IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 179

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the education system after the pandemic has changed some schools and universities have started using e-learning such as recorded sessions or virtual meetings by including smartphones and laptops, whereas other schools still use traditional education materials and books, in this essay will discuss both views.

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🔶Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. 🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Advertisement is one of the strategy marketing used by most of the company nowadays to attract both youth and adulties. However, many people believe that advertising product does not give any impact to enhance their sales and end up being ignored by society.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, improving sport facilities to train younger athletes is as important as prodiving a special facilities for the top athletics training. thoungh some argue that it is better to build special facilities to train top athletes, i will argue orderwise.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

The number of people considers that the tourists have to adapt to the host country’s traditions and conduct . However, the opponents of this idea maintains that the countries should accept the ethnic practices and personal freedom of those visiting them. I agree with both notions and would like to elaborate my viewpoint.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Happiness is one of the most important feelings in the life of every person. In society, some people wonder why is it difficult to describe happiness and what should they adhere to reach happiness? I will try to find answer to questions, why people can not describe it and what should they do to reach happiness?

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In recent years, poverty has been existed as a crital problems of all countries.Let's take a glance,scarcity of foods on African countries and even Europes countries is been a very essential unsolved issue.Hence,ill illustrate my opinions about reason or the key to help poverty reducing

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps indicate the changes that has been made to the Grange Park from 1920. In general, some facilities has been added and some has been removed, for example, there is a new entrance in the southeast corner, and rose gardens has diminished to two from three, and also one of them has moved to the central part.

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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly. Why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?

Pupils these days are addicted to more and more watching TV than in the past, which is their day-to-day lifestyle that is missed. It is the problem they are addicted to the use of television. In this essay, I will discuss these problems and solutions.

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Shopping has developed from a necessary activity to a kind of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are numerous people who has done shopping activity not just for fulfill their necessary goods but as a kind of entertainment . In my opinion, I agree with this statement because shopping will help us to relax after a long hour work. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant opinions based on factual premises.

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Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

Some people hold a view that helping other countries is equal to helping ourselves, so many countries with high levels of wealth would love to donate funds to not rich countries. However, this behaviour does not bring advantages to sovle poverty. Personally, I agree with that developed countries should stop giving financial assistance to poor countries, in reverse, they need to take other measures. In this essay, it will expain personal view of this topic and give exmples.

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Some people believe that the best way to increase the road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the issues connected to driving like car crashes and others, people think it's cause of the drivers age. In some extend I agree, but I think it's not only reason to accidents, it's also due to others drawbacks of drivers such as having not enough experience or lack of knowledge.

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It is sad that life is becoming increasingly stressful for most people. What is the reason of this phenomenon and how could this problem be solved?

The past people were more relaxed and felt happier than now due to the modern lifestyle. The technology and science progress are very impressive but are the population be happy now? it is hard to answer that because a large number of the public is living the stressful life and this trend is quite increasing dramatically. Professional and personal life are the main causes and some possible solutions can be solved this trend. This essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Shopping is the favourite free time activity for many young people today. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time rather than shopping?

Owing to technology and advance development, young people became more awareness in fashion and how to be in a nice look therefore they spend more time in shopping rather than doing other benefits activities. This will will articulate the reason of this statement as well as other paremount activities than shopping.

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International tourism has bought enormous benifits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantage of international tourism outweigh the advantage.

Tourism plays a crucial role in the nation's economy and the infrasture development, as a result, over the last two or three decades, tourism sector has been improvised as compared to the past. However, the interntional travel brings more advantages to many locations in the world while there is another point of view that it affects on the local residence and the environment. I do not think the interntional trip has more drawbacks than benefits and this essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Parents must give some motivation their children to learning something more which is related to their field and more time ought to be spent by doing physical acts. I strongly agree this idea, Because physical action is so crucial for infant's growth both mentally and physically. In this essay, it can explored clearly and fully.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more people prefer to study in university for a higher degree of certificate rather than occupationall training, such as electricians and plumbers. In my opnion, I think the later also as important as the former in society, the following contents will list my reasons.

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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air polution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this.

Air pollution is one of the severe problems that should be concerned as effective as possible. While some people believe that international car-free days are an effective approach to reduce the contamination of air polluted. In this essay, I side with those who feel that there are any sensible other measures to deal with that issue.

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Discuss the implications of the growing influence of artificial intelligence on the education system in 2023. Consider the potential advantages and disadvantages, and provide examples or evidence to support your points.

The impact of the increasing influence of artificial intelligence (AI) on the educations system in 2023. The rapid evolvement of advance technology has been a primarily driven in the growing influence of AI our social culture, including education. In my opinion, AI will contribute positively on education in 2023, if we use it with the right way.

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many people think that to become a successful specialist, it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. Do you agree or disagree?

Our brain might not design to learn about all of knowledges in the world. Although someone has a high IQ test will mastery more than one subject, that is better if you have plan to select one of them. I believe that focused on a special subject will has a significant impact to reduce a time and get more changes to reach a success life.

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as well as making money, businesses also have responsibilites. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that businesses is crucial task to improve the responsibilities.

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