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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that students who achieve the highest scorer in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that student's exam performance should be rewarded. While some people believe that the highest scorer should be recoganised by the appreciation others argue that the ward who improved their scores should be motivated through reward. In support the latter view which I will explain in this essay.
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Most people believe that stricter punishments should be given for traffic offenses. To what extent do you agree?

Traffic crime has been increased over the last two or three decades to around the world. Most claim that the hard punishments should provide for who does not adhere the traffic rules and regulations. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay discuss it briefly for the subsequent reasons.
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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Science is a really important aim for society to improve themselves and has given us so many things to learn . I agree with this statement, because it has helped us a lot in life and at work . In this essay, I will explain why.
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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case? Do yo think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many people think that that children in modern era use phones every day. It is because of the huge number of phones that can be easily to found in these days while I personally believe that it is a negative development.
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Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To begin with, the people who are illegal music downloads in internet cause of negative effect on the music industry. For instance, most of the singer spend many time and pay lots of money on their music album or record of music for a unbelievable product. Finally illegal music downloads are similar to be thief. On the other hands many singer earn incalculable money thanks to their concert. This singer or musician have a low opinion while some people downloads the their music on internet by illegal. Because they earn lots of money already so if their music are listening by to other people, they have a wide range admirer.
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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , it has been observed that computers are the widespread devices which can retake teachers in the education establishments . Some individuals agree with this statement but another claim that it is wrong opinion . I am firmly disagree with this point of view .
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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.

in this era, education is the first concern for everyone, especially for the parents. Pros and cons of system education are many argued in the socialize. Some people say girls and boys are better when their parents select separate schools for them but other people say mixed schools are more benefits.
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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Whether studying the science of food has been a controversial topic. On face of it, the advantages seem apparent, but could there be a downside of it?
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Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.

It was late 2017. I was a high school senior. Four of us from the science club developed a raw working model of a Jet Engine for a science fair. While the other members of the group involved primarily on its fabrication, my role, given my penchant for physics, was specifically to research and build the theoretical model of the engine, and then make analytical assessment of its thrust, which I, in the hindsight, did exceptionally well for a high school student. I also served as the lead presenter in the fair. We won the People’s Choice Award, and my interest in Aerospace Engineering got cemented. At early 2018, I became the National Champion in Nepal Physics Olympiad, and it hugely boosted my confidence to succeed in a demanding undergraduate aerospace curriculum.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people contend that having a life in another country which requires to speak local language will bring social and practical issues, nevertheless, from my perspective, it can bring many merits to the society and individuals.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary world, there are many developed and poor countries and lots of time the wealthy countries give money to developing or poverty countries for solve the their many problems such as financial, health, aducation system etc. problems. According to many people this type of solve is not beneficial for them on the other hand some people think about this solution is very crucial. I'll explain my opinion in this essay with my example.
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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Science have a significant impact on our society, either the communication system or the daily supply, such as water and electricity, are all included in this field. However, recently, less students choose science as their major in university. Personally, I think it have several reasons which cause this situation, the following content will list them.
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Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on others planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

During past decades there was arguable point that is there any live creature in this solar system like humans recently space departure in USA confirmed that and showed some evidence so scientist offered that we can send a massege for them and see what happens but another group of scientists said that if we do this we are facing our annihilation .in this essay we discuss both views .
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Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

Box is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. There is an opinion that this sport should be banned. In my opinion, box actually can cause some injuries, but there will be many other bad aspects if we ban it, that is why I disagree.
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Young people often copy the behaviour of famous people, so celebrities should only be allowed to advertise healthy food or drink and should not encourage unhealthy habits such as smoking. Do you agree or disagree?

Young people have a tendency to copy of famous people attitude, therefore celebrities should be a good role model by advertising just healty food or drink and should avoid unhealthy habits like smoking. I completely disagree with this idea, there are some reason for that celebrities has own life and young people have to be more strong character.
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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views

In these days, a lot of animals are in danger of extinction, and governments should take a useful action towards that. Nowadays we have zoos to keep some animals for entertaining aims and also take care of some unique types of animals, and some people say that we shouldn't use zoos as a hobby and earning money for entertaining, but on the other hands, other folks have different thought about zoos, they believes that we should have a entertaining side too, to can earn enough money to keep and care better to animals, and I personally believe if we spend zoos income for animals it will be a positive attitude.
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Although family has a great influence on children's life, it is influences from ourside the hom that play a bigger part in their development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As everyone knows, there are two places where people can be taught - the familay and the society. So there is a debate whether the influences from outside the home that play a more important sector in children's development.
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The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

In recent years, there is a tendency that social media pays attention to negative incidents than positive incidents and some people assert that it is debilitating to the public. This essay strongly agrees with this statement as social media influences people’s feelings and behavior.
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Disposing of waste on streets has become a common problem in many countries these days. What are the cause and solutions of this issue?

Waste management on the streets has become a common issue nowadays. People tend to mess on the Waste management on the streets has become common issue nowadays. People tend to mess on the streets resulting in physical and mental health problems . In order to minimise such trends, social awareness and initiative towards waste management by throwing light on public by the policy maker.
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Many elderly people are no longer after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The population of human beings in the world is growing rapidly, but still, around 40% of it is dominated by groups of elderly people. there is a huge distinguishment between the culture of how the young generation treats elderly people in Asia and America. In Asia, usually, elderly people are being taken care of by their children. So they live in one of their children's houses. But this doesn't happen in America.
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