IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 108

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? To reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadyes, A large number of folk prefer to use private car. So, It is possiable that in the future people will getting illnesses. In addition, If the people more use personal cars, It will be probable demolishe the nature.However, If you want to go long jurney, It is better that using private cars.

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Some people think that a law should exist so that young people under 18 cannot be out after the midnight, others think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As teenage stuents also have right to enjoy freedom to be out whenever they want, the perspective from some people can be resonable that there would be no need to have a regulation limiting people's time being out regardless age. However, interestingly, other people argue that students still need a law that guides them to stay safe area after a particular time such as 12 am.

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In some countries, owning a home is more important rather than renting one. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Numerous people argue that in some nations possessing a house is necessary than renting one. In my view, various reasons from be the owner of house and there are benefits from having a home rather than rent instead.

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Some suggest that young people should take a job between school and the university. Discuss what advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

It is argued that youngsters should take an occupation between school and the university, while others think it is not a good thought. I am agree with this idea due to the fact that they can help their family for their universities payments.

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Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ever-increasing point of view regarding the Goverment's fundings must be allocated for important things rather than unecessary activities. It is often argued that they should have invest on other fields to develop the infrastucture of the country. This essay agrees that the Goverment should have make a wise alternative to spend the budgets.

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Some think that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together. Others, however, think that hosting the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The issue of the Olympic games nowadays receives extremely debate topic. Society claims these professional sports can associate people with different country being together while others think being host venue will spend much money which could be used to essential issue. I am going to focus on argument in favor of this before moving to look at those against. In my firm opinion, I believe Olympic funding is beneficial to help citizens build international connections.

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In some countries, some criminal trials are shown on TV so people can watch the trials live. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

In a number of countries, there are many TV shows allowing people to watch lawsuits live. In my way of thinking, the pros of this outweigh the cons. In this essay, I am planning to highlighta several aspects and examples that explain this.

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Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most of university graduates is troubled to find job based on their line of work, there are some factors that may cause this phenomenon happening. I think that lack of jobs opportunity and unqualified standard for experience that needed are the reason why they cannot find work in line with their expertise.

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Some people believe that to become successful in sports one should have a natural talent. Others think that perseverance and practice are a crucial part to success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, the opinion that success in sports depends on talent becomes really widespread, while other people argue that goals could be achieved by a strong desire and repetitive training. It is agreed, that our body can change and our abilities can improve dramatically,therefore each person can gain progress by working out. This essay, firstly , will discuss in what kind of physical activities talent is necessary, followed by an analysis of what qualities are important to be involved in sport.

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A mobile phone plays a significant role. Some people think that it affects medical and social aspects of people’s daily life from the negative side. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cell phone usage, especially the use of smart phones, has skyrocketed over the past decade. For many, using a mobile phone is no longer considered a privilege, it is a necessity. However, I assume that excessive use of these gadgets contributes to increase both physical and mental health illnesses and decrease communication skills.

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People should be allowed to continue to work as long as the want to, and not be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

Career and making money play an essential role in our lives.Yet, some folk believe is not important employees continue to work and not be necessary to retired at a particular age when they get older.I am strongly disagree that workers should be allowed to continue to work as the want to. In this essay, I will explain why.

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In some societies, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? Do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?

It is prevalent in many societies more and more men and women prefer and decide to live alone.This essay will argue that despite living alone make people far away from their families, being more responsible about everything in there life means that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many of them do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

Being in a group age eldelry is not easy particulary when it comes to physical works, it is because they have a physical limitations but that's not the only reason why most of older people don't do physical works, especially exercise even though they were are often told by doctors to exercise. There are a few reasons for this.

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smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the wprld today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, majority of people are died due to over douse and use of drugs in their normal routine, however to overcome this goverment have to takes strict action against it like reduce the supply of product and organization the awareness campaign. I completely disagree with this idea and following essay will support my opinion along.

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Task 2: Some suggest that young people should take a job between school and the university. Discuss what advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

Youngsters prefer to be independent as a person so some of them when they finish school,they maintain a job and make money.Although, there are several benefits of having a career between school and university, some drawbacks can not be overlooked.

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"In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In some nations the number of weight of people is rising and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing . In my opinion I believe that because of lack of physical activity and overeating.

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Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation» To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that numerous individuals having difficulties to maintaining their regular life while some digital creators are being paid vast amounts of money. While other believe that some possible steps should be taken by the Government to address this imbalanced issue, I am supposed to be the opposite thinker.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.

Nowadays, There are a technology world's, many T.V programs and ewspapers show the photograpy in their chanels and papers some magazines and article print some pictures to their papres. This type of photos and artical is very usefull to many children's abd society.In this eassy I will dicuss some pros and crons and writing in below paragraph.

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«Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation» To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that numerous individual having difficulties to maintain their regular life while some digital creators are being paid vast amount of money. While other believes that some possible steps should be taken by the Government to address this imbalanced issue, i supposed to be an opposite thinker.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

n the recent years, the rise in crime rates become a major issue in many countries around the world while there are various reasons behind this, there are three factors such as poverty,political instability and inefficient law enforcement. This essay primarily explains about these factors lead to an increase in crime. And how we can deal with the causes.

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