IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 104

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, such as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

When you living in a foreign country, you have to speak with their language and you face serious social and practical problems as well. I completely agree with this idea and you have to deal with different problems.

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How do you feel about the impact of technology on social isolation? Give some examples to support your view.

Social isolation due to technology, is a part of the rising debate of our current human world. I believe that the impact technology has had on social isolation has been really detrimental, making individuals comfortable being alone scrolling through social media or preferring videogames over social meetings, this due to the secondary-effects caused by addiction to technology, some examples are, anxiety, depression and emotional instability, that as a consequence, lead to social isolation.

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Teaching art in schools also improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that in the contemporary world, the individual nation provide education to the youngsters on top priority while, other population thinks that giving education to the aged guy who cannot read or write is essential to the community which require additional funding. Thus, I assent to the notion which further leads to the logical conclusion.

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In order to study at universities students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all of the students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the present day, tuition fees has become one of the most important thing at university. Despite having scholarship, student still need to pay for the facilities and other extra payment for the education. It is disagree that not all of the students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Analysing two sides of the coin about the tution fees will prove this.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching T.V . However, TV cannot replace the book as a learning tool,which is why children are less well educated today,to what extent do you agree with this statement ?

Increasing of well-educated children is because of prefering whatching T.V instead of reading books,as well as, more time are spent on T.V progerams by children.I fairly agree with this statment due to two reasons. First there are a lot of non-beneficial shows on T,V and second, lack of consideration can be introduced by advertisment on T.V when watching an educational program.

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Please evaluate my writing task based on IELTS band descriptors for writing task 2. During your evaluation, please act as a 20-year-old-experienced IELTS examiner

Congested area has become a major problem in metropolitan area, and some believe that reducing their intensity to work, study, and shopping is the best way. I completely disagree with the given idea which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that it is better to accept unwelcoming position which might be caused by lack of money or concern related to work. While others believe the opposite, they agree it is better to overcome these issues and try to improve such position. In the following essay, I will be discussing both these views.

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The most important reason for a young person to attend a university is to increase the amount of money that he/she will earn in future. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that for many individuals the key to possess a high level of income laid in obtaining the university degree. I entirely agree with viewpoint for a number of reasons, which be outlined below.

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In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that children can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In these days many people think that the internet help in many things and give lot of informations so they said that internet alternative to study at schools and that study at home on the internet would be more helpful. In my opinion study at school so important for students in both social and educational terms. So in this essay we will discuss many reasons which illustrates the non-acceptance and support of this opinion.

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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a ‘gap year’, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As everyboday knows, school times can be so boring for some students. They waiting gap year to get rest and travel another county or city. On the other hand, some student believe that it is wast of time for their life or univercity, they wants to join life very early. I strongly believe that it is needs for every students. I am going to expline some reasons about them in that essay.

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Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the important jobs in the world are doctors, nurses and teacher which support community and help them. While some people spend money more on sports and entertainment. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement and I will explain more about why should people give cash to doctors, nurses, and teachers.

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Some people think that the main purpose of school and university education should be to prepare people for work. Others, however, think that the true role of education is to make us better citizens. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

School is the best and first place in which student learn and build up their careers as they gain the knowledge related to different works and then choose any one among from them according to their interest. Nonetheless, on the other hand, these learner primary become good human bring because moral and human values are taught over there. In the following essay, I will deeply explain the both side of the statement and at last drop my opinion.

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Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whilst many think that modern technologies, such as computers should be added to our educational system . I believe they have some noticeable disadvantages in term of risks to students.

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Many studies have shown that most criminals have a low level of education. Some people say that to reduce the crime rate, criminals must be educated within prisons. It will improve their prospects of employment when they are released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Majority of people are talking about the crime rate which is rapidly growing from last few decades, however few of them believes, it can be handle, if government provide education in the caves to those who commit crime. Similarly, I too agree with this idea due to change in their views and thought.

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As a part of their education, individuals should spend a period of time living or working in another country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People have to spend some of their time to live or work in other countries as part of their education. This essay attempts to shed the light of the merits and demerits of this educational journey before concluding that the abroad experience is important to broaden perspective.

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in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this era, it's common for companies to always up to date their products with new trend and style by advertisement. It seems there are some arguments on both perspective that will be discussed in the essay.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large portion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are to many individuals feel that whether the governments should takes a significant amount of money from the residence in order to upgrade facilities. Others feel that high range payments of taxes are unwelcome strategy. I am totally disagree with these statments, but in some cases it's might helps for short terms.

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When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dwellers healthy has been a controlversary problem back at the age to now, people often stay at home and starring at the screen all the time. But nowadays, we often see more public parks and sports facilities rather than shopping centers. I totally agree with this statement and this essay will talk about it.

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Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.

The plans draw the conclusion from a survey about the health centre has changed since 2005. Overall, plan B gives information on increasing some rooms and several new areas in a building. Also,the size of the garden and the car parking have altered.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

There is an ongoing debate regarding the emphasis on vocational training over university education, with the argument that qualified professionals like electricians and plumbers are readily available. I strongly disagree with this perspective, as I firmly believe that university education plays a pivotal role in cultivating skilled workers, surpassing the contributions of vocational centers.

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