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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that college study should have no fees for every student. This essay totally agrees with this statement because there is no value in free education and student should charge fees as per their family income.

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Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

Teen years are the most significant and complicated in every human’s life. It’s causes may be very different such as problems with school, parents and friends. Therefore parents and teachers should help them to deal with their issues.

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Many people are copying celebrities from magazines and on TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy celebrities?

It is well known that stars have a vibrant influence on the mind of humanity. Repeating the interesting persons on the fashion magazines and trendy websites has become popular. It happens due to the radical desire to be like their idols. However, copying them can lead to terrible consequences like the destruction of individuals and losing themselves in the pursuit of a repetition of the famous people.

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Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not enough physical exercise. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures are there to this problem?

In recent years, the issue of inadequate physical activity has attracted the public’s attention. Many health experts suggest that a sedentary lifestyle has experienced the significant trend, leading to several problems. Therefore, this essay will look at some factors contributing to these causes and suggest some feasible approaches to cope with them.

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Is it the government's responsibility to assist people to learn?

I don’t think so. I believe that adults are generally mature and responsible. They are aware that learning something can be beneficial in their future. Thaty’s why even if there are some difficulties, they try their best to continue. However, there are some grown-ups who discontinue learning due to weveral reasons. They are probably unmotivated or face a lot of issues that affect their desire to learn. (모답 참조)

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Is it the government's responsibility to assist people to learn?

There are various things that I want to learn, but French is the one that first pops into my mind.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Technology is widely used and is available everywhere. Having a computer has been one of the minimum requirements when studying and there is a notion that the role of the teacher will disappear immediately from the classroom. In my opinion, though it is establishing, that may not be successful as the domain knowledge is not the only thing which has to gain from a teacher; there are a lot of manners, disciplines, and conventions to get. In this essay, I'm going to elaborate on two sides and convince you why I stand out saying schoolmasters can never be disregarded.

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People can live and work anywhere they want to choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays the transporting sector and the communication technology shows big development in all around the world. it makes it to everyone easy for doing jobs and stay whichever location they feel comfortable.the advantages are definitely overweight the disadvantages.in the following ,paragraph I will share my explanations with my opinion. Firstly,it is very important to communicate in ...

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Sports are certainly important and beneficial to people, although there are some sports that use violence and cruelty. These include boxing, wrestling, UFC, car racing, MMA etc. Some people find these sports very violent. That's why they have become so they had spread over the world?

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

A high number of professional sports players are using substances that are illegal, to improve their performance. The primary cause of this phenomenon is increased competition in their field and game pressure, and the most viable solutions are awareness camping of health issues and introducing a strong policy.

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Some people say the Olympic Games are not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

If sports is a way of life, then the Olympic Games personifies it. There are some who think that the Olympics are losing relevance, whereas others think that they are still significant. Not only this essay will discuss both views, but also it will answer why I support the latter view.

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Some people think that formal education should start for children as early as possible, while others think that it should not start until 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays it is hard to imagine a modern society that could live without education. Reading today is one of the most essential skills for getting information and co-operate with others, perhaps its compulsory to expand the knowledge base as early as possible. The answer to the question remains, when should pupils begin formal education?

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Now a days people have a contentious argument over the popularity rise of crime novels and TV serials. The public have their own justification why this type of drama lead an important role in their life however I would like to emphasize my personal notion about the sudden inclination of popularity among the spectators. And how this affect our life.

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With the increasing popularity of calculators and computers,sstudent literacy is decreasing dramatically. What are the positive and negative effects the progress of science and technology brought about

In this modern era, the technology become integral part of individual's Life.

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In most part of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.

Everybody would like to have a smooth journey from where ever he or she is going , down to their destinationS. This alone makes one happy and interested to go anywhere in the world. The case is different today as the crowd face this every day and it is very surprising that, you will not even understand the cause of this even after you pass the scene.

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Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family . Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?What other factors should be considered?

It is opine by some people that their should be based on wages, in order to give security for their family. Although, wealth is necessary to complete basic needs, yet comfortable environment and job satisfaction are also matter of concern while they are choosing job.

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Some people say that spending time to develop a successful career is the most important thing. Other say the spending time with friends and family is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Education is a vey rudimentary requirement when considering individuals. some people percive that acquiring skills would be helpfull for the fucture,jobs such as studying acadamic subjects or inerpersonal communication is crucial thing, but it provides the higher pay opportunities.while other side of the pople providing their time and priority to their loved ones and family. which this one provides moral, support and happiness.in this essay will discuss my stance to supporting to the topic in further paragaraphs.

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univerity students are incresingly stydying abroad as part of their studies.do the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Studying abroad has increased over the years for university students,we will discuss the advantages and disvantages of the same.

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some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sport stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of jop should be highly paid?

Entertainers are known with high salaries by people.This sector is very famaous in terms of high incomes. I agree, they are paid too much money to perform their professions.

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Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

In this contemporary world, smart devices have become an indispensable part of our daily lives. In my perspective, these devices bring both merits and demerits to people.

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