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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children than in the past. is it a positive or negative development. Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

With change in trends, parents these days are giving more liberty to their children than given in the past. Although some people say that giving more freedom shall negatively affect children, giving more freedom have a positive impact on the society and development of the children in becoming more responsible and successful adults.

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Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recent years have seen a dramatic boom in smartphone use, contributing to the worry that the ability to make facial contact with others instead of just typing online has been lost. I totally agree with this opinion, from my personal standpoint.

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Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technologies are brought to enhance the quality of outcomes and also it has been applied to all fields, whereas workers are likely to be decreasing needs instead. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.

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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet.To what extent do u agree.

A varied and balanced diet is the key to good health. It is generally believed that a well planned vegetarian diet contains all the nutrients required by the body.I agree with this ideology to a large extent, and the ideas to support this viewpoint are analysed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.?

It is controversial that whether governments are responsible to invest in arts and music or not. I strongly agree with the opinion that investing in areas such as arts is unbeneficial and unfair. this is due to many reasons. I will discuss in this essay the main two reasons; it will limit freedom of art and there are services more important than supporting hobbies.

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Fresh water has become a global concern for the world. What are the causes of it.? What measures government and individual should take to resolve the problem? Give reasons and examples for your answer

Nowadays, many people believe that the availability of clean water is now a major problem around the globe. There are a lot of reasons behind this. Unavailability of freshwater presents many health problems for an individual. Therefore, in this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons behind this, and what measures the authority and we as individuals can take to resolve the problem.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific world, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people share their gained experiences, ideas, knowledge, and discoveries on the Internet. Most people claim that the greatest amount of information should be shared with the general public, while others argued that there is some essential data that is of great value to be in common access. I certainly believe that particular information needs to be secret from society due to its importance. This essay will discuss both views and summarize the main reasons.

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Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the years, based on facts it is not true that minimum age across all cities has to do with road safety. A recent study has been conducted throughout fifty thousand participants across all globe with a range of young adults to elderly starting from age eighteen to fifty years old that accidents are caused by driver's mental conditions such as obsessive and anxiety disorder, driving without possessing a valid license, reckless driving such as rushing without checking blind spots. In my ...

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Some people think that increasing the cost of fuel is one of the best ways to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion？

It is true that the crowd of cars has increased substantially especially during the last three decades and it is blame for heavy traffic in suburb areas, obviously some measurements should be taken into consideration by government. This is the main subject of debates in development countries.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement

There is no doubt that the internet has changed the way we execute our work and its results especially online activitiess. Some individuals argue that in future, no one will purchase paper books, gazettes and magazines because the trend of studying news online is spreading among masses. I completely agree with the view that online reading of articles and ebooks showing upward trend and are widely accepted and recommended by many individuals.

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Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the institute, students learn to analyse literature, calculate using trigonometry and understand how photosynthesis works, but often pupils are inexperienced and helpless after graduation when encountering the real world. It is therefore argued that academy should teach their pupils how to survive financially in the world.

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Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health? Do you agree or disagree?

It cannot be denied that health is the topmost priority in an individual's life. Few people think that schools do not put much effort in teaching health to adoloscents however I would argue that today's education system is designed in such a manner that health is the matter of greatest importance to everyone.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people are weak hearted like they accept their failure very easily without even trying for second time.While there are people who just do not give up to their situation they keep on trying to improve but just do not feel sad and sit around.This essay will delve both the perspective and will end with my own opinion on this matter.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately ,learning foreign languages is a waste of time ? To what extend do you agree or disagree

Learning a foreign language may be unnecessary after we found translators.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than other experiences we may have in life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

When we are brought to this world, we possess traits from both parents.The odds turn out to be the traits, that are displayed the most in that individual.Although, it is very common for the offspring to gain other characteristics as he/she grows up, these characters are merely noticable.They are gotten from learning and environmental changes, and always tend to be forgotten or unused.It is of this fact, that scientist adjudge that traits possessed as a child is given birth to, poses much more effect on the child's development or do they really ?In my opinion, they really do.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too much choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lots of choices have more open door for further for human being. In this fast updating era, every field sector should upgraded immensely and get much more outdated opportunity for the people. In this upcoming paragraph, i will truly prove this statement.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, working becomes a time-consuming activities for employees, giving them a minimum spare time to exercise. If this behaviour becomes more frequent, it might risk their well-being. In thi essay, I will discuss the potential symptomps and provides the possible solutions to this problem.

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Problems with environmental pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. discuss cause and effect and Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.

As the world is growing day by day, there are advantages and disadvantages. One of the main disadvantages is the emerging environmental problems. These natural issues have become a real concern that most of the developed and the developing countries are taking initiatives to solve the current issues or finding alternatives to overcome the situation.

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Some people believe that we succeed in sport due to our inborn talent. Others argue that continuous working on oneself is a key to success. What do you think?

Some people agree that talented athletes were born gifted. Others argue that raw talent is not the main feature that helps sports players to master a sport skill. In my opinion, despite the fact that being born with special talents is very beneficial, the skills that contribute to success in one's sports path are made from effort and determination.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

International tourism has had adverse effects on the local community and environment. However, the benefits associated with tourism are phenomenal. Personally, the advantages remain far more significant.

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