IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 103

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Most artist earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that government should give funding to an artist who have low salary to help them to continue their work. I totally disagree with that statement and discuss the reason why this isn't best way to help our artist in the essay.

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Other ordinary people fell that government workers are underrate and should be paid more mainly when other human like self government workers are paid more money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do You agree with this topic ? Who and what criteria should be used to decide this problem and how much people are paid ?

Now people understand that self government people receives more money than people who working to persons. Film actors and singers company bosses and others who work like this sphere give to people just fun, smile and good mood , however nurses and doctors ,teachers , firefighter they self human life and give knowledge.

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Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

In the present day, there are a lot of costly products outhere, which is essential for everyone. The lion's share of that is about how much do we need to spend for cell phone or medical treatment. It is disagree that price as most important thing to think about when we need to make a payment. Eventually, the more we spend, the more we get so analysing this situation wil prove this.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweight the disadvantages?

There is an ongoing debate about education and the rising ratio of university students learning their courses abroad. Although toturing abroad can have several drawbacks, it is beneficial for the society which overweighs the disadvanteges. The following paragraph will discuss this assertion.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the contemborary era, the technology make the life comfortable more than past decade. It bring the work to home , and bring the teacher for student on a small screen. So, most of people now prefer to work on home, and let their children studying online, indeed because it less expense and suitable. In my opinion it is a negative development. In this essay, I will discuss why it takes a neagative way and demonestrate the reasons.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent days, research point that teenagers like to communicate with their friends on social media rather than meeting them on face to face. In this essay, I will discuss this case with pretty idea to limit their interacting on social media and push them to meet each other in the realty world.

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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?

These dayes, it becomes easy to doing anything through the internet even studing or making a busniness without any efforts.It has advanteges and disadvanteges.I will discuss this in detail in my essay below.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In contenmbrorary era, the average of offence books and tv shows start increasing wildely. They have a different asbects why it became popular. In this essay, I will illusturate the reasons of why it famous and I point my view about this genre and how it can affect the society.

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Information about the age distribution of the population of France and India is provided in the diagram in percentages.

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Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often considered that in the contemporary era, a few individual thinks that a person can succeed more in equal communities. Whereas, many trusts that single one's performance can make them successful in their life. In my, an inclined, the child will get achievement by his or her own hardwork. Thus, this essay will elaborarate on both notions which further leads to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that the purpose of education is to make individuals useful to society, while others think that education should help people pursue personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.

Some individuals claim that the main purpose of education is to make citizens beneficial for the society and brings their concerns in a distinct way. There have been, however, the others have argument that education should assist people to achieve their goals and personal ambitions. To me, it is logical that subscribe the second claim.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages.

It is often considered that the threat of nuclear explosions maintains the nation peace. Whereas, in some cases, this technology can be dangerous for the mankind. Thus, this essay will elaborate on both positive and negative sides which further leads to a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that it is better for kids to learn with online educational materials, while others believe kids should learn with hard copy/printed educational materials. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are individuals who hold a view that online texts are beneficial to studying for children. However, other people assert that papar educational materials are better for kids. This essay will explore the advantages and the disadvantages of both arguments, and I will explore my postion that the merits on studying with online materials are significantly outweigh the demerits, in terms of convenience, ecology, and the projection in populartity of degital media in the future.

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Some say children should be disciplined at an early age. Others , however, feel this is not a good idea. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

It is often argued that adolescents should be learnt disciplenes in their early stage of life. While others suggest that this learning is not a best idea. I believe that children should be started to learn them at their early stage. This essay will discuss both points of views and express my perspectives in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Many young people leave school with negative attitudes towards learning. What are the causes? How to encourage young people to study?

It is often considered that a number of teenagers abandon school with adverse thoughts towards their subject. Thus, this essay will elaborate the causes and motivate the youngsters to gain informations from the institution.

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Some people believe that it is important give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them.Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some humans say that it is significant to donate gifts to friends and family members to express that we kind about them. Other group of people believe that there are better methods to express which our attention. In light of the presents are really attractive and it helps you that you have an argument with your close person. But there are another ways besides that, that is talking with them or visiting your familiar human. I agree with second group of people.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

These days some teenagers are encouraged to take a gap year either to discover a new country or join to work before enter to the tertiary year. There are both pros and cons to spending a year exploring and getting an experience or feeling unfamiliar with that. In my opinion, it is an opportunity to learn a new language and another culture specifically at that age. Also If they work, they will raise their responsibility and make them more independent.

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Some countries with long average working hours are more economically successful than their countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree?

It is often considered that a few countries believe that working for more time period will give great capital compared to different nations which do not have explanation of company time. Thus I dissent from the notion which further leads to a logical conclusion.

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Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often considered that in the contemporary world, the museums and art galleries are focusing on the workers rather than showing the cultures or creative works from different nations. Thus, I assent from the notion which further leads to a logical conclusion.

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In several parts of the world, humans live near protected areas that preserve and protect wildlife. what problems could this situation cause? what solutions you can suggest?

Some sectors in the unity, peoples who settled in areas with a higher attention which observation and caring of the habitats. The condition might be come with any reasons such a bad environment, many activities of human life, and the law of goverment rules not too strong. I taught that statement can handled by strongest law of rules which organize any activites with a bad potential.

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