IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 967

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to the rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. To what extent would you support or reject this idea You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In these modern times, it has been argued that employees aged above 50 do not respond to the fast transforming ideas in the recent working environment and this leads to the preference for younger employees. I completely reject this statement with persuasive reasons and exemplars that can be put forth. First of all, older employees over 50 are keenly interested in the trend-new workplace as much as younger employees because it’s related to task performance. To be specific, in general, these workers aged above 50 are working as managers who are responsible for making better achievements in their work field. Moreover, in recent years, the conditions of the workplace have become a crucial part of business. This is because tons of studies have proved that a working environment can encourage workers to accelerate better results in their task. Take Google for example, engineers are guaranteed a creative and innovative office environment to create excellent achievements by executiv...

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s world, with the economy population improvement, the quantity of waste generated is also on rise. However, there are some actions the government can take to support minimase this fact, such as education and fines aplication.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be compelled to vaccinate their children against common childhood diseases? or do individuals have the right to choose to vaccinate their children?

A group of people believe that vaccination to minors could have adverse effects, So, they argue that vaccination to children is not mandatory. Though there are some disadvantages like side effects and counter productive nature of the vaccines, there are also some advantages that should be considered before we conclude that vaccination is not compulsory for people below the age of 18.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

Children that growing up in some cultures are often told if they try hard enough, they will get anything they want. These word might encourage them to work hard and keep trying until they achieve it. On the other hand, children could suffer from metal health problems after pressure themselves not to fail again.

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Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Few people are of the opinion that, increasing the legal age limit of driving cars and motorbikes is

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Nowadays, there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?

More and more people are having the own cars are dramatically increased for the last two decades. It is more comfortable and convenient for owners as a result, our surroundings are affected enormously such as air pollution. However, I think benefits of this trend for individuals come over it's drawbacks.

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Crime has been rising amongst young population in many countries. Provide cause and solution.

Nowadays, in many parts of the world, adolescents tend to perform serious misconduct against the legislation. The lack of opportunity for further education after high school, which led to unemployment, may be a prominent reason behind the issue. Despite this, providing aid for further studies and training may help overcome the rise of crime rates among the youth. This essay will discuss aforementioned causes and solutions to the issue.

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What effects smoking has on human body? Should be banned in public places?

There is no doubt that smoking is hazardous to human body and can lead to various diseases. Moreover, there is a vast majority of people, who are of the opinion that smoking should be prohibited in public places. In my opinion, though smoking is harmful for human beings, still should be banned completely.

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Prison is the best way punishment. Do you agree or disagree?

Prison can never be a best way to punish.If you have to discipline someone and you decide to do it through other way,it can be accepted.being confined to a particular place would not totally work in all cases to show you do not agree with a partcular act.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has the technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In comparison to other global industries, the healthcare industry has one of the most complex infrastructures, with changing relationships between patients and clinicians therefore, there is a continuous demand to update health professionals' knowledge of healthcare quality and management so I had made my decision and spent two years studying hospitals administration academic diploma at KFS university.

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Some people think that it is better to build more public parks and sports facilities in new towns rather than shopping malls. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The enthusiastic life simulates the urban developments in building more public parks than shopping malls. I partly agree with this viewpoint for its benefit to citizen’s health, but it cannot be denied the revenues of shopping malls.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. with this view

Child care is considered as one of the most important as well as a complicated job for any parent. It involves a variety of factors such as understanding kids' behaviour, needs, wishes and so on. It is not a skill that generates instantly when one becomes a parent. I strongly believe that every parent must take a class which helps them to be good parents.

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Many Countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

Migration from countryside to urban areas has been a popular phenomenon in many nations of the world for many years. There are some reasons and impacts on city’s residents which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

People’s opinions differ on whether children should be given homework. While there are strong arguments against this statement, I support the people who agree with homework.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these TV shows and books are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowdays,human beings prefer different movie categories from comedy to paranormal activities.In several countries,books and serials that involve crime and drama are becoming more admirable compering to others.In this ,essay I will elaborate the reasons that made this phenomena happen and my opinion on it.

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Some people think happiness/emotional health is a way to have a good life. Others feel that Physicalhealth is a better way of having good live... Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a pervasive notion these days that it is crucial to be healthy in order to be fully happy with you life. While there is an opinion that phisical health importance prevails over the mental state, others claim that mental well-being is vital. In this essay, I will examine both views and give my opinion that both aspects are relevant for being completely satisatisfied with your health.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem

Recent advances in science and technology have contributed immensely to the development of the agricultural sector. H owever, that it h as been obse rved a larger percentage of the world population suffer from hunger. This is as a result of the lack of manpower and scarcity of farmlands for cultivation . ese along with solutions discussed in the will be next paragraphs.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotions and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products.

Huge companies have a lot of finances to promote their brand, therefore society tends to buy products from famous companies. There are many issues that this tendency could bring to us. In my opinion the most important are decreasing number of small and middle business companies and monopolization of global markets by a few corporations. In this essay I will explain my thoughts and provide relevant examples of them as well as propose some solutions.

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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Television is one of the best medium to influence youngsters to learn about outside world. It is believed, children learn much faster through the use of technology. However, in recent past, the content creators have resorted to showcase more voilence on television. Sparing the thought how regressively it may impact thought process of adolescents.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, time management skill has been highly requested in school and companies. With this ability people is free to choose different path but get the same result at the due date. It is agreed that students should be authorized to decide their own period to study and to play, being able to manage their time. Analysing the fact that students are the future workforce as well as that they need to learn to be independent will explain this.

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