IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 106

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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"Prevention is better than cure" Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

According to, World Health Organization, health is considered as physical, mental, and social wellbeing. Although, in today’s world, there are many treatments for almost all the illnesses, I believe prevention is better than cure. Therefore, I completely agree to the given statement and in this essay, I will discuss further regarding my answer.

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“Intelligence is an important quality of a leader”. To what extent do you agree?

One of the main character of the leader is Intelligence. I entirely agree with the statement that leader should be smart and in this essay I will try to do my best to explain.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, more and more people have tried to take risks in their professional lives and their personal lives. Some people think taking risks is an advantage, but in my opinion, I think the disadvantages of taking risks outweigh the advantages.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Although that taking risky movements to change your life is something very hard, but the advantages of it in the long term will make you happier. While staying in the same position might lead to mental issue.

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More and more people are buying food that is ready to eat rather than choosing to eat home-cooked food. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Although, many people believe that it has more benefit to eat frozen or prepaid foods than home made. I think in a reverse manner and disagree with the given statement. I think making food at home is not juast cost less but is more healthy and provides the needed portains.

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Some people prefer to travel by car while others prefer to take the bicycle. Which of these do you prefer? What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by a car and a bicycle?

Traveling is part of our life, now in our days, does not matter if we travel to work, to visit someone, or to some exotic places, we are allways travell.

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What is it in the mass media that has negative effects on teenagers and what measures should governments take to solve this problem?

In todays world, the social media plays a critical and inseparable role in our lives. Therefore, it can affect us in negative ways, specially, the younger generation. These impacts could be caused by inappropriate or misleading information in different topics, also it can create some unrealistic expectations concering their lives and values.

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Some people say that death penalty is the only way to decrease the rate of crime. while others believe that there are other better ways. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

In modern society, increasing number of people have differing ideas as regards to the death penalty as a sole diminisher of crime rate. One side believes that death penalty is the only method to decrease crime rate while others argue that there are better ways for reaching the same ultimate goal. However, I would argue that the death penalty would be worse choice.

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Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, the Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about online courses. However, the advantages of this method in comparison with conventional learning are still controversial. I agree with the view that students can benefit more from state-of-the-art technology instead of traditional education for the following reasons.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior two children?

The ability to distinguish good and bad should be learnt by children from their childhood. punishments are crucial to assist them how can realising their differences. In contrary, parents and teachers do not have permission to corporal chasts or do wild actions which causes low confidence or feel embarrassmen.

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Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more and more people are consuming mobile phone and computer. But, the skills in communication is losing. I personally agree with this statement. Because people who use these kind of gadgets a lot, have no necessity to talk people in real life and leads to losing communication abilities.

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Some people think that excessive use of smart phones badly affects teenager’s literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

People deem that, pervasive use of mobile phones leads to diminished attention spans, making reading, and writing a sustained challenge for teenagers. I disagree with this notion, and believe that smartphones provide acces to wide range of materials and educational apps, which could potentially enhance literacy skills, and, also teenagers comunicate with the rest of the world at real time, offering them exposure to global languages and culture, which can enhance literacy and comprehension skills.

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some people believe that it is best to accept bad stiuation others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that it better for people who are going through bad time to just accept that. While others say that they should work hardly to change that. I agree with the second point of view, due to the huge impact you will get in the future and also it protect you from mental health problems.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

Several cities around the globe are subscribed the idea of vertical development for residential buildings, others promtote independent houses on larger area. I believe that providing taller residential apartments is the best way for city development as ample reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay will delve into my viewpoint with relevant illustrations.

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It has become very common for people to borrow money. Most people have a Credit Card, a mortgage and often they will buy a car on credit as well. Is this a good idea is it too risky? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The trend of borrowing from bank getting increase. Majority of people borrow credit to payoff their mortgage and car loan. Some people believe its good think as they us credit money to generate more money However, I believe, the fact cannot be neglected that it cause mentally pressure and more chance of fraudulant activities.

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New forms of money are becoming extremely popular nowadays. Is this a positive development or adding risk to the system? Should new money technology face greater regulation and scrutiny?

These days new forms money is becoming a famous, also this is not better because money is possible a forgery by individuals.

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in spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry problems and solutions

Nowadays we life in world had discover high advanced agricultural methods, despite that fact, world wild their is people still facing hunger every day. Therefore, they can not purchase it, and even if they do they could not preserve it in a propriat way.

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Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping kids with school work, others think that they should allocate more time to play sports with their kids. Discuss the both these views and give your own opinion

Spending time with our children plays an essential role in all their life. While some people argue that assisting children in academic tasks lies affirm foundation for their future success, some believe that dedicating more time in sports activities emphasise more holistic development of children. In my point of view, I think that there should be a balance between educational and physical development that is lead to comprehensive growth of a child.

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some people who go to work abroad for a period of time take their family with them. Does it have more advantages than disadvantages for individual and their family?

A lot of people are working abroad becuas the have to get more a good amount of many to spourt there familys. It may sound not hard to do but it is hard for so many people.familys could get confused from the differant place they are in it may be far from home it that would leed to in issue.

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These days, in many counties fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Nowadays, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools.A general ago, teaching in a high school was considered an extremely well-respected and popular job.

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