IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 108

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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our friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

I am excited to hear that you got admission to your Masters programme at the Trinity Western University. As a former student, I am thrilled to give you some advice on finding the best place for you to live.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people say earn much money with less free time is beneficial rather than earning minimum money

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Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller town

Population is increasing in the megacities everyday. Thus, habitants have had some issues in large cities. This essay will discuss the two solutions for this problem including diminishing fresh water and good quality housing. The solutions will be discussed later in the paragraphs.

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Many cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solution can you suggest.

In recent years, a lot of towns have trouble with no houses to send life. Although the government in each cities are tackling this problem, it is too far to solve from the current position. This essay will be about why it occurs and my suggestion for it.

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In many developing countries there is a problems with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this

There are a number of issues related with air pollution and water contamnitation in flourishing countries that cause industration and construction. These are mainly the lack of legal penalty and public awareness. There are variaty of solution which should be implemented to tackle these problems.

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Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Fun fact. It would seen many years we are talking about digital transformation. Nevetheless, some companies haven't finished this process. As I could see, some of them are trying to start with everything at the same time, but, in my opinion, it could lead to more complexity. For example, if you don't have a clear, reliable, transperance, and manageble data, no one Data lake will help your business. And I see the following activitieas as the first step of inventory and creating the basment for the successful transormation:

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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays increasing exported to the others countey for a long way. The majority of people believe that eating other countries' foods is more and more cheaper. I think it is a disadvantage and I will discuss bout that.

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Some people think that governments should be responsible for carrying out and controlling scientific research rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that some people think that government should be responsible for carrying out and controlling scientific rather than private campanies,this essay strongly agree with this opinion because off the safety and for more protection to people who work into this scientific research that include private information such as medical and more ,firstly there are many companies that have geniuse people who work to do research that helped the government to succeed my suggestion would be that government work with private companies to provide them with security staff and to keep them save however the most important thing that people should focus on is how they are keeping the research in save hands, secondly companies must ask the government to do their researchers and provide them with the information when necessary, for example some companies works with their government and provide them information about how their work is going and assist them , in conclusion I strongly agree with thi...

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The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year.

In contemporary times, plenty of schools amended their procedures instead of conventional education. While some people argue that it is the best way to enhance pupils' knowledge in education, others believe that it is a detrimental method for individuals. This essay will examine the view and argue in favor of the former.

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The diagram showa how plastic bottles are recycled

The process explains the way in which plastic bottles are recycled.

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In some countries , owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Interestingly , owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people really there

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more ans more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brans . what are the reason?is it a positive or negative development.

Everyone like going shopping, buying for new clothes, accesories and others. Nowadays society like buying things from well known brand. Although buying the affordable stuff is profitable but buying the famous stuff is has a good impact for some reasons that i will explain in the next paragraph.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this statement?

It is debatable whether the most prominent aim of science is improving the lives of individuals or not. I generally agree with this point of view; however, its effect on nature should be taken into account.

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The efficientfunctioning o f society is based on rules and laws. Society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society functions well if the individuals are free and do what they want to do is right up to some extent whereas it is important to impose strict rules and laws if government wants to make it a better place to live. Although, it is every citizen's responsibility to follow rules and regulations to run their surroundings smoothly. People claiming that the benefits it offers are no match for its drawbacks.

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In some countries, birth rates are falling and experts say that by 2050 these countries will have far more adults aged 65 and over than children under 15. What problem might this cause in the future? Can anything be done to solve this issue?

Birth rates are falling down in some countries and experts forecast that in 2050 aged people far more than children under 15. This essay firstly say that population fall will might be a problem in future and then state that population growth is the probable solution.

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In the future people will read only online and no one will buy printed newspapers. to what extent do you agree od disagree?

Technology has affeted the lives of human being in various ways, that is why, some masses commence that in upcoming era there will be more reliability on online news and it print media is going to extinct. I agree with this statement upto large extent but old generation may keep the printed newspapers alive.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are plenty of way to master a skill either by pursuing a degree or practice trainings. Both of it has their own strengths and weakness for future career. I personally would rather choose to study in university if compare to on job hands on trainings.

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Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking or baking. For them, it is better to study their chosen occupations in high school rather than regular subjects. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Nowadays, after leaving school some like to go to university, while others enjoy going to vocational school because of the following benefits. the most important advantage is that vocational education provides a shorter of study. For example, if you are keen on vocational training, you will have the job sooner than the university. Another strength is that vocational school helps us develop practical skills. For instance, while we study at a vocational academy, we will do apprenticeship many times. It is very useful because it helps us gain experience and develop our practical skills. The final strength is that vocational education costs less than university. All in all, vocational training is the way which has many benefits.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive and negative impact on society?

The development in AI and robots fields are altering almost work of humans in most of the big company. It is the writer of this essay who contends that this is a adverse influence in the near future due to the significant changes in amount of jobless people in all fields.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive and negative impact on society?

The development in AI and robots fields are altering almost work of humans in most of the big company. It is the writer of this essay who contends that this is a negative influence in the near future due to the significant changes in amount of jobless people in all fields.

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