

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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go sporting or events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The current trend has seen many individuals spend most of their earning in buying tickets for entertainment activities.However,As much as entertainment has merits of releaving stress and also promoting social interactions it has some demerits too.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, availing news is quite easy, whether it is through news paper or news channel. However, young generation do not indulge in the news because online games & private channels have taken over it.

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