IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 109

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause and what are the solutions.

The older people need employment but more compation with young that because the thinks that know about the position of the job more than the old people because donot know about anything in this life that is from the young people thinks

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances. What are the causes of this phonomenon and what are the some of possible solution

Nowadays most ot professional sport .there is increase of the singinfact of athletes using a banned substances in this essay I will discuss the problem and solution this one

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience to support your arguments

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience to support your arguments

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvato ntages of this development? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience to support your arguments

There are no objective fact that this statement about studing aboard is prevalent in our reality because of its importance . Most people agree with this statement because of its many benefits. Some of the people highlight its disadvanages first. I would like to discuss about this statement of the advanatges and the disadvantages in my next paragraphs.

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There has been a debate on whether we should let everyone have access on any data as much as we can in different subjects such as science related articles and research,economy

There has been a debate on whether we should let everyone have access on any data as much as we can in different subjects such as science related articles and research,economy and businesses around the world and the vast world of academy.Meanwhile,others stand against this statement and believe some of these datas must be kept from public due to the fact that these are valuable and important.This essay will discuss both sides veiws with its opinion at the end.

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In some places the old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this 21st century, there is a clear hierarchy between the age of the old and the young. The writer contends that it is vital to invest in the improvement of the younger generations rather than considering estimating the old people's values.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some areas elderly people are valued, otherwise, young people are more important in other countries. However, I think youth is going to be crucial in future.

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n some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that whether the old or the young is more essential varies in different parts of the world. The writer personally lean himself in priotirizing the seniors as they have had sacrificed their young age for the country’s development.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that rich nations should allow more refugees in their country and help them with their basic needs. This essay completely agrees with this statement because they have enough money and they can offer better opportunities for them.

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some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution , others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the modern life, international car-free days role a vital play . It is a best choice to reduce pollution as well as reduce accidents. However, some people suggest some other ways. I would argue that it is better if having suitable international days which banning cars

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Some people think it is more important to provide parks and sports facilities than to provide shopping centers in these new town for people to spend their free time. To what extent doo you agree or disagree?

There are who people concern it is significanly to provide parks and sport areas instead of built mall areas in new town for people spend their relax time. In my prespective, I agree with this statement because it will help people not only have a relax time but also have a healty life and economical.

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Working from home is better than office. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that working from home is more beneficial than in an office. This essay completely agrees with this statement because it offers more flexibility and can provide people financial stability.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plant declining? Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved

The decline in the number of wild animals and trees cause of stress for many countries and problems affecting to the environment. In this essay, I will discuss about reasons which damage to the natural habitat.

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Nowadays, there are many individuals who wants to self-employed. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In Today's world ,there are more indviduals that wants to be self - employed . I believe that working by yourself definately outweigh the disadvantages . In this essay , I will share both merits and demerits .

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Employees Who Are Engaged In Their Work Have Happier Home Life

Psychology researchers at Kansas State University conducted investigations into the correlation between people’s positive work experiences and their family interaction. The survey revealed that engagement in work and mood in daily lives had mutual interaction. The investigation also unveiled the facts that this interaction varies from day to day and that the daily dedication to work held a positive effect on well-controlled workloads. Conversely, it was disclosed that negative forms of job involvement like workaholism and work addiction had a negative impact on their home life. Professor Culbertson concluded that whether employees showed positive work-to-family attitudes depended on the management abilities of the organisations.

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Parents are encouraging their children to spend an increasing amount of time on tablets and screens because they think it will improve their technological skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to advanacement of technology , nowdays , guardians are supportings adolescents to spend more time on technology included tablets and screens because they believe that this will improve their technological skills . I think that advanatges of this development does not outweigh the disadvantages , I will explain my reasons with examples in this essay.

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you have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their teo children your language for a year.

I trust you're well. I saw your ad for a language teacher for your kids. I believe I'm a good fit. I know three languages besides my own and I'm learning a new one.

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Shopping should be perceived as a form of self-indulgence rather than about buying things that are necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

With growth of people’s well-being much standards we had in the past are broke down, replaced with something unusual. The statement “In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older” proofs enough this tendency. Let’s reveal advantages and disadvantages of this decision.

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Some people are happy to stay in the same area for their whole life, while others prefer living in many different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that some prefer to live in one place through their whole life which makes them happy , however, other people like to try living in many different locations. Although people by maintaining their position when settling down , have a static social life and they claim moving is so hard, however the majority and I believe that when moving to other places to live people can try different experiences and find many other friends. So I believe living in different places is worth it.

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"Some people think that the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences, so this kind of information should be restricted in the media." Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

There is no different type of objective fact that this statement about some people thinking the detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV has bad influences is prevalent in our reality becuse of its importance. Most people agree with this statement because of its many benefits. Some of the people highlight its disadvantege. I would like to discuss about the advantages and the disadvantages of the statament in my next paragraphes.

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